Pyaar ki Shuruaat !!!

by deepika_divya on February 07, 2010, 02:50:47 PM
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Jab Band Kitaabo.n Se Meri Baat Hoti Hai
Phir Tumse Khayaalo.n Mai Mulaqat Hoti Hai

 Karte Ho Tum Nigaaho.n Se Apni Mujhay Salam
To Chupke Chupke Pyaar Ki Shruwaat Hoti Hai

 Jab Jee Bhar Ke Nihaarte Hain Tumko Hum
Kisko Khabar Kya Subha Kya Raat Hoti Hai

 Khudko Badi Mushkil Se Sambhaalte Hai Hum
Jab Tumse Pyaar Bhari Koi Baat Hoti Hai

 Ye Sochte Hain Kardein Fana Khudko Tujhme Hum
Tab Aankho Se Ashqo.n Ki Barsaat Hoti Hai

 Chahat Ka Hai Unki Asar Tujhpe Ey "Divya"
Warna You.n Kis Se Yaado.n Mai Mulaqaat Hoti Hai

~~DiVya~~
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2010, 03:08:55 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurti se Aapne Jazbaaton Ko Lafzon mein Utaara Hai..

Bahut Ache Sophi Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2010, 03:14:56 PM »
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Good one sophie .....

wanna ask u one qs, what is d most importnt thing for writing ghazals....

i have never wrote that , but wanna wrote.

can u help me
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2010, 03:16:28 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 07, 2010, 03:08:55 PM
Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurti se Aapne Jazbaaton Ko Lafzon mein Utaara Hai..

Bahut Ache Sophi Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thankyou ! So Much Khwaish ji.. Pasand karne aur Dil se Sarahane ke liye Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2010, 03:23:22 PM »
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Ghazal ki shuruwaat achhi lagi Sophi ji. Aaj aapki poetry mein naya adh-yaaye jud gaya hai.
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«Reply #5 on: February 07, 2010, 03:24:43 PM »
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Quote from: songwriter_123 on February 07, 2010, 03:14:56 PM
Good one sophie .....

wanna ask u one qs, what is d most importnt thing for writing ghazals....

i have never wrote that , but wanna wrote.

can u help me

Thank you so Much Amit !

Click the link Below where Javed Ji Well described that How to write Ghazal with examples :-

How to Write Ghazal
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«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2010, 03:26:46 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on February 07, 2010, 03:23:22 PM
Ghazal ki shuruwaat achhi lagi Sophi ji. Aaj aapki poetry mein naya adh-yaaye jud gaya hai.

Thank you so so Much RIyaaz ji...
Abhi Mujhe bahoot kuch seekna hai... Trying to learn more and more ...

Thanks for the appreciation !
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«Reply #7 on: February 07, 2010, 03:56:01 PM »
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Kya baat hai sophiji..bahut hi badhiya likha hai...
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«Reply #8 on: February 07, 2010, 07:04:18 PM »
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acha likha hai Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: February 08, 2010, 09:15:52 AM »
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awesome divya di....
kitbe padhte agar apne pyar ki yaad aa jaye tab kya feel hota he,use bakubi se alafaz diye he..... icon_thumleft

 Clapping Smiley    Applause   Applause
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«Reply #10 on: February 08, 2010, 10:30:02 AM »
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Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Divya Ji ApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #11 on: February 08, 2010, 02:33:54 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 07, 2010, 03:56:01 PM
Kya baat hai sophiji..bahut hi badhiya likha hai...

Thank you so Much Geet !
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«Reply #12 on: February 08, 2010, 02:34:38 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on February 07, 2010, 07:04:18 PM
acha likha hai Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank you so so Much Sheba ji !
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«Reply #13 on: February 08, 2010, 02:35:35 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 08, 2010, 08:13:37 AM
bahut khoob likha hai Sophi ji,
ache words ke saath apne behar ka poora khyaal rakha hai  Applause Applause Applause Applause
very good poem

Thank you soooooooooooo Much Kaash ji.. Maine koshish ki thi ... Abhi aur Sudaar karna baaki hai.. But Thats for the appreciation.
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«Reply #14 on: February 08, 2010, 02:36:25 PM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on February 08, 2010, 09:15:52 AM
awesome divya di....
kitbe padhte agar apne pyar ki yaad aa jaye tab kya feel hota he,use bakubi se alafaz diye he..... icon_thumleft

 Clapping Smiley    Applause   Applause

Thank you so so so so Much Dev .. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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