Poochte hain sab mujh se !

by Rishi on October 28, 2004, 12:49:45 AM
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doston ne poocha mujh se ke kahaan rehte ho,
kai kai din tak aajkal tum dikhaayi nahi dete ho,
pyaar to hum sab bhi karte hain apne sanam se,
tumhare pyaar mein kya juda hai jo gum rehte ho....
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kya bataayein unko ke sanam ne latoo bana diya hai,
un ke aage peechhe aajkal din raat ghoomte hain hum,
subah se shaam ho jaati hai, khabar hi nahi hoti hum ko,
ek baar un ko rijhaane ke liye kya nahi karte hain hum,
kabhi un ki kajraari aankhon ka kaajal ban na padtaa hai,
kabhi un ki syah julfon mein sajaa gulaab hote hain hum,
us par bhi un ke naaz-o-andaaz ka ye aalam ho gaya hai,
kehte hain aaj kal wo pehle sa pyaar nahi karte hain hum....
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nd for the married ones, the last line can be....
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un ki ek bhi khawaahish na ho puri to raat sofe pe sote hain hum..
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aur us par doston ka taana ho gaya hai,
kehte hain roz ka bahaana ho gaya hai....
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kaise un ko samjhaaye ke humari dosti kam nahin,
jaante hain hum bhi ye baat, na-samajh hum nahin,
tumhaari jindagi mein bhi ek din aayega aisa hi waqt,
phir hum bhi kahenge, aaj kal nazar aate tum nahin....
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2004, 02:02:34 AM »
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Thanx everyone !
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aankhon mein aansoo ki lakeer ban gayi.
kabhi socha na tha aisi taqdeer ban gayi.
yun hi phira raha tha rait par ungliyaan,
gaur se dekha to teri tasveer ban gayi....
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2004, 05:59:01 AM »
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Sorry...the above one was not mine !
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tumhaare pyaar ka rang chaddha hai hum par,
tabhi to itne pyaare lagte hain,
teri parchaai hain hum to jaana tujh ko thaame,
tere saath saath chalte hain....
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but this one is....!
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Rishi
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«Reply #3 on: November 06, 2004, 08:00:39 PM »
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: November 07, 2004, 08:22:06 AM »
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Nice Rishi..

Mohabbaton ka rang idhar bhi hai
Ankhain jhuki, rangat khili si hai
Log poochte hain aksar hum se
Saaye tere ab do kyun dikhte hain!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2004, 12:13:53 AM »
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Goodone Jabeen !
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yun lagta hai ki  kuch kehne ko bechain hai tera mann,
tum na bhi bolo to sab bol dete hain ye tumhare nayan,
jo mujh se chura kar nazrein, chhupaogi tum dil ki batein,
dil ke sab raaj khol hi denge tumhare khanakte kangan,
aur tum haal-e-dil kehne se rokogi bhi kaise khud ko,
ek hi to hai haal dono ka , ek hai mera mann tera mann,
jism chahe juda hon, par ek dil hai ,ek dil ki dhadkan,
ab to bandh gaya hai tum se janmon ka bandhan....
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nishita
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«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2004, 07:42:07 AM »
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wah wah
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Rishi
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«Reply #7 on: November 18, 2004, 07:55:31 AM »
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Thanx Nishita....!
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Nedura!
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«Reply #8 on: November 18, 2004, 08:12:50 AM »
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wowwww yeh kya ho gaya hai sabko itni brilliant shayari tongue3 he he

cooooooolllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rishi
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«Reply #9 on: November 18, 2004, 08:27:08 AM »
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Thanx Nedura.... Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: November 18, 2004, 11:00:28 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob Rishi and Talat ji!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: November 19, 2004, 06:43:11 AM »
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wah!!!! rishi....talat...........bahot khoob....
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Rishi
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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2004, 10:39:45 PM »
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mil gayi hai tum se ab raah-e-dil dilbar,
tum se bichadd ke hum kahaan jaayenge,
teri baahein hi hain sanam ab manzil meri,
ban ke teri dhadkan, teri jaan ban jaayenge....
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«Reply #13 on: December 04, 2004, 10:24:35 PM »
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aap sab yahaan likhenge kuchh nahi,
hum phir jawaab kahaan se laayenge,
bina shaayari ke wah-wahi adhuri hai,
kab aap ye baat samajh paayenge....
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«Reply #14 on: December 04, 2004, 10:29:39 PM »
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very vvell vvritten rishi ji....


bahot khoob...



apnon ki chaahton ne bhi kya-kya diye fareb,
rote rahe lipat ke har ek aznabi se ham.
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