Pyaar Kar Dekhna !!!

by deepika_divya on February 11, 2010, 12:51:11 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 11, 2010, 02:38:38 PM »
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Sophi ji ek shandaar creation hai ye aapki.  Shokh mizaaj ke saath likhi gai ek nazaqat aur  bebaki se bhari muhabbat ki poem hai. Afreen and bravo.

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaan  Riyaz ji.. Aapke Inn Alfaazo ne tho Mano Man mea aur josh bhar diya... hai.. Bahoot Bahoot aur tahe dil se shukarguzaar hun main aapki.. Shukriyaa !
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«Reply #16 on: February 11, 2010, 04:17:43 PM »
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bahut khoobsoorat peshkash..........sophi ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: February 11, 2010, 04:19:19 PM »
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bahut khoobsoorat peshkash..........sophi ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

OMG ... Itni saari Taliyaan Sheba ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Waqt dene aur sarahane ke liye !
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«Reply #18 on: February 11, 2010, 04:52:47 PM »
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Kabhi Mere Dil Mea Utar kar Dekhna                 
Kabhi Mujhse bhi Pyaar Kar Dekhna                     

Kitna Intzaar Liye hai In Ankhon Mea
Kabhi Inn Ankho ko Nihaar Kar Dekhna

Tume bhi Ulfat ki Seir kara laayege
Kabhi mujh par bhi  Aithbaar kar Dekhna

Teri Dil Mea Hum Hai ki Nahi yaara
Mere Liye Dil Bekaraar Kar dekhna

Tujhpe Jaan Luta degi yea “ Divya”
Kabhi Mujhse bhi Pyaar Kar Dekhna                     



~~Divya~~

Issi Topic pe Ak aur koshish.. Please comment which one is better !

khuli fizaao mai pukaar kar daikhna
kabhi mujhko bhi pyaar kar daikhna

Kitna Intzaar Liye hai In Ankhon Mea
Kabhi Inn Ankho ko Nihaar Kar Dekhna

Tume bhi Ulfat ki Seir kara laayege
hame bhi apno mai shumaar kar daikhna

Teri Dil Mea Hum Hai ki Nahi yaara
Mere Liye Dil Bekaraar Kar dekhna

Tujhpe Jaan Luta degi yea “ Divya”
Kabhi us par bhi  Aithbaar kar Dekhna



Divya
oye hoye.....kya baat hai sophi ji.....kya khumar hai....kya pyar ki bahar hai......bahut hiiiiiiii khooooob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: February 11, 2010, 04:56:41 PM »
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oye hoye.....kya baat hai sophi ji.....kya khumar hai....kya pyar ki bahar hai......bahut hiiiiiiii khooooob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thank you sooooooooo Much Nikhaar.. Thank you !
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #20 on: February 11, 2010, 05:59:51 PM »
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naaaaaaaaaaaaice one sophi ji
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #21 on: February 11, 2010, 07:11:54 PM »
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dono hi kabil-e-tarif hai sophiji...Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: February 11, 2010, 11:51:34 PM »
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Wow Sophi ji itni pyari aur khoobsurat kavita likh kar dil ke dhadkan aur bada diya apne.both poems are mindblowing.bahut pasand aayi.keep it up.hats off
Great lines by Mann ji.
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«Reply #23 on: February 12, 2010, 04:29:28 AM »
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Bahut khoob Divya Ji
Dono rachnaon mein bahut dam hai
Wonderful
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«Reply #24 on: February 12, 2010, 04:48:57 AM »
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naaaaaaaaaaaaice one sophi ji

Thank you Sooooooo Much Khamosh ji !
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«Reply #25 on: February 12, 2010, 04:49:29 AM »
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dono hi kabil-e-tarif hai sophiji...Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you so Much Geet . Thanks once again !
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«Reply #26 on: February 12, 2010, 04:50:12 AM »
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Wow Sophi ji itni pyari aur khoobsurat kavita likh kar dil ke dhadkan aur bada diya apne.both poems are mindblowing.bahut pasand aayi.keep it up.hats off
Great lines by Mann ji.

Awww Thank you So Much Madhu ji.. Itni saari tareef ke liye ..Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: February 12, 2010, 04:50:36 AM »
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Bahut khoob Divya Ji
Dono rachnaon mein bahut dam hai
Wonderful

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Rajesh ji ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: February 12, 2010, 10:05:14 AM »
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Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Aapne Divya Ji Nice And Excellent Creation ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #29 on: February 14, 2010, 07:54:01 AM »
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wah,bahut khoob Sophi ji,behad khumaar se bhara likha hai,both poems are very good   Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Kaash ji.. Pasand karne aur sarahane ke liye  Usual Smile
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