Pyar Parde Me Rah’ke Karte Hain - R. Rangila

by Rustum Rangila on August 21, 2016, 08:39:51 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 25, 2016, 08:16:32 AM »
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"Rau" added to your account...keep it up
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«Reply #16 on: August 25, 2016, 09:31:46 AM »
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Lijiye aa gye hum apki poetry ka haq wala "rau" dene. sahi kehte ho Rustum ji kuch log hume chahtey toh bhot hai lekin parde me rhker...jaisa ki apne 1st line me kha. 6th line me jo kha wo owsome hai such me....kyunki izhar toh hum bhi ker dein per unki badnami se dartey hai isliye chupp rhte hai....normal words ko use kerke apne badi khamoshi se moti bat keh di isliye poetry me jaan aagyi. aise hi likhtey rahiye sabko accha lagta hai....




I have no words to describe/express the feelings... but thanks a lot for usual support and appreciation Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: August 25, 2016, 09:33:05 AM »
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Thanks Pooja ji Usual Smile
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