pyaar ka vachan

by ranjana on June 29, 2006, 01:24:56 PM
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«Reply #30 on: June 30, 2006, 07:34:39 PM »
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nice one.........

thaama hai jo haath mera toh safar kat jaayega
yeh vachan fir kaise na pura ho paayega

meri yaade, teri baate ek duje ka sahara hai sanam
hum kahi bhi rahe per dil juda na ho paayega

mera hamkhayal hai toh meri baat per kar yakeen
rishta hai yeh dosti ka kabhi na yeh tutane paayega


Kya baat hein!!!!!!!!!!!....paar ye kya kiya ranz-na....kabr khod dii tumne to sad5 ....kiski?...chodo aab

Janaza mera uth raha tha,
Phir bhi takleef thi unko aane mein,
Bewafa ghar mein baithe puch rahe the,
aur kitni der hai lejane mein..


Ssshaahid bhai Janaza toh ab hum nikalenge jisne Khdvai Kabr hamari uske liye jaawaab :wink:

Janaza nikle jo mera....
Toh yaaron Gali Gali use Ghuma dena.....

Jab aaye Yaar ka Ghar saamne.....
Toh bas Badnaam Chehre se Kafan uthaa dena......

Karenge Deedar uska toh rooh bhi hamari Jannat naseeb kar jayegi......
Bheege na chahe palkein uski toh kya kisi ko bhi yahan meri Yaad na ayegi......

Kar Dua teri harr mannat poori ho jayegi......
Chahe ho usme maut Badnaam ki par woh meri Duaon me bhi Shaamil ho jayegi.......!!!!!!!!!


masa allah! gaurav kya liklha hein.............dekhte hein aab kaise yaad na aayegii teri kisiko! :wink:

Teri yaad aane ko teri chehra  dekhnii kii jaroorat nahii
Tune jo felaii hai lafzo ki mehek,wo tujh se kam khubsurat nahii
Teri ishq ka fasana aab to ghul gaya hein is mousam mein
Aur terii umr-daraz ke liye ham hein ,tujhe uskii haton ki jaroorat nahii


Shurkiya Shahid bhai

Banjar Mausam....Kaash ke Sanam bhi hume Chahane lage.....
Jise Chahate aaj apne Sapno se jayada khuda kare Koyal bhi uska Naam Gugunane lage.....

Bheegi aaj meri harr Shabb hai toh Aankhein Namm kyu na ho.....
Toh batao aye Dost Raatein Tanha toh Zindagi me kyu Gum na ho....!!!!!!!!


Hmmmmmmm..bohot achcha ..badnaam....par yaar mein teri umr-daraz ki dua manga aur tum aabhi bhi aapni zanaza uthane mein lage huwe ho!! :wink:

mere rehte aisa nahi ho sakta hein dost! :D

Tujpar na mar mite is duniya pe aaisa koi insaan nahi.............
Aur tu sab se kimtii hein unko,tujpar na lutaye wo aisa koi mukam nahi
Tu to unkii dil ka aarzo hein,tu har dua mein mangii huwi khowais hein
Tu jab tak hein unke pas tab tak wo hein,teri baad unke liye ye jahan nahi
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«Reply #31 on: June 30, 2006, 07:36:57 PM »
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gum mein jabh dhoobhi huwi hoon tu ankhoin mein pani kaise na ho
jabh ishq mein ghayal ho chuki hoon, tu zindagi mein ghum kaise na ho
kare jo mujhe itna pagal, khud bhi pagal ho jaye
karti hoon ishq jitna...usse bhi zyada mohabbat mein dhoob jaye
kaal jabh roye,,, tu usse yaad bankar sirf milon...
aur usse dekhna naseeb bhi na hoon


Anjani aaj kyu Deewana bana rahi ho.....Mashallah kyaa baat hai

Khuda kar Zulm mujhpar par use Koi Takleef na hone dena......
Jo thama hai Aanchal uska Hawa ke sang use kabhi khone na dena......

Na girr jaon main bann Bijli iss Jahan par.....
Tu kar Yahin bas ab mujhe Besahara rone na dena......!!!!!!!!!!!


BS....dont have words...

mera achaal kabhi lautne anna nahi
aye tu saang apne safadh chaidra lana bhulna nahi

ankhoin mein kabhi ansu anne dena nahi
aye tu ghar ka pata apna baatana nahi
bataya tu mera ghar ka paata dena,,,warna ansu ko koyi tikhana dena nahi :D:D:D


Oye hoye.....Lao apna hee address de do :wink: Anjani lagt ahai aaj tum sone nahi dogi :wink:

Ghar ka pata nahi tu apne Dil me hume basa le......
Veeran hai jo Shayaron ki basti usme ek Badnaam ki aaj hasti mita de.....

Jindagi par hum kabhi rehem nahi khaate.....
Warna mile hai kyi mauke jeene ke par hum Maut ko nahi batate....!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #32 on: June 30, 2006, 07:38:52 PM »
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Thnx for appreciation anjani ji! :D
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«Reply #33 on: June 30, 2006, 07:42:06 PM »
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gum mein jabh dhoobhi huwi hoon tu ankhoin mein pani kaise na ho
jabh ishq mein ghayal ho chuki hoon, tu zindagi mein ghum kaise na ho
kare jo mujhe itna pagal, khud bhi pagal ho jaye
karti hoon ishq jitna...usse bhi zyada mohabbat mein dhoob jaye
kaal jabh roye,,, tu usse yaad bankar sirf milon...
aur usse dekhna naseeb bhi na hoon


Anjani aaj kyu Deewana bana rahi ho.....Mashallah kyaa baat hai

Khuda kar Zulm mujhpar par use Koi Takleef na hone dena......
Jo thama hai Aanchal uska Hawa ke sang use kabhi khone na dena......

Na girr jaon main bann Bijli iss Jahan par.....
Tu kar Yahin bas ab mujhe Besahara rone na dena......!!!!!!!!!!!


BS....dont have words...

mera achaal kabhi lautne anna nahi
aye tu saang apne safadh chaidra lana bhulna nahi

ankhoin mein kabhi ansu anne dena nahi
aye tu ghar ka pata apna baatana nahi
bataya tu mera ghar ka paata dena,,,warna ansu ko koyi tikhana dena nahi :D:D:D


Oye hoye.....Lao apna hee address de do :wink: Anjani lagt ahai aaj tum sone nahi dogi :wink:

Ghar ka pata nahi tu apne Dil me hume basa le......
Veeran hai jo Shayaron ki basti usme ek Badnaam ki aaj hasti mita de.....

Jindagi par hum kabhi rehem nahi khaate.....
Warna mile hai kyi mauke jeene ke par hum Maut ko nahi batate....!!!!!!!!!


ghaar ka raasta nahi diya tha,,, appko tu humne seedha dil ka paata bataya
ayi maut tumhari bhi tu usse hum apne ghar ka paata baateyenge
waada hai ye tumpar aanch bhi anne nahi denge...aik kharoonch bhi ayi tu hum khud ko zinda rehne nahi denge :D:D:D
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«Reply #34 on: June 30, 2006, 07:45:08 PM »
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Thnx for appreciation anjani ji! :D



u welcome
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«Reply #35 on: June 30, 2006, 07:45:14 PM »
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Hmmmmmmm..bohot achcha ..badnaam....par yaar mein teri umr-daraz ki dua manga aur tum aabhi bhi aapni zanaza uthane mein lage huwe ho!!  

mere rehte aisa nahi ho sakta hein dost!  

Tujpar na mar mite is duniya pe aaisa koi insaan nahi.............
Aur tu sab se kimtii hein unko,tujpar na lutaye wo aisa koi mukam nahi
Tu to unkii dil ka aarzo hein,tu har dua mein mangii huwi khowais hein
Tu jab tak hein unke pas tab tak wo hein,teri baad unke liye ye jahan nahi


Thnx Shahid and Bahut accha Jawaab dia hai kisi aur ke Behalf pe :wink:

Ta-Umr poojunga tujhe ki yeh Dua meri bhi kya Kabool ho payegi.....
Toot jayegi ek Ladi Dard ki toh kya Khushian bhi rasta bhatak mere Dawaar chali ayengi.....!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #36 on: June 30, 2006, 07:46:57 PM »
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Hmmmmmmm..bohot achcha ..badnaam....par yaar mein teri umr-daraz ki dua manga aur tum aabhi bhi aapni zanaza uthane mein lage huwe ho!!  

mere rehte aisa nahi ho sakta hein dost!  

Tujpar na mar mite is duniya pe aaisa koi insaan nahi.............
Aur tu sab se kimtii hein unko,tujpar na lutaye wo aisa koi mukam nahi
Tu to unkii dil ka aarzo hein,tu har dua mein mangii huwi khowais hein
Tu jab tak hein unke pas tab tak wo hein,teri baad unke liye ye jahan nahi


Thnx Shahid and Bahut accha Jawaab dia hai kisi aur ke Behalf pe :wink:

Ta-Umr poojunga tujhe ki yeh Dua meri bhi kya Kabool ho payegi.....
Toot jayegi ek Ladi Dard ki toh kya Khushian bhi rasta bhatak mere Dawaar chali ayengi.....!!!!!!!!


meri dua mein teri dua bassi hogi,,,kyun pohri na hogi
tooti aik dard ki ladi tu usse hum pakar lenge,,, khushiyan tumhari jholi mein dhal dongi :D:D
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«Reply #37 on: June 30, 2006, 07:49:29 PM »
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Bahut khoob Anjani..really aaj Fantastic Work kia hai
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«Reply #38 on: June 30, 2006, 08:06:44 PM »
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Teri chah ne walo ka firist kuch is kadar bad gaya hein
Ke teri liye dua mangu to kahin kataar mein na pad jaye
Teri rup ka jadu hai na teri lafzo ki maya jal ye malum nahi
Par tere liye badti dewaangi ke dekh kar kahin upar wala bhi na sir jhukaye[b/b]
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«Reply #39 on: July 01, 2006, 12:11:42 PM »
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bahut khub sab na bahut hi khubsurat likha ...shukriya anjani ,gaurav .and shahid ...........good job :D

mere lafaz mere pyaar ki nishaani hai
yeh lafaz hi hai jo meri jindgaani hai

jab jab socha tere baare mein
mere armaan machal se jaate hain
tere pyaar ke bol sanam
meri kavitaa ke shabado mein dhal jaate hain

tere diye ehasaso se mere shabad machal ke aate hain
jaise kisi moti ki mala se moti bikhar se jaate hain

tere mere milne ke pal jo beete hain meethe se
jab bhi mujhe woh yaad aate hain
mere shabad chanchal ho kar teri bahoo mein pighal se jaate hain

pyaar de de kar jab bhi tumne mere zakhamo ko sehalya hai
teri inhi meethi baato se mere zakham bharte jaate hain

jab jab socha hai tere baare mein apne dil ki geharyion se
meri kavitaa ke shabad chup reh kar bhi tujse baat kar aate hain

tere pyaar ke bol meri kavitaa mein dhal jaate hain.............
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«Reply #40 on: July 01, 2006, 12:34:08 PM »
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bahut khub sab na bahut hi khubsurat likha ...shukriya anjani ,gaurav .and shahid ...........good job :D

mere lafaz mere pyaar ki nishaani hai
yeh lafaz hi hai jo meri jindgaani hai

jab jab socha tere baare mein
mere armaan machal se jaate hain
tere pyaar ke bol sanam
meri kavitaa ke shabado mein dhal jaate hain

tere diye ehasaso se mere shabad machal ke aate hain
jaise kisi moti ki mala se moti bikhar se jaate hain

tere mere milne ke pal jo beete hain meethe se
jab bhi mujhe woh yaad aate hain
mere shabad chanchal ho kar teri bahoo mein pighal se jaate hain

pyaar de de kar jab bhi tumne mere zakhamo ko sehalya hai
teri inhi meethi baato se mere zakham bharte jaate hain

jab jab socha hai tere baare mein apne dil ki geharyion se
meri kavitaa ke shabad chup reh kar bhi tujse baat kar aate hain

tere pyaar ke bol meri kavitaa mein dhal jaate hain.............



wow guyz sabne bohot acha likha...
and mom i just love these lines...awesome!
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«Reply #41 on: July 01, 2006, 02:04:29 PM »
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shukriya Roshu dear .......kuch likh deti tum bhi  inhi lines per....  :D
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«Reply #42 on: July 01, 2006, 04:38:04 PM »
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Gud Job All....

Dil na kare Chahane ko hume toh koi baat na thi.....
Jhoota Pyar karte bhi mujhse tere Chehre pe Shikan ki ek baat na thi.....

Likhte Chale jayenge Kaalaam hum bhi tere Naam ka......
Kya hua jo Ruksat hue hum par teri aankhon me Barsaat na thi......

Pyar ka Vachan toh hum nibhayenge marte Dum Talak.....
Kya hua jo ek Tarfa thi Zindagi....ab Sochte hai kyu Maut harr Lamha mere saath na thi.......!!!!!!!!!

 Puzzled ! Sorry yaar Dard kar dia Love me Usual Smile
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«Reply #43 on: July 01, 2006, 10:06:19 PM »
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Gud Job All....

Dil na kare Chahane ko hume toh koi baat na thi.....
Jhoota Pyar karte bhi mujhse tere Chehre pe Shikan ki ek baat na thi.....

Likhte Chale jayenge Kaalaam hum bhi tere Naam ka......
Kya hua jo Ruksat hue hum par teri aankhon me Barsaat na thi......

Pyar ka Vachan toh hum nibhayenge marte Dum Talak.....
Kya hua jo ek Tarfa thi Zindagi....ab Sochte hai kyu Maut harr Lamha mere saath na thi.......!!!!!!!!!

 Puzzled ! Sorry yaar Dard kar dia Love me Usual Smile


mauth tu mera saath aik saaye ke tarha thi
woh tu tha nahi jis ki kadar thi

uthi thi laash jabh meri, uski palkein bheghi nahi thi
tha woh itna behreham ke barsane ke liye aik phool ki kali bhi na thi

pyar ka vachan, jo maar ke bhi bhool nahi sakh thi
usse tu meri baatein bhi yaad na thi :D:D:D

rwgji...ranju...and BS bohat khoob :D:D
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«Reply #44 on: July 01, 2006, 10:09:28 PM »
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mauth tu mera saath aik saaye ke tarha thi
woh tu tha nahi jis ki kadar thi

uthi thi laash jabh meri, uski palkein bheghi nahi thi
tha woh itna behreham ke barsane ke liye aik phool ki kali bhi na thi

pyar ka vachan, jo maar ke bhi bhool nahi sakh thi
usse tu meri baatein bhi yaad na thi  


Gud job Anjani.......but tum bahut Cute ho tum aisi marne ki baatein mat kia karo :evil:
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