Prem Ka Durgam Jagat:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

syednaami

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Ranj bharun apne andar ya muhabbat ke paikar, -
Taaron men dhhoondhun usko ya paatal ke andar, -
Jis aurh woh chala tha maarg wohi hai mera ab, -
Kaisa Prem ka durgam jagat hai ya agni ka samundar. -

Chalta raha phir bhi Aandhiyon se li takkar, -
Sailaab har taraf tha taT aaya nahin nazar, -
Khojlun usse jeevan ka yehi lakshya hai, -
Yeh azam tha pakka ab kitna bhi ho vyath uss daggar, -

Milegi manzil kaise yeh mere prayatna pe nirbhar, -
Saahas hai aur josh bhi mere iss jism ke bhitar, -
Koi na rok payega ab mujhe faisla hai yeh atal, -
Paa kar hi lunga dam usse nahin mot ka bhi ab darr. -

(Syed Naami)


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punam

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Re: Prem Ka Durgam Jagat

«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2008, 08:02:04 AM »

hi syed ji..wah kya baat hai bahot khoob..
aapne shabd bade acche chune hain..kuch tough hain...
aise hi likhte rahiye taaki humein aapki khoobsurat kavitaein padne ko mile....
prem sadharan manushya hi karta hai. jitni sarlta say manushya prem karta hai utna koi nahin....

aur haan aap ki signature me jo lines hain bahot khoob...bahot acha laga..


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punam

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Re: Prem Ka Durgam Jagat

«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2008, 08:48:44 AM »

Humein kuch khaas jaankari nahi hai bas kuch seekh rahe hai...
ek choti si kosish...

Maruthal sa iss jeevan me prem jal hai unka pyaar
mere jeevan ko sushobhit karta hai unka pyar....

andheri iss zindagi ke path pe
aasha jyoti ban ke jalti hai unki pyar...

jaise thamne se bhi nahi thamta samay
waisa hi hai mere mann me unke liye pyar....


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Pooja

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Re: Prem Ka Durgam Jagat

«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2008, 04:12:28 PM »

wow bahoot khoob Sami ji!! yah lines to kamal ki lagi hai:

Milegi manzil kaise yeh mere prayatna pe nirbhar, -
Saahas hai aur josh bhi mere iss jism ke bhitar, -
Koi na rok payega ab mujhe faisla hai yeh atal, -
Paa kar hi lunga dam usse nahin mot ka bhi ab darr. -

Punam bahoot hi acha likha hai apne.. bahoot shudh hindi ka upyog kiya hai is baar apne bhi apni kavita main.. Good work,


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Sonia01

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Re: Prem Ka Durgam Jagat

«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2008, 04:21:28 PM »

Quote from: punam on May 02, 2008, 08:48:44 AM

aawwwa itna shudda hindi? bahut accha likha hai tumne punam.
bahut accha laga padne ko.


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Prem Ka Durgam Jagat

«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2008, 07:04:36 PM »

Wah.. s.naami ji pehle urdu or ab hindi me apni fankaari ke johar dikha diye aapne, dosto!! sawdhaan!!! kya pata agli nazam malbaari me aajaae. Applause

Punam ji bohot khoob Applause

Sahebaan me hindi zyada nahi jaanta ek sher pesh karta hun jo bhi galti ho be-jhijhak bata den ta ke meri islah ho sake.

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pandit

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Re: Prem Ka Durgam Jagat

«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2008, 07:14:54 PM »

Gud

Quote from: syednaami on May 01, 2008, 09:42:07 PM

nice lines....


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syednaami

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Re: Prem Ka Durgam Jagat

«Reply #7 on: May 03, 2008, 12:52:25 AM »

Quote from: punam on May 02, 2008, 08:02:04 AM

Puna saahiba, aapne jis sneh aur vadaanya se prem ke liye vichaar diye buhat hi bada arth rakhte hain bhitar.
Aap ne signature ko pasand kya isske liye mann se dhanyavaad karta hun.

Aap ne jo apne panktiyan paish ki hain, un men bhi prem ka mahatva arth mila humen, par abhi aap ne yeh kavita likhi yahan to yeh mehfil bhi sushobhit go gayi hai.

Shukriya.


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syednaami

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Re: Prem Ka Durgam Jagat

«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2008, 01:22:42 AM »

Janaab Renderi,
Vivaas men rahna majboori jaane ya apna nirnaya, is dusht jagat ka yeh to usool hai. Baqi aap prayatna karen ante phal to milega har surat men.
Buhat Shukriya.

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Pooja Saahiba, aap ka bi aabhaari hun jo iss mehfil men pag rakh hamen badhai dene aaye. Saahas badhaane ka dhanyavaad.

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Sonia baba, aap aye to is mehfil ko char chaand lag gaye. Thanks

Pandit bhai, aap ne hamari prayatna ko saraaha, uske liye haardik dhanyavaad.


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