-----/// Pehli mulaquaat ///----- Hriday

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tumhaaraa   aanchal  sarak  rahaa  thaa , tum  use   bachaa   rahi   thi
main  aakhen  gadaaye  baithaa  thaa  tumpe, tum  sharmaa  rahi  thi

chhoo  letaa  jab   bhi  main   tumhaaraa  haath apne  haathon  se to
tum chhin leti  apnaa   haath   mujhse , aur    fir   muskuraa   rahi  thi

jaise   kuch  khoobsurat sa haadsaa huwaa  ho tumhaare saath us pal
mere haathon se apnaa  haath  chuudaake  usi ko  dekhe  jaa rahi thi

mujhe to  yaad  bhi  nahi  ki  us  din tumne  mujhse  kyaa  baat  ki thi
tumhaari wo  aankhen  yaad hain  bas jo mujhe kuch kahe jaa rahi thi

tumhaaraa  wo  haathon se  zulfon ko hathaanaa,  nazren  jhukaanaa
main thodi  der  tumhe  dekh  letaa  to  tum chehraa  chhipaa rahi thi

tumhaaraa wo kehnaa  mujhse 'chhodo  naa, kyun chhedte ho mujhe'
mere  kaano  me  aaj  bhi   gunj  rahi   hai   jaise  tum  bataa  rahi  thi

haaye, tumhaari maasoom si baatein,  tumhaari  maasomiyat us pal ki
main tum me hi gum thaa, aur tum bhi mujhme gum huye jaa rahi thi

sach,  kuch  alag  saa hi nashaa  thaa us pal kaa hum dono pe hai naa
main thaa nahi khud me, tum mujhe mujhse aur duur kiye jaa rahi thi


*****HRIDAY*****




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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2013, 03:23:34 PM »
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Wah janab bahut khoob likha hai. Very nice
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2013, 03:35:50 PM »
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tumhaaraa   aanchal  sarak  rahaa  thaa , tum  use   bachaa   rahi   thi
main  aakhen  gadaaye  baithaa  thaa  tumpe, tum  sharmaa  rahi  thi

chhoo  letaa  jab   bhi  main   tumhaaraa  haath apne  haathon  se to
tum chhin leti  apnaa   haath   mujhse , aur    fir   muskuraa   rahi  thi

jaise   kuch  khoobsurat sa haadsaa huwaa  ho tumhaare saath us pal
mere haathon se apnaa  haath  chuudaake unhi ko dekhe jaa rahi thi

mujhe to  yaad  bhi  nahi  ki  us  din tumne  mujhse  kyaa  baat  ki thi
tumhaari wo  aankhen  yaad hain  bas jo mujhe kuch kahe jaa rahi thi

tumhaaraa  wo  haathon se  zulfon ko hathaanaa,  nazren  jhukaanaa
main thodi  der  tumhe  dekh  letaa  to  tum chehraa  chhipaa rahi thi

tumhaaraa wo kehnaa  mujhse 'chhodo  naa, kyun chhedte ho mujhe'
mere  kaano  me  aaj  bhi   gunj  rahi   hai   jaise  tum  bataa  rahi  thi

haaye, tumhaari maasoom si baatein,  tumhaari  maasomiyat us pal ki
main tum me hi gum thaa, aur tum bhi mujhme gum huye jaa rahi thi

sach,  kuch  alag  saa hi nashaa  thaa us pal kaa hum dono pe hai naa
main thaa nahi khud me, tum mujhe mujhse aur duur kiye jaa rahi thi


*****HRIDAY*****

wah hriday jee... aap to aajkal kamal damal ka likh rahe hai. each and every day nikar
aa raha hai. excellant work .. bahut bahut mubarak  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2013, 03:41:35 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2013, 06:04:53 PM »
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kya baat kya baat Hriday ji.....bahut khoob......khoobsurat zazbaat jo har pal ko khoobsurat bna de...aise hi khoobsurat palon se sazi hai aapki ye rachna aur sabse khoobsurat aanchal ka zikr...sach mein kya kahe...aajkal ki mostly ladkiyon ko toh iss se parhej hi h....well...bahut hi khoobsurat rachna likhi aapne Hriday ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2013, 06:12:01 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
hriday jee ek lajawab peshkash rahi.dili mubarakbad qubool kare.bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne. jitni tareef kee jaye kam hai.

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«Reply #6 on: January 15, 2013, 03:00:50 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: January 15, 2013, 03:24:49 AM »
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bohut khub hridhay ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 15, 2013, 07:43:58 AM »
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wah wah, dhero dad
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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2013, 08:56:48 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Boby ji.....!!!

Wah janab bahut khoob likha hai. Very nice
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2013, 04:20:34 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Suman ji.....!!!

wah hriday jee... aap to aajkal kamal damal ka likh rahe hai. each and every day nikar
aa raha hai. excellant work .. bahut bahut mubarak  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2013, 08:59:36 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shireen ji.....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Pooja ji....!!!

kya baat kya baat Hriday ji.....bahut khoob......khoobsurat zazbaat jo har pal ko khoobsurat bna de...aise hi khoobsurat palon se sazi hai aapki ye rachna aur sabse khoobsurat aanchal ka zikr...sach mein kya kahe...aajkal ki mostly ladkiyon ko toh iss se parhej hi h....well...bahut hi khoobsurat rachna likhi aapne Hriday ji
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Aqsh ji.....!!!

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hriday jee ek lajawab peshkash rahi.dili mubarakbad qubool kare.bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne. jitni tareef kee jaye kam hai.


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«Reply #14 on: January 23, 2013, 02:54:33 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Prashad ji.....!!!

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