Phir Kyun Rahe Chup

by syednaami on May 08, 2008, 10:14:32 PM
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syednaami
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«Reply #15 on: July 24, 2008, 06:07:31 AM »
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Shukriya Sabah,,, So nice of you... do write again...
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«Reply #16 on: July 24, 2008, 09:51:52 PM »
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Sabah,,, Buhat kamaal ka likha hai,,, buhat pasand aaya... Yunhi aur bhi nikhra nikhra likhte raho...
      
Honi thi muhabbat bas ho gayi,,
Par Izhaar-e-ulfat ko daba diya,,

Anjaan rahne ka sabab kya tha,,
Ki chup rah kar sab daba diya,,

Aankhon se hi kahte sab kuchh,,
Jab iqraar ko dil men chhupa diya,,

Khaamosh rah gaye ya dar gaye,,
Beqaraari men dil apna jala diya..


|Syed Naami|

Teri Ankhoon Mein Appne Liyai Ithni Mohabbat Dhek Kai
Dhar Laagh Raha Hai,
Koy Humse Pyar Karre Yeh Pehli Baar Ho Raha Hai
Issi Liyai Dhaar Laagh Raha Hai,
Teri Bekarari Dehk Kai Mera Bhi Dil Bekarar Ho Raha Hai,
Tu Kahain Ya Na Kahain Teri Ankhoon Mujhse Sab Kuch Keh Dehthi Hai,
Koy Mujhse Pehli Baar Ithni Mohabbat Kar Raha Hai
Issi Liyai Dhaar Laagh Raha Hai,
Kai Woh Bhi Na Mujhe Se Cheen Jayai........
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Pooja
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«Reply #17 on: August 01, 2008, 03:37:43 PM »
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Nice Palkhi and sami
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syednaami
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«Reply #18 on: August 02, 2008, 03:24:09 PM »
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Bahut thanks Shihab baba and Pooja jee.\
Aap kyun kuchh linghenge nahin. -
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Roja
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«Reply #19 on: August 02, 2008, 03:59:41 PM »
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Bahut khoob pallu and Syed ji
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palkhi
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«Reply #20 on: August 02, 2008, 10:28:37 PM »
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thanks every1!
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«Reply #21 on: August 03, 2008, 02:13:41 AM »
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no prob syed naami ji.
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«Reply #22 on: August 03, 2008, 05:34:28 AM »
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               GHAZAL STYLE









Ab subah ka nahin intzaar mujhe, -
Manzil khadi hai saamne mere, -
Dhoondhta hun phir bhi ajnabi raaste, -
Jo khule huey hain darvaaze unke man ke, -
Phansaata hun khud ko kyun band galiyon men, -
Jisse samjha nahin aaj tak maine, -
Uske dil men hain raaz lakhon chhupe, -

Kehne ko betaab bhi hai par na kahe, -
Aisi de qurbaani ki khud hi jale, -
Hans ke chhupaaye saare gile shikve, -
Kisiko apne gham ka ahsaas tak na hone de, -

Poochhe agar koi to baat ko golmol kare, -
Chhupa kar apni aankhon ko aansun poncche, -
Baat hai jo man men dabi kaise bole, -
Uski aah men asar hai itna ki pathar pighle, -
Khaamosh nigaahon se sada pyar ki de, -
Phir kyun rahe chup ab to kuchh bole. -
Phir kyun rahe chup ab to kuchh bole. -



(Syed Naami)

                       



 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Kaamal ki ghazal likha hai aapne Syed..

Shaam aate hi aapki yaad dil me satati rahi
Kuch dil ki baat dil me dabi rahe aur machalti rahi
Kaise kahe dil ki baat aapse joh tanha sambhalti rahi
Chup hokar humne dil ki baat aapse kahe kaise aapne poocha nahi
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«Reply #23 on: August 03, 2008, 08:28:51 PM »
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Bahut khoob pallu and Syed ji

Shukriya Roja jee, aap ka mamnoon hun. -

thanks every1!

Thanks Sabah, so nice of you. -

no prob syed naami ji.

"No problem" for what?



 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Kaamal ki ghazal likha hai aapne Syed..

Shaam aate hi aapki yaad dil me satati rahi
Kuch dil ki baat dil me dabi rahe aur machalti rahi
Kaise kahe dil ki baat aapse joh tanha sambhalti rahi
Chup hokar humne dil ki baat aapse kahe kaise aapne poocha nahi


Bahut kamaal Honeyrose jee.

Yaad na karao mujhe woh shaam, -
Zahar-e-dil pee chuka hun main, -
Na kahna haal-e-dil hum se kabhi, -
Alfaaz jal chuke ab kya kahun main. -
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Roja
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«Reply #24 on: August 04, 2008, 02:59:09 AM »
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syed ji wah kya likhe aap ne ...sach bahot hi acha likhe....
aap k yeh rachna padh ke mann me jo aaya likh rahi...
plz galti ho to maaf karna...

raat ka andhera hi subha ki roshni mein payi
raha se anjan nahi hoon.manjil bhi saamne thi
dil kehta hai badhao kadam ruk kyun gayi
khud ko samjhane lagi wahan tujhe jana nahi...

khud ko rokne ki kosish mein har baar haari
saamne pake unhe aanshoo rok na payi
muskan ki aad mein aanshoo chhupa na chahi
khud ko samjhane lagi wahan tera basera nahi...

jab bhi kuch kehena chaha kisi ka khayal aaya
chup rehna hai mujhe kuch nahi kehena
uss raste se mukarna hai pathar rakh ke dil pe
khud ko samjha rahi wahan tera koi kaam nahi...


Wow punam... galati kahi nazar nahi aayi. bahut accha likha hai tumne.
Keep up dear  Thumbs UP
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honeyrose
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«Reply #25 on: August 04, 2008, 06:53:47 AM »
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Bahut kamaal Honeyrose jee.

Yaad na karao mujhe woh shaam, -
Zahar-e-dil pee chuka hun main, -
Na kahna haal-e-dil hum se kabhi, -
Alfaaz jal chuke ab kya kahun main. -
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Shukriya Syed..

Shaam tak intzaar kiye the
Aapne kabhi na dekhe humhe
Bhul na paaogi aapka pyar
Dil se mat nikalo mujhe mere yaar 
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syednaami
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«Reply #26 on: October 11, 2008, 03:47:09 PM »
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Khoob kaha Honey jee.

Intazaar karne ki aadat hai aapko,
Kyun rahti ho chup bataado yaar ko,
Ki dil tum se aashna ho gaya hai,
Rahogi khaamosh to khodogi pyar ko. -
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honeyrose
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«Reply #27 on: October 11, 2008, 04:03:02 PM »
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Khoob kaha Honey jee.

Intazaar karne ki aadat hai aapko,
Kyun rahti ho chup bataado yaar ko,
Ki dil tum se aashna ho gaya hai,
Rahogi khaamosh to khodogi pyar ko. -

Shukriya aapka ...

Very nice lines syed ... Thumbs UP
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syednaami
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«Reply #28 on: October 11, 2008, 04:05:37 PM »
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Aap ka bahut bahut shukriya Honey Saahiba. Likhte rahiye.
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