Pyaar hai……….”Sahal".

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                       Pyaar hai………."Sahal".

Kisi ke naam zindagi karjana,pyaar hai,
Kisi ke naam per mar mitt jana,pyaar hai.


Meri yaad mein tera wo,
aansu bahana,pyaar hai.

Mera naam sunker wo,
Tere dil ka dhadak jana,pyaar hai.

Mere bewajah ruth jane per,
Tera pyaar se manana,pyaar hai.

Meri baaton ko sochker tera,
khwabon ka sajana, pyaar hai.

hasraton ki wo bechaini aur,
khwahishon ka tadapana,pyaar hai.

Na pucho aghaaz-e-ulfat kya hai,”sahal”,
Bas dosti ka hadh se badh jana,pyaar hai.
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2013, 05:29:54 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on May 13, 2013, 05:05:00 PM

                       Pyaar hai………."Sahal".
Meri yaad mein tera wo,
aansu bahana,pyaar hai.

Mera naam sunker wo,
Tere dil ka dhadakna,pyaar hai.

Mere bewajah ruth jane per,
Tera pyaar se manana,pyaar hai.

Meri baaton ko sochker tera,
khwabon ka sajana, pyaar hai.

hasraton ki wo bechaini aur,
khwahishon ka tadapna,pyaar hai.

Na pucho aghaaz-e-ulfat kya hai,”sahal”,
Bas dosti ka hadh se badh jana,pyaar hai.

Bohat Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Sahal. . . Superb Fantastic, Awesum Romantic, hearttouching Lines. . . Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause love9 love9
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Bohat Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Sahal. . . Superb Fantastic, Awesum Romantic, hearttouching Lines. . . Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause love9 love9
Thankyou ! Ruhama ...nawazish.
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2013, 05:43:31 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on May 13, 2013, 05:05:00 PM

                       Pyaar hai………."Sahal".
Meri yaad mein tera wo,
aansu bahana,pyaar hai.

Mera naam sunker wo,
Tere dil ka dhadakna,pyaar hai.

Mere bewajah ruth jane per,
Tera pyaar se manana,pyaar hai.

Meri baaton ko sochker tera,
khwabon ka sajana, pyaar hai.

hasraton ki wo bechaini aur,
khwahishon ka tadapna,pyaar hai.

Na pucho aghaaz-e-ulfat kya hai,”sahal”,
Bas dosti ka hadh se badh jana,pyaar hai.



good poem sir, matla is missing two places kafia is differnt
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2013, 05:55:58 PM »
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Thankyou ! marhoom sir
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bohat khoob ji,..............
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bohat khoob ji,..............
Thankyou ! laaiba ji..
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Pyaar ke rang bahut ache se Jtlaye Hain,bahut khoob.Bhaijaan.
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on May 13, 2013, 07:33:14 PM
Pyaar ke rang bahut ache se Jtlaye Hain,bahut khoob.Bhaijaan.
bohut shukriya....
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very nice sahal ji...

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very nice sahal ji...

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Thankyou ! Asif ji
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                       Pyaar hai………."Sahal".

Kisi ke naam zindagi karjana,pyaar hai,
Kisi ke naam per mar jana,pyaar hai.


Meri yaad mein tera wo,
aansu bahana,pyaar hai.

Mera naam sunker wo,
Tere dil ka dhadakna,pyaar hai.

Mere bewajah ruth jane per,
Tera pyaar se manana,pyaar hai.

Meri baaton ko sochker tera,
khwabon ka sajana, pyaar hai.

hasraton ki wo bechaini aur,
khwahishon ka tadapna,pyaar hai.

Na pucho aghaaz-e-ulfat kya hai,”sahal”,
Bas dosti ka hadh se badh jana,pyaar hai.


good one sahal......!
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«Reply #12 on: May 13, 2013, 10:14:13 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on May 13, 2013, 05:05:00 PM

                       Pyaar hai………."Sahal".

Kisi ke naam zindagi karjana,pyaar hai,
Kisi ke naam per mar jana,pyaar hai.


Meri yaad mein tera wo,
aansu bahana,pyaar hai.

Mera naam sunker wo,
Tere dil ka dhadakna,pyaar hai.

Mere bewajah ruth jane per,
Tera pyaar se manana,pyaar hai.

Meri baaton ko sochker tera,
khwabon ka sajana, pyaar hai.

hasraton ki wo bechaini aur,
khwahishon ka tadapna,pyaar hai.

Na pucho aghaaz-e-ulfat kya hai,”sahal”,
Bas dosti ka hadh se badh jana,pyaar hai.
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«Reply #13 on: May 13, 2013, 11:58:32 PM »
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Bahut khoob, per kuch kaafiye mismatching haiN.
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accha likha hai aapne Sahal jee
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