PEE-MILAN

by jannatjahan on April 19, 2009, 09:30:34 AM
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salil2002
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«Reply #15 on: April 21, 2009, 10:40:32 AM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on April 21, 2009, 08:52:43 AM
Hey Salil Taang nahi kheench rahi hun  yaar
sach me bahut achha likhte ho...bahut bahut bahut achha likhte ho....
jane kyun unhe apni kaabiliyat par aitbaar nahi hai,
wo karte hai pyaar magar kabhi karte ikraar nahi hai....
jo tutatha hai sheesha koi to kehte hain ki tuta hai dil mera,
rahte hain har pal nazaron ke aage
phir bhi kehte hain milne ke aasar nahi hai.... 
thank u jannat...... and a nice reply dear

chahat hai dhoka , yeh kar k humne dekhi hai
isliye ab kissii par aetbaar nahn aata
aapne vaado ko khud hi tod diya maine
isliye apni shaksiyat par aehatraam nahin aata
koi mujhse poochhe saamne hokar bhi tum kitni door ho
palkon ko yoon hi toh aaraam nahin aata
kal maine dekha tha ek khwab tum bhi oosme thay kaahin 
par wahan bhi sang tha hijaab tera,tu kyun pardanashi nahi aata
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #16 on: April 22, 2009, 07:04:24 AM »
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Beautiful work by JJ and Salil....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #17 on: April 22, 2009, 08:56:43 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 22, 2009, 07:04:24 AM
Beautiful work by JJ and Salil....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks Sajid ji Aapne comment diya meri mehnat kaamyaab huee  notworthy
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #18 on: April 22, 2009, 09:18:37 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on April 21, 2009, 10:40:32 AM
thank u jannat...... and a nice reply dear

chahat hai dhoka , yeh kar k humne dekhi hai
isliye ab kissii par aetbaar nahn aata
aapne vaado ko khud hi tod diya maine
isliye apni shaksiyat par aehatraam nahin aata
koi mujhse poochhe saamne hokar bhi tum kitni door ho
palkon ko yoon hi toh aaraam nahin aata
kal maine dekha tha ek khwab tum bhi oosme thay kaahin 
par wahan bhi sang tha hijaab tera,tu kyun pardanashi nahi aata
Another gud one dear....Too gud Applause Applause
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