PEE-MILAN

by jannatjahan on April 19, 2009, 09:30:34 AM
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Dabi dabi jaban me sabd machal raha hai,
na dikh rahin cheentein kahin kadam fisal raha hai
jo gunjati fizaon me wo geet jane kya hai
patthar sa tha jo dil mom me badal raha hai
thaki thaki saanson me raftaar aa gaya hai
dhadkano ko bhi naya jeevan mil raha hai
kyun kaundhti hai bijli hawa ke aahat par bhi
kya kisi ke soch me maann tadap raha hai
hai jo dil me kaid uski janeerein khol do
keh do ki aaj pee se milan ho raha hai
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2009, 09:48:53 AM »
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Very nice Jannat Ji..Keep writing dear.
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salil2002
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2009, 10:06:04 AM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on April 19, 2009, 09:30:34 AM
Dabi dabi jaban me sabd machal raha hai,
na dikh rahin cheentein kahin kadam fisal raha hai
jo gunjati fizaon me wo geet jane kya hai
patthar sa tha jo dil mom me badal raha hai
thaki thaki saanson me raftaar aa gaya hai
dhadkano ko bhi naya jeevan mil raha hai
kyun kaundhti hai bijli hawa ke aahat par bhi
kya kisi ke soch me maann tadap raha hai
hai jo dil me kaid uski janeerein khol do
keh do ki aaj pee se milan ho raha hai
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nice one jannat priy se milan ko bahut hi khoob surati se bayaan kiya hai tumne


mohabbat kii chand rasmo ko aise nibhana hoga
mehboob ko chhanv dekar dhoop mein khud ko tapana hoga

taar dil k chhed kar sangeet sunana hoga
lafz dil k kehkar, oose kissa sunana hoga

raat kii oot mein chhip k beithenge neele gagan k tale
chand kii roshni ka bhi, apne darmiyaan na hoga

is milan kii raat main toot jaayegi sab rasme
inhi rasmo ko naye vaado se humko sajana hoga
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2009, 10:29:21 AM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on April 19, 2009, 09:30:34 AM
Dabi dabi jaban me sabd machal raha hai,
na dikh rahin cheentein kahin kadam fisal raha hai
jo gunjati fizaon me wo geet jane kya hai
patthar sa tha jo dil mom me badal raha hai
thaki thaki saanson me raftaar aa gaya hai
dhadkano ko bhi naya jeevan mil raha hai
kyun kaundhti hai bijli hawa ke aahat par bhi
kya kisi ke soch me maann tadap raha hai
hai jo dil me kaid uski janeerein khol do
keh do ki aaj pee se milan ho raha hai
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bahut accha likha hai aapne Jannat ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2009, 10:30:33 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on April 19, 2009, 10:06:04 AM
nice one jannat priy se milan ko bahut hi khoob surati se bayaan kiya hai tumne


mohabbat kii chand rasmo ko aise nibhana hoga
mehboob ko chhanv dekar dhoop mein khud ko tapana hoga

taar dil k chhed kar sangeet sunana hoga
lafz dil k kehkar, oose kissa sunana hoga

raat kii oot mein chhip k beithenge neele gagan k tale
chand kii roshni ka bhai, apne darmiyaan na hoga

is milan kii raat main toot jaayegi sab rasme
inhi rasmo ko naye vaado se humko sajana hoga

realy nice and very well said Salil ji Applause Applause
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2009, 07:19:38 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 19, 2009, 09:48:53 AM
Very nice Jannat Ji..Keep writing dear.
Thanks celmira dear
u always appriciating me
really grateful to u
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2009, 07:23:51 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on April 19, 2009, 10:06:04 AM
nice one jannat priy se milan ko bahut hi khoob surati se bayaan kiya hai tumne


mohabbat kii chand rasmo ko aise nibhana hoga
mehboob ko chhanv dekar dhoop mein khud ko tapana hoga

taar dil k chhed kar sangeet sunana hoga
lafz dil k kehkar, oose kissa sunana hoga

raat kii oot mein chhip k beithenge neele gagan k tale
chand kii roshni ka bhi, apne darmiyaan na hoga

is milan kii raat main toot jaayegi sab rasme
inhi rasmo ko naye vaado se humko sajana hoga

Hey thanks salil....
Aaj first time aapne mere thread par comment kiya hai
aur cha bhi gaye....Bahut lajawab likha hai
Itna acha kaise likh lete ho ...kuch hume bhi sikhao na...
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2009, 07:28:23 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on April 19, 2009, 10:29:21 AM
bahut accha likha hai aapne Jannat ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2009, 08:24:33 AM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on April 19, 2009, 09:30:34 AM
Dabi dabi jaban me sabd machal raha hai,
na dikh rahin cheentein kahin kadam fisal raha hai
jo gunjati fizaon me wo geet jane kya hai
patthar sa tha jo dil mom me badal raha hai
thaki thaki saanson me raftaar aa gaya hai
dhadkano ko bhi naya jeevan mil raha hai
kyun kaundhti hai bijli hawa ke aahat par bhi
kya kisi ke soch me maann tadap raha hai
hai jo dil me kaid uski janeerein khol do
keh do ki aaj pee se milan ho raha hai
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very nice jahaan....................
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2009, 08:49:55 AM »
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Nice one J J Ji
N equally good response Salil Ji
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2009, 09:30:48 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on April 20, 2009, 08:24:33 AM
very nice jahaan....................
Hey Thanks Aaina ji
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #11 on: April 20, 2009, 09:32:12 AM »
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bohat khoob jannat ji, umda kalam aapki taraf se...
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2009, 09:48:06 AM »
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Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on April 20, 2009, 09:32:12 AM
bohat khoob jannat ji, umda kalam aapki taraf se...
Thanks Dear Saurabh
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«Reply #13 on: April 20, 2009, 09:54:48 AM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on April 20, 2009, 07:23:51 AM
Hey thanks salil....
Aaj first time aapne mere thread par comment kiya hai
aur cha bhi gaye....Bahut lajawab likha hai
Itna acha kaise likh lete ho ...kuch hume bhi sikhao na...
hey thanks diya and rajesh bhai
aur jannat urrf shwetha aap kyun meri taang kheench rahe ho.main toh bahut adna sa shayar hoon

misaale mohabbat di gayi mehfil mein mere naam se
aur chhalak gaye aansu mere haathon k jaam se
maine chaha batana kii main hoon bikhra hua
par lab si liye dekh kar oonhe oos haseen shaam mei
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«Reply #14 on: April 21, 2009, 08:52:43 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on April 20, 2009, 09:54:48 AM
hey thanks diya and rajesh bhai
aur jannat urrf shwetha aap kyun meri taang kheench rahe ho.main toh bahut adna sa shayar hoon

misaale mohabbat di gayi mehfil mein mere naam se
aur chhalak gaye aansu mere haathon k jaam se
maine chaha batana kii main hoon bikhra hua
par lab si liye dekh kar oonhe oos haseen shaam mei
Hey Salil Taang nahi kheench rahi hun  yaar
sach me bahut achha likhte ho...bahut bahut bahut achha likhte ho....
jane kyun unhe apni kaabiliyat par aitbaar nahi hai,
wo karte hai pyaar magar kabhi karte ikraar nahi hai....
jo tutatha hai sheesha koi to kehte hain ki tuta hai dil mera,
rahte hain har pal nazaron ke aage
phir bhi kehte hain milne ke aasar nahi hai.... 
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