Ponchh leta hu ashqo.n ko

by medha_jain3 on January 23, 2009, 07:41:36 AM
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ek chhoti si koshish.....ummid karti hu ki aap logo ka sath milega..

Kho na jaye khwabo.n se tu,palake.n khulate hi kanhi,
Main jagta hun rato.n ko bas soch kar yahi !!
Ashqo.n se jhalakati tasveer teri,dekh na le or koi,
Main ponchh leta hu ashqo.n ko bas soch kar yahi !!


Medha jain
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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2009, 07:56:57 AM »
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Quote from: medha_jain3 on January 23, 2009, 07:41:36 AM
ek chhoti si koshish.....ummid karti hu ki aap logo ka sath milega..

Kho na jaye khwabo.n se tu,palake.n khulate hi kanhi,
Main jagta hun rato.n ko bas soch kar yahi !!
Ashqo.n se jhalakati tasveer teri,dekh na le or koi,
Main ponchh leta hu ashqo.n ko bas soch kar yahi !!


Medha jain


wah, very nice medha

jasbir singh
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2009, 07:59:27 AM »
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bahut badiya medha ji...

sota na kabhi dekhe, tu mujhko apne khwabon mein,
isliye raat-raat bar jaagte raheta hun.

udas na dekhe,tu mujhko apne khwabon mein,
isliye raat-raat bar haste raheta hun.
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«Reply #3 on: January 26, 2009, 07:11:25 AM »
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shukriya jasbir ji.

Medha jain

Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 23, 2009, 07:56:57 AM
wah, very nice medha

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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2009, 07:12:09 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 23, 2009, 07:59:27 AM
bahut badiya medha ji...

sota na kabhi dekhe, tu mujhko apne khwabon mein,
isliye raat-raat bar jaagte raheta hun.

udas na dekhe,tu mujhko apne khwabon mein,
isliye raat-raat bar haste raheta hun.


Shukriya cara ji

Medha jain
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«Reply #5 on: September 18, 2009, 09:22:52 AM »
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Badi sunder dard bhari lines likhi hain aapne... Applause Applause Applause

Jaag kar rato.n mai khwab kaise dekhogi tum
Jab band nahi hui palke.n,khulne ka kyu darr
Kab tak chhipaogi tasveer uski,jise pana hai
Kar do elaan ab,tujhse he jeevan sajaana hai


Quote from: medha_jain3 on January 23, 2009, 07:41:36 AM
ek chhoti si koshish.....ummid karti hu ki aap logo ka sath milega..

Kho na jaye khwabo.n se tu,palake.n khulate hi kanhi,
Main jagta hun rato.n ko bas soch kar yahi !!
Ashqo.n se jhalakati tasveer teri,dekh na le or koi,
Main ponchh leta hu ashqo.n ko bas soch kar yahi !!


Medha jain
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«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2009, 09:50:04 AM »
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Wah jain ji bahut khoob,wonderful creation,aur Khoyal ji aapke tarref ke liye toh mere paas shabd hi nahi hai. :icon_salut:excellent lines. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: September 18, 2009, 10:22:15 AM »
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Madhu-di bas yu he peeth thap-thapati raho....
Kaid hai jo man mai bhaav shabdh ban utar aayenge..
Thanks a lot....


Quote from: madhuwesh on September 18, 2009, 09:50:04 AM
Wah jain ji bahut khoob,wonderful creation,aur Khoyal ji aapke tarref ke liye toh mere paas shabd hi nahi hai. :icon_salut:excellent lines. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: September 18, 2009, 10:31:33 AM »
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Kaash main apse kabhi mill paati bahut khushi milti. hello2 hello2 love4 love9
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2009, 04:32:38 AM »
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namaste!

aap yahaaN! KhuShii hu'ii! aap ki koShiSh har baar ki tarH ees baar bhee bahot Khoob rahiiN ..daad! liKhate raheN... buDhaau !

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #10 on: September 20, 2009, 02:27:32 PM »
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Quote from: medha_jain3 on January 23, 2009, 07:41:36 AM
ek chhoti si koshish.....ummid karti hu ki aap logo ka sath milega..

Kho na jaye khwabo.n se tu,palake.n khulate hi kanhi,
Main jagta hun rato.n ko bas soch kar yahi !!
Ashqo.n se jhalakati tasveer teri,dekh na le or koi,
Main ponchh leta hu ashqo.n ko bas soch kar yahi !!


Medha jain


Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Medha.. Bahut Bahut Pyaar Bhare Alfaaz Likhe hain aapne.. Dil Ko Chhoo gaye aapke Yeh Chand Alfaaz.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause

Cara Ji & Koyal Ji Aapne Bhi Lajawab Likha hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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