Pyaar ki Shuruaat !!!

by deepika_divya on February 07, 2010, 02:50:47 PM
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«Reply #30 on: February 11, 2010, 03:13:09 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Mann .. Bahoot khoob Likha hai ! Applause Applause



Gardish ke Sitaare Bhi Kehte hai
Woh Mere Dil Mea Rehte Hai

FIr tu Kyun door door hai Mujhse
Kya Taare bhi ab Jhoot Kehte hai


~~Divya~~
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«Reply #31 on: February 11, 2010, 03:56:52 PM »
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bahut khoob sohpiji n mann ji..main bhi kuch likhna chahungi is karwa mein...

Sitaro ki baate hum hawao se sunte hai,
tabhi tou sitaro se hum sapne bunte hai,
jo bus ek jhalak mein chhu le dil ko..
usi ko hum apna humsafar chunte hai......
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«Reply #32 on: February 11, 2010, 03:58:08 PM »
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bahut khoob sohpiji n mann ji..main bhi kuch likhna chahungi is karwa mein...

Sitaro ki baate hum hawao se sunte hai,
tabhi tou sitaro se hum sapne bunte hai,
jo bus ek jhalak mein chhu le dil ko..
usi ko hum apna humsafar chunte hai......

Thank You so Much Geet

Aur Bahoot Khoob Likha hai Tumne!
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #33 on: February 11, 2010, 03:59:21 PM »
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thnx ji...
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #34 on: February 11, 2010, 04:03:49 PM »
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BaNd ki aankeiN tho tum Nazar AayeiN
Dheere Dheere Mere Aur Paas AayeiN

Karne LageiN meri SaansooN se Baatein
Khamosh FIzaaon meiN Ehsaas Le AayeiN


~~Divya~~
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«Reply #35 on: February 11, 2010, 04:07:41 PM »
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bahut khoob ji...

Terre ehsas ne mujhe terra karazdar kar diya,
ek pal mein apna dildar kar liya,
main sambhal bhi nhi payi thi..
ki tune mujhse pyar beshumar kar liya......
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«Reply #36 on: February 11, 2010, 04:14:18 PM »
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BOHOT KHOB HAI SOPHI  Clapping Smiley Applause



BUT ME DONT KNOW ANY BODY tearyeyed

MAIN KYA KARON?Huh?
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #37 on: February 11, 2010, 04:16:05 PM »
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BOHOT KHOB HAI SOPHI  Clapping Smiley Applause



BUT ME DONT KNOW ANY BODY tearyeyed

MAIN KYA KARON?Huh?

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa diwani ji

Yoindia mea aakar bhi ANjaan Aisa Kaise ho sakta hai.. Sab dheere dheere sot ban jayenge !!
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«Reply #38 on: February 11, 2010, 04:17:27 PM »
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bahut khoob ji...

Terre ehsas ne mujhe terra karazdar kar diya,
ek pal mein apna dildar kar liya,
main sambhal bhi nhi payi thi..
ki tune mujhse pyar beshumar kar liya......

Very Nice Geet !

Khwaish Hui Puri Jo TUmse Mulaqaat Hui
Raat ki khamoshi Mea Pyaar ki Shuraat Hui

Jab Kehne hi Lage the tumse Dil Ki baat
Tho Mausam e Ishq ki Pehli Barsaat Hui


Divya
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«Reply #39 on: February 11, 2010, 04:24:21 PM »
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bahut khoob sohpiji n mann ji..main bhi kuch likhna chahungi is karwa mein...

Sitaro ki baate hum hawao se sunte hai,
tabhi tou sitaro se hum sapne bunte hai,
jo bus ek jhalak mein chhu le dil ko..
usi ko hum apna humsafar chunte hai......

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Geet Ji.. Aapne Bhi Behad Khubsoorat Likha hai.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #40 on: February 11, 2010, 04:40:04 PM »
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Very Nice Geet !

Khwaish Hui Puri Jo TUmse Mulaqaat Hui
Raat ki khamoshi Mea Pyaar ki Shuraat Hui

Jab Kehne hi Lage the tumse Dil Ki baat
Tho Mausam e Ishq ki Pehli Barsaat Hui


Divya


thnx..n bahut hi khoob ehsas bayan kiye hai apne lafzo mein...

Mausam ki barsat thi aur terra sath tha,
main thi jazbaat the aur terra sath tha,
us raat ki khamoshi gunjati hai har lamhe merre dil mein..
jisme kuch mhbt k alfaz the aur terra sath tha......
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«Reply #41 on: February 11, 2010, 04:42:55 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Geet Ji.. Aapne Bhi Behad Khubsoorat Likha hai.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**

thnx n ur welcome mann ji...
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«Reply #42 on: February 11, 2010, 04:45:45 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Mann .. Bahoot khoob Likha hai ! Applause Applause



Gardish ke Sitaare Bhi Kehte hai
Woh Mere Dil Mea Rehte Hai

FIr tu Kyun door door hai Mujhse
Kya Taare bhi ab Jhoot Kehte hai


~~Divya~~


Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Divya.. Bahut Khooooooob Likha hai Dear.. Applause


Chaand-Sitaaron Se Kyun Haal-e-Dil Bayan Karti Ho,
Judaai Ke Lamhon Me Yeh Bhi Bewafa Ho Jaate Hain......

Dhoondte Hain Jab Chehra Tera Raat Ko Us Chaand Me,
Sitaare Jal-Jal Kar Aasmaan Se Toot-Toot Jaate Hain....

Log Toot-ta Tara Dekh Maang Lete Hain Duaa Dheron,
Such To Yeh Hai Sitaare Aksar Mujhse Ladne Aate Hain....

Jhoote Hain Yeh Sitaare, Mujhse Bewafaai Kar Jaate Hain,
Ladne Ke Bahaane Mujhse, Tere Deedar Ko Jo Aate Hain......!!!




**~** Mann **~**

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«Reply #43 on: February 11, 2010, 04:51:12 PM »
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Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Divya.. Bahut Khooooooob Likha hai Dear.. Applause


Chaand-Sitaaron Se Kyun Haal-e-Dil Bayan Karti Ho,
Judaai Ke Lamhon Me Yeh Bhi Bewafa Ho Jaate Hain......

Dhoondte Hain Jab Chehra Unka Raat Ko Us Chaand Me,
Sitaare Jal-Jal Kar Aasmaan Se Toot-Toot Jaate Hain....

Log Toot-ta Tara Dekh Maang Lete Hain Duaa Dheron,
Such To Yeh Hai Sitaare Aksar Mujhse Ladne Aate Hain....

Jhoote Hain Yeh Sitaare, Mujhse Bewafaai Kar Jaate Hain,
Ladne Ke Bahaane Mujhse, Tere Deedar Ko Jo Aate Hain......!!!




**~** Mann **~**



Awwww its is really wonderful and such a beautiful creation Mann.. Mindblowing Mann !

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!


Jab Karte Ho Tum Mujhe Dil Se Yaad
Yea Taare Mujhe Bataane Aaate Hai

Ladte rehte hai Tere Sang Yea AUr
Meri Sansoon ko Behkaane Aate Hai

Puchti Hun Kyun aisa Karte hai Yea
Kehte hai Yea Mujhe Hasane Aate hai

Suna Kar teri Dil ki Baat Mujhe
Teri Chahat ka Ehsaas Karaane Aate hai


Divya
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«Reply #44 on: February 12, 2010, 05:15:03 AM »
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Shukriya Divya Ji..  notworthy

Aapne Bhi Behad Khubsoorat Alfaazon Ko Anjaam Diya Hai.. Bahut Pyaara Likha hai.. Applause Applause



Chaand-Sitaaron Ki Kya Baat Karte Ho,
Hum Inhe Tumhaari Maang Me Saja Denge.....

Likh Denge Phir Aasmaan Pe Naam Tumhaara,
Aur Us Chaand Ki Jagah Tera Aks Bitha Denge...!!!




**~** Mann **~**

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