***pyaar ki shuruaat***

by kaushikbhawna008 on October 17, 2008, 09:20:30 AM
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umra badh gayi hai mere intzaar ki
aayi nahi koi khabar mere yaar ki

veeraniyon ka mausam kal tak tha javaan
nahi koi saugaat thi  bahaar ki

aaya hai sard mosam aur mehfilein bhi hain saji
jo choo sake mere mann ko aisi kisi ne na wo baat ki

uth kar chal hi diye the jab tanha hi ham
jhat se kisi ne haath pakad mera fir dil ki baat ki

duur ho gayei mere jitne bhi the gile shikwe
kal hamdam ne mere fir pyaar ki mujhse nayi shuruaat ki



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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2008, 09:33:12 AM »
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 Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB BAHUT PYARA LIKHA
KAUSHIK...
BY. K.SHAEL
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2008, 09:38:44 AM »
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thnk u shally
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honeyrose
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2008, 10:12:11 AM »
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Wah wah bhawna bohat khoob likha hai aapne  Applause Applause.. Thumbs UP
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2008, 10:19:49 AM »
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thnk u honey ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2008, 12:16:44 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne bhawna ji
aadab arz hai  Applause

Bhavna mein bah jate hai bahut se log
Khusi hay phir mila pyaar ka sanjog
Tanha rah jati hai ye jeevan apna
Dekhte rah gaye woh pyaar ka sapna
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2008, 12:25:04 PM »
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Bohot Khoob, Bhawna, Rajesh
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khamosh.larka
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2008, 03:24:43 PM »
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bouth khoob

dour hu gaye mery jitny bhi thy gily sikway
kal hamdam se Mery pir muj se payar ke nai shuruaat ke

 acha ha bouth khoob

Every Love start to Friendship,but love never change in friendship Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: October 17, 2008, 06:51:01 PM »
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Nice lines Rajesh ji and good one bhawna.. apki kavita parr kar ek gaana yaad aa gaya

Inteehan ho gai intzaar ki
aai na kuch khabar mere pyar ki...
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2008, 09:52:31 PM »
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umra badh gayi hai mere intzaar ki
aayi nahi koi khabar mere yaar ki

veeraniyon ka mausam kal tak tha javaan
nahi koi saugaat thi  bahaar ki

aaya hai sard mosam aur mehfilein bhi hain saji
jo choo sake mere mann ko aisi kisi ne na wo baat ki

uth kar chal hi diye the jab tanha hi ham
jhat se kisi ne haath pakad mera fir dil ki baat ki

duur ho gayei mere jitne bhi the gile shikwe
kal hamdam ne mere fir pyaar ki mujhse nayi shuruaat ki



Bohot umda kalam he kaushikbhawna ji, padh kra bohot achha laga, achha likhte hein aap.
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diya786
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«Reply #10 on: October 18, 2008, 09:33:14 AM »
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BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI KAUSHIK JI AAPNE Applause

MERE JAZBAATON KA AAINA HO TUM
MERE KHWABON KI HAQEEQAT HO TUM
KYUN YAKEEN NAHIN TUMHE MERI CHAHAT PE
SACH HAI KI KUCH KHAAS HO TUM[
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #11 on: October 20, 2008, 08:15:02 AM »
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thnk u so much everyone 
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #12 on: October 20, 2008, 10:15:19 PM »
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MERE JAZBAATON KA AAINA HO TUM
MERE KHWABON KI HAQEEQAT HO TUM
KYUN YAKEEN NAHIN TUMHE MERI CHAHAT PE
SACH HAI KI KUCH KHAAS HO TUM[


Waah... bohot khoob... Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #13 on: February 08, 2009, 08:49:29 AM »
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Bohot Khoob, Bhawna, Rajesh
Nice lines Rajesh ji and good one bhawna.. apki kavita parr kar ek gaana yaad aa gaya

Inteehan ho gai intzaar ki
aai na kuch khabar mere pyar ki...
Thanx Celmira Ji and Pooja Ji
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«Reply #14 on: February 09, 2009, 07:28:21 AM »
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bahoot khoob bhawna & rajesh ji..
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