PRATIBANDH

by smardia on January 04, 2009, 04:51:47 PM
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PRATIBANDH

Beet gaye jo din unhe
Sapno me dohra leta hu
Yaade jo ankit hain sanso main
Madhosh ban bhula deta hu
Dil he to hai,samjha leta hu
Sab gam bhula,muska leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Do xshan jo jee leta hu
Man ko behla-behla leta hu
Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate
Do ghunt kabhi jo pee leta hu
Mila adher se adher---
Chumban jo ankit kar deta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Paker bhi sukh, sare jahan ke
Chain nahi pata hai koi yahan
Fir yadi main, chhupa nij man vyatha
Kaliyon k aangan me….
De aliyon ka saath
Pranay geet ga leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate

Surendra Mardia
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2009, 05:02:17 PM »
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WAO, VERY NICE SURENDRA


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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2009, 06:47:49 PM »
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 wah wah  good work:clap:  Applause Applause


"Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate
Do ghunt kabhi jo pee leta hu
Mila adher se adher---
Chumban jo ankit kar deta hu...."

bahut sunder panktiye hai.....

sab lekar bhi kehte ho ..."to kya leta hu"
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2009, 08:02:59 PM »
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NIce One Smardia,.
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2009, 08:23:04 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on January 04, 2009, 04:51:47 PM
PRATIBANDH

Beet gaye jo din unhe
Sapno me dohra leta hu
Yaade jo ankit hain sanso main
Madhosh ban bhula deta hu
Dil he to hai,samjha leta hu
Sab gam bhula,muska leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Do xshan jo jee leta hu
Man ko behla-behla leta hu
Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate
Do ghunt kabhi jo pee leta hu
Mila adher se adher---
Chumban jo ankit kar deta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Paker bhi sukh, sare jahan ke
Chain nahi pata hai koi yahan
Fir yadi main, chhupa nij man vyatha
Kaliyon k aangan me….
De aliyon ka saath
Pranay geet ga leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate

Surendra Mardia



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bahoot khoob surendra ji, kaya baat hai... ek alag he rang main apne Khumar-e-ishaq bayan kiya hai... man ko tadpata per anubhuti deta hua.... bahoot khoob!!! Ahsa hai apki aor rachnaye parrne ka bhi app hum sabko avsar dege...
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2009, 05:34:48 PM »
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aap ko pasand aai tou rachna safal hui....

Bahut bahut dhanyavaad Poojaji....jasbirji...Anaamji
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2009, 07:32:02 PM »
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very very nice smardia
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2009, 01:44:39 AM »
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Quote from: smardia on January 04, 2009, 04:51:47 PM
PRATIBANDH

Beet gaye jo din unhe
Sapno me dohra leta hu
Yaade jo ankit hain sanso main
Madhosh ban bhula deta hu
Dil he to hai,samjha leta hu
Sab gam bhula,muska leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Do xshan jo jee leta hu
Man ko behla-behla leta hu
Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate
Do ghunt kabhi jo pee leta hu
Mila adher se adher---
Chumban jo ankit kar deta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Paker bhi sukh, sare jahan ke
Chain nahi pata hai koi yahan
Fir yadi main, chhupa nij man vyatha
Kaliyon k aangan me….
De aliyon ka saath
Pranay geet ga leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate

Surendra Mardia


Nice one Surendra Ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2009, 11:10:55 AM »
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Shukriya....Dhayavaad.....King khanji...
Quote from: King_Khan on January 30, 2009, 07:32:02 PM
very very nice smardia
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2009, 11:15:32 AM »
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Shukriya....Dhayavaad....Rajeshji
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 31, 2009, 01:44:39 AM
Nice one Surendra Ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2009, 11:16:37 AM »
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Quote from: smardia on January 04, 2009, 04:51:47 PM
PRATIBANDH

Beet gaye jo din unhe
Sapno me dohra leta hu
Yaade jo ankit hain sanso main
Madhosh ban bhula deta hu
Dil he to hai,samjha leta hu
Sab gam bhula,muska leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Do xshan jo jee leta hu
Man ko behla-behla leta hu
Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate
Do ghunt kabhi jo pee leta hu
Mila adher se adher---
Chumban jo ankit kar deta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Paker bhi sukh, sare jahan ke
Chain nahi pata hai koi yahan
Fir yadi main, chhupa nij man vyatha
Kaliyon k aangan me….
De aliyon ka saath
Pranay geet ga leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate

Surendra Mardia




Bahut khoob Surendra ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2009, 12:04:35 PM »
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Shukriya...Dhanyavaad Rojaji.....
Quote from: Roja on January 31, 2009, 11:16:37 AM

Bahut khoob Surendra ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 05, 2009, 01:12:50 PM »
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Surendra Mardia-ji....aapki post se chunn-chunn kar padh rahi hu aapki saral hindi mai likhi rachnayen....
Bataayiye aapka koi blog bhi hai....?
jahan aapki saari kavitayen padhne ko mil jaayen....daad kabul kijeeye... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jeevan mai kyu Pratibandh lagate
Swachhand kyu nahi ye jeene dete
Pakshi-pashu sab hote mann k mouzee
Hum insaan he kyu Pratibandh k doshee


Quote from: smardia on January 04, 2009, 04:51:47 PM
PRATIBANDH

Beet gaye jo din unhe
Sapno me dohra leta hu
Yaade jo ankit hain sanso main
Madhosh ban bhula deta hu
Dil he to hai,samjha leta hu
Sab gam bhula,muska leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Do xshan jo jee leta hu
Man ko behla-behla leta hu
Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate
Do ghunt kabhi jo pee leta hu
Mila adher se adher---
Chumban jo ankit kar deta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Paker bhi sukh, sare jahan ke
Chain nahi pata hai koi yahan
Fir yadi main, chhupa nij man vyatha
Kaliyon k aangan me….
De aliyon ka saath
Pranay geet ga leta hu
To kya leta hu………..

Oos per kyon pratibandh lagate

Surendra Mardia
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2010, 08:16:48 AM »
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Bahoot bahoot shukriya Koyalji aapka aap meri rachnayen padh rahi hain aur pasand kar rahi hain....... icon_flower
Filhaal mera koi blog nahi hain....
Hann meri ek pustak jaroor prakashit huyee hai....
"BYPAAS" KUL 75 POEMS KA SANGRAH HAI....
Ye poems usi ka hissa hain.....

Aapne bhi sunder panktiyen likhi hain.... Applause Applause Applause



Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 05, 2009, 01:12:50 PM
Surendra Mardia-ji....aapki post se chunn-chunn kar padh rahi hu aapki saral hindi mai likhi rachnayen....
Bataayiye aapka koi blog bhi hai....?
jahan aapki saari kavitayen padhne ko mil jaayen....daad kabul kijeeye... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jeevan mai kyu Pratibandh lagate
Swachhand kyu nahi ye jeene dete
Pakshi-pashu sab hote mann k mouzee
Hum insaan he kyu Pratibandh k doshee


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«Reply #14 on: January 13, 2010, 09:01:40 AM »
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Achhi panktiyan hain Mardia ji. Nice creation.
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