PRATIBANDH

by smardia on January 04, 2009, 04:50:53 PM
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PRATIBANDH

Beet gaye jo din unhe
Sapno me dohra leta hu
Yaade jo ankit hain sanso main
Madhosh ban bhula deta hu
Dil he to hai,samjha leta hu
Sab gam bhula,muska leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Do xshan jo jee leta hu
Man ko behla-behla leta hu
Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate
Do ghunt kabhi jo pee leta hu
Mila adher se adher---
Chumban jo ankit kar deta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Paker bhi sukh, sare jahan ke
Chain nahi pata hai koi yahan
Fir yadi main, chhupa nij man vyatha
Kaliyon k aangan me….
De aliyon ka saath
Pranay geet ga leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate

Surendra Mardia

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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2009, 12:28:57 PM »
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Bohat khoobsurat rachna hain Surendra too good  Clapping Smiley
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smardia
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2009, 12:50:39 PM »
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Sajidji
Bohat khoobsurat rachna hain Surendra too good  Clapping Smiley
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ANAAM
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«Reply #3 on: March 09, 2009, 02:07:27 PM »
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Bahut sunder likha hai aapne smardiaji...
Beete dino ki achhi yade hai aapki....
"Mila adher se adher---
Chumban jo ankit kar deta hu
To kya leta hu……….."
Wah wah kya dilkash line hain... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
PRATIBANDH

Beet gaye jo din unhe
Sapno me dohra leta hu
Yaade jo ankit hain sanso main
Madhosh ban bhula deta hu
Dil he to hai,samjha leta hu
Sab gam bhula,muska leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Do xshan jo jee leta hu
Man ko behla-behla leta hu
Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate
Do ghunt kabhi jo pee leta hu
Mila adher se adher---
Chumban jo ankit kar deta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Paker bhi sukh, sare jahan ke
Chain nahi pata hai koi yahan
Fir yadi main, chhupa nij man vyatha
Kaliyon k aangan me….
De aliyon ka saath
Pranay geet ga leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate

Surendra Mardia


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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2009, 06:36:36 AM »
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Very Very Nice Smardia. Keep Writing..

Gud one by Anaam.
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smardia
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«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2009, 06:02:16 PM »
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Anaambhai aapki pratikriya k liye dhanyavaad...aapko mere rachana pasand aaye kavita saarthak hui.....
Bahut sunder likha hai aapne smardiaji...
Beete dino ki achhi yade hai aapki....
"Mila adher se adher---
Chumban jo ankit kar deta hu
To kya leta hu……….."
Wah wah kya dilkash line hain... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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smardia
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«Reply #6 on: March 11, 2009, 06:06:25 PM »
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Sophiji aapke Hosla afjaayee k liye shukriya....
Aapne meri rachana ko pdha aur saraha dhanayvaad Sophiji.......
Very Very Nice Smardia. Keep Writing..

Gud one by Anaam.
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