Pyar ka meetha sa ehesas - Shikha

by Shikha sanghvi on May 18, 2016, 12:55:53 PM
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Pyar ka meetha sa ehesas jagane lage ho tum,
Ab to hum hi se hum ko churane lage ho tum.

Tere pyar ka nasha chhaaya hai is kadar muj par,
Ab to har ghadi, har jagah dikhne lage ho tum.

Tanha thi zindagi meri tere aane se pahele is tarah,
Khushiyo se daman mera ab sajane lage ho tum.

Nahi rahe paati ab ek pal bhi tumse door sanam,
Hokar door meri chahat ko kyu ajmaane lage to tum.

Kahi bhi jaati hu har pal yahi ehesaas hota hai muje,
Saaya banakar saath mere har kadam chalne lage ho tum.

Jaane chahat ki ye kaun so door hai jo teri or khinchi aati hu,
Dhire dhire Shikha ko tumhari diwani banane lage ho tum.

Shikha
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2016, 01:50:13 PM »
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Wah ji wah bahot khooob bahot achey  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2016, 07:52:42 PM »
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Quote from: Rustum Rangila on May 18, 2016, 01:50:13 PM
Wah ji wah bahot khooob bahot achey  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks rustumji...
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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2016, 08:34:06 PM »
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Quote from: Shikha sanghvi on May 18, 2016, 12:55:53 PM
Pyaar ka meethaa saa ehsaas jagaane lage ho tumh,
Abb to humin ko hum se churaane lage ho tumh.

Tere pyaar ka nashaa chhaayaa hai is kadar mujh par,
Abb to har jagah har ghadi nazar aane lage ho tumh

Tanha thi zindagi meri tere aane se pahele bahut,
Khushiyo se daman mera ab sajaane lage ho tumh.

Nahin reh paati abb ek pal bhi tumse dur sanam,
Hokar dur meri chahat ko kyu ajmaane lage ho tumh.

Kahin bhi jaati hoon har pal yeh ehesaas hota hai mujhe,
Apnaa saaya banaa kar mujhe saath chalaane lage ho tumh.

Jaane chahat ki ye kaun so dor hai jo teri or khinch laati hai,
Dhire dhire Shikha ko apni diwaani banaane lage ho tumh.

Shikha
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob ehsaas hai Shikha Jee. Main ne lines mein kuchh adlaa badli kee hai, aap parh leejiye.
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2016, 04:31:14 AM »
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Waah waah ,chaht ki bahut hi khubsoorat peskash  dhero daad kabool kre
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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2016, 06:04:42 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on May 18, 2016, 08:34:06 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob ehsaas hai Shikha Jee. Main ne lines mein kuchh adlaa badli kee hai, aap parh leejiye.

Thanks surindarji

Haa... Humne padha 
Sach Mai pahele se jyada khubsurat lag rahi hai
Bahot bahot shukriya surindarji
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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2016, 07:45:38 AM »
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Very nice ab apki lines correct way mein ja rahi hain bohut improvement  good lines
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2016, 09:55:42 AM »
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Massssssssst hai vah  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2016, 10:52:24 AM »
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Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on May 19, 2016, 04:31:14 AM
Waah waah ,chaht ki bahut hi khubsoorat peskash  dhero daad kabool kre

Thank you so much ramji
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2016, 07:48:36 PM »
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Quote from: Shikha sanghvi on May 18, 2016, 12:55:53 PM
Pyar ka meetha sa ehesas jagane lage ho tum,
Ab to hum hi se hum ko churane lage ho tum.
  waah ji waah mohabbat kaa waqayi meethaa ehsaas hai ki insaan khud ko hi bhhool jaataa hai bahut khoob icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Tere pyar ka nasha chhaaya hai is kadar mujh par,
Ab to har ghadi, har jagah nazar aane lage ho tum.

bahut khoob ji ye bhi mohabbat ki ek alaamat hai  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Tanha thi zindagi meri tere aane se pahele is tarah,
Khushiyo se daman mera ab sajane lage ho tum.

waah waah bahut hi khoob shikhaa ji acha sher hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Nahi rah paati ab ek pal bhi tumse door sanam,
Hokar door meri chahat ko kyu aazmaane lage to tum.

acha hai, waise intezaar me.n mazaa  bahut hai mera tajurbaa to nahin hai per sunaa hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!



Kahi bhi jaati hu har pal yahi ehesaas hota hai muje,
Saaya banakar saath mere har kadam aane lage ho tum.

bahut khoob icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!



Jaane chahat ki ye kaun si dor hai jo teri or khinchi aati hu,
Dhire dhire Shikha ko tumhari diwani banane lage ho tum.

mohabbat mohabbat mohabbat icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!



Shikha


aapki iss achi koshish per meri mubaarak baad aur main aap ke iss kalaam ko 1 rau deti hoon kyon ki aap ne pahli baar sahi maano me.n meri nazar me.n poem likhi hai .

 keep it up shikha ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #10 on: May 24, 2016, 05:24:07 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on May 19, 2016, 07:45:38 AM
Very nice ab apki lines correct way mein ja rahi hain bohut improvement  good lines

Thanks saahilji
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2016, 06:29:24 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob......!!!
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«Reply #12 on: June 01, 2016, 05:25:47 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hai
koi khud se bhi jyada paas hai
nayi nayi muhbbat ka ye nasha hai
Dariya mein doobe,  fir bhi pyas hai

Shikha ji sach bahut meetha methaa likha apne. ...very good
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Quote from: Mast Khalander on May 19, 2016, 09:55:42 AM
Massssssssst hai vah  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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