Pyar ki boondon se wo…:)

by Pooja on March 24, 2009, 07:29:30 PM
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Yah kavita maine Khumar-e-Ishaq main likhni shuru ki  hi… magar likhte likhte dil kuch udaas ho gaya.. last main do line aor jorr kar isko Dard-e-shayri main bhi Likhne ja rahi hu….


Pyar ki boondon se wo mujhe bhigota hai
Raat ki tanhaai main, chup mere sung hota hai

Mehsoos hoti hai agan uski, meri dhadkano ko
Ang ang main besudh, ek nasha sa hota hai

Dekhun jo ankhon se, to koi nahi aass pass mere
Man ki ankhon se,  her pal wo sung mere hota hai

Muskurati hai mujh main Pooja,  kuch sharmaati si
Uski yaadon ka, kuch is kadar asar hota hai

Pyar ki boondon se wo mujhe bhigota hai
Raat ki tanhaai main, chup mere sung hota hai
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2009, 07:36:13 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Pooja ... Achcha lag raha hai aapki poems padh ke.
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2009, 03:39:05 AM »
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Bahut khoob Pooja di... Lovely creation  Applause Applause
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dead heart
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2009, 08:48:17 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Wah wah Pooja jee...kamal ka likha hai apne...
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2009, 09:09:48 AM »
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Bahut Badhiya, Pooja Ji.......!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2009, 05:58:07 PM »
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awesome lines Pooja di.. Clapping Smiley
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: March 27, 2009, 05:54:55 PM »
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Thanks Celmira, Roja, Dead Heart, karandhar and Angel!!

Pahle shayri ka jawab shayri main mila karta tha to kuch likhne ko mil jaata tha.. ajj kal comments he milte hai to insaan agge kaise likhe sad5
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2009, 01:50:02 PM »
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pooja jee,

behad pyaare pyaare ehsaas ko aap ne baa.nDha hai...

paDh kar khushii huii:)

likhti rahe.n

-Mayank
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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2009, 03:14:50 PM »
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Dard mein likhna hai toh fatafat likh dalte dear pooja di.., Ishq mein toda mushkil ho raha hai otherwise mai saat deti thi... tongue3
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2009, 06:34:18 PM »
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pooja jee,

behad pyaare pyaare ehsaas ko aap ne baa.nDha hai...

paDh kar khushii huii:)

likhti rahe.n

-Mayank

bahoot bahoot shukaria Mayank ji!!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2009, 06:35:17 PM »
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Dard mein likhna hai toh fatafat likh dalte dear pooja di.., Ishq mein toda mushkil ho raha hai otherwise mai saat deti thi... tongue3

Dukh sun.ne wale bahoot hai, ishaq main sath milta nahi
kaya kahe Pooja, ab Roja ko, kyun is dil ka diya jalta nahi.. tongue3

Just Kidding Roja... jab man ho jaisa man ho waise likhe app!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2009, 02:14:36 AM »
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haa... Nice Teasing.. tongue3

Ek tere sivaiy kisi aur ko itna dilse chaha nahi
Yeh baat ab zamane ko bata dena tongue3

Din mein toh dedaar tera hota nahi Pooja
Lekin kwaabon mein aakar apna haal bata dena..  Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: April 06, 2009, 04:51:58 PM »
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ha ha ha bahoot khoob Roja!!

Apni surat-o-haal kaya kah kar samjhaye
apne dil ki baat, kin shabdo main laaye

Na din ki khabar hai na raat ka thikana
hai jo dil main, uski tasveer hai hum ankho mai chupaaye

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