Pehla ehsaas!

by salma786 on April 30, 2009, 10:33:13 AM
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Muddato se ek chehra anjana sa,
Lagta tha humko kuch jana pehchana sa,
Koi kashish to hogi unme bhi,
Yun hi nahi lagta rishta purana sa!

Dhadkan se judi hai jaise unki dhadkan,
Jo unke door hone se raftar pakad leti hai,
Jab bhi kareeb ate hai wo meri raho me,
Unki ahat meri sanse bhap leti hai!

Ye Ishq hai ya hai koi meetha dard jo,
Ehsaaso ke samandar me hume dooboti ja rahi hai,
Manzil ki khabar nahi hai hume phir bhi,
Is anjane safar me hume kheeche liye jaa rahi hai!
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2009, 11:11:07 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 30, 2009, 10:33:13 AM
Muddato se ek chehra anjana sa,
Lagta tha humko kuch jana pehchana sa,
Koi kashish to hogi unme bhi,
Yun hi nahi lagta rishta purana sa!

Dhadkan se judi hai jaise unki dhadkan,
Jo unke door hone se raftar pakad leti hai,
Jab bhi kareeb ate hai wo meri raho me,
Unki ahat meri sanse bhap leti hai!

Ye Ishq hai ya hai koi meetha dard jo,
Ehsaaso ke samandar me hume dooboti ja rahi hai,
Manzil ki khabar nahi hai hume phir bhi,
Is anjane safar me hume kheeche liye jaa rahi hai!





Bahut Khoob Bahut Hi Pyara Kalam, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Wo chehra ajnabi sa mere dil ko satata hai,
Din me chain se rehne nahi deta aur raaton
ko bhi jagata hai,

Uski hassi mujhe tadpaati hai, Uski aankhein
pass apne bulaati hai, wo aata to hai samne
par pal bhar me gayab ho jaata hai,

Jaane kyun uski aankhein chup si rehti hai,
uski saansin dheere se kehti hai pyaar hai
ise bhi tumse par ye chipaata hai...

Wo chehra ajnabi sa mere dil ko bahut satata
hai.

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2009, 11:23:06 AM »
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 good wrk salma and shally.......aap dono ne bahut dil se likha hai .....may god bless u .....
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2009, 11:28:51 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on April 30, 2009, 11:23:06 AM

 good wrk salma and shally.......aap dono ne bahut dil se likha hai .....may god bless u .....





Shukriya Salil Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2009, 12:04:41 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 30, 2009, 10:33:13 AM
Muddato se ek chehra anjana sa,
Lagta tha humko kuch jana pehchana sa,
Koi kashish to hogi unme bhi,
Yun hi nahi lagta rishta purana sa!

Dhadkan se judi hai jaise unki dhadkan,
Jo unke door hone se raftar pakad leti hai,
Jab bhi kareeb ate hai wo meri raho me,
Unki ahat meri sanse bhap leti hai!

Ye Ishq hai ya hai koi meetha dard jo,
Ehsaaso ke samandar me hume dooboti ja rahi hai,
Manzil ki khabar nahi hai hume phir bhi,
Is anjane safar me hume kheeche liye jaa rahi hai!




Bohot Khoob Salma
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2009, 12:06:36 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on April 30, 2009, 11:11:07 AM

Bahut Khoob Bahut Hi Pyara Kalam, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Wo chehra ajnabi sa mere dil ko satata hai,
Din me chain se rehne nahi deta aur raaton
ko bhi jagata hai,

Uski hassi mujhe tadpaati hai, Uski aankhein
pass apne bulaati hai, wo aata to hai samne
par pal bhar me gayab ho jaata hai,

Jaane kyun uski aankhein chup si rehti hai,
uski saansin dheere se kehti hai pyaar hai
ise bhi tumse par ye chipaata hai...

Wo chehra ajnabi sa mere dil ko bahut satata
hai.

Shally.



Very Nice reply K. Shael Ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2009, 12:09:31 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 30, 2009, 12:06:36 PM
Very Nice reply K. Shael Ji

Shukriya Celmira Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2009, 01:27:40 PM »
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Bohat khoob Salma...
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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2009, 05:28:38 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai SALMA.. Aapka yeh PAHALA EHASAAS Behad Khubsoorat Hai..!! Usual Smile Lafzon ko Behad Khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai aapne..!!! Bahut Khoob Likha Hai.. Applause Applause

Aur Shally aapne Bhi  Bahut Pyaara Reply Diya Hai..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2009, 09:31:10 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 30, 2009, 10:33:13 AM
Muddato se ek chehra anjana sa,
Lagta tha humko kuch jana pehchana sa,
Koi kashish to hogi unme bhi,
Yun hi nahi lagta rishta purana sa!

Dhadkan se judi hai jaise unki dhadkan,
Jo unke door hone se raftar pakad leti hai,
Jab bhi kareeb ate hai wo meri raho me,
Unki ahat meri sanse bhap leti hai!

Ye Ishq hai ya hai koi meetha dard jo,
Ehsaaso ke samandar me hume dooboti ja rahi hai,
Manzil ki khabar nahi hai hume phir bhi,
Is anjane safar me hume kheeche liye jaa rahi hai!




kya baat hai salam ji bhut khoob.......very nice work.......
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2009, 09:36:04 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on April 30, 2009, 11:11:07 AM

Bahut Khoob Bahut Hi Pyara Kalam, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Wo chehra ajnabi sa mere dil ko satata hai,
Din me chain se rehne nahi deta aur raaton
ko bhi jagata hai,

Uski hassi mujhe tadpaati hai, Uski aankhein
pass apne bulaati hai, wo aata to hai samne
par pal bhar me gayab ho jaata hai,

Jaane kyun uski aankhein chup si rehti hai,
uski saansin dheere se kehti hai pyaar hai
ise bhi tumse par ye chipaata hai...

Wo chehra ajnabi sa mere dil ko bahut satata
hai.

Shally.



nice work shally.........
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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2009, 09:51:28 AM »
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Shukriya Mann Ji & Aaina Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #12 on: May 02, 2009, 11:22:46 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on April 30, 2009, 11:11:07 AM

Bahut Khoob Bahut Hi Pyara Kalam, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Wo chehra ajnabi sa mere dil ko satata hai,
Din me chain se rehne nahi deta aur raaton
ko bhi jagata hai,

Uski hassi mujhe tadpaati hai, Uski aankhein
pass apne bulaati hai, wo aata to hai samne
par pal bhar me gayab ho jaata hai,

Jaane kyun uski aankhein chup si rehti hai,
uski saansin dheere se kehti hai pyaar hai
ise bhi tumse par ye chipaata hai...

Wo chehra ajnabi sa mere dil ko bahut satata
hai.

Shally.



shukriya.... bahoot pyara likha hai apne shally sis Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: May 02, 2009, 11:28:05 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on April 30, 2009, 11:23:06 AM

 good wrk salma and shally.......aap dono ne bahut dil se likha hai .....may god bless u .....




Thanks salil!
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«Reply #14 on: May 02, 2009, 11:29:49 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 30, 2009, 12:04:41 PM
Bohot Khoob Salma
Shukriya Talat sis Usual Smile
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