Qatil ya munsif:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

javedarshad

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Shula hawaaun main sisakte dekha
Munsif qatil hi ko bante dekha

Husn bazaar main bikte dekha
Ishq sahra main bilakte dekha

Hunge samunder main tufan bahut
Sahil per khamoosh simat te dekha

Kalyun main hai yeh tamkanat kaisi
Phuloon ko hamne to bikharte dekha

Khushk padun ke saai main bhi
Kuch dair musafir ko taher te dekha

kis kis ko libade pahnain
har shaqhs ko yahan simat te dekha

Aakhir javed khahan tak rooke
Har har qadam ko bahekte dekha


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HumTum is back

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Re: Qatil ya munsif

«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2006, 12:55:01 AM »

Javed Saaheeb ! A'adaab,

Aaj pehli baar aap se iss bazm mein ru-b-ru huye hai........ so, ab jaa.N pehchaa.N bhi ho jayegi....... bahut hi a'llatree.N Ghazal pe'sh ki hai aap ne. sab ash,a'ar saadagee aur achhe bayaan ke Haamil haiN

Shula hawaaun main sisakte dekha
Munsif qatil hi ko bante dekha

Subaa.Na'llah Ghazal ka a'gaaz bahut hi dil-ka'sh hai

Husn bazaar main bikte dekha
Ishq sahra main bilakte dekha

waah bahut kh'uub... Ishq aur Husn ka bayaa.N !!

Hunge samunder main tufan bahut
Sahil per khamoosh simat te dekha

waah .. yha Sahil aur Samundar ka kaafi Beh'tree.N i'semaal kiya hai!

Kalyun main hai yeh tamkanat kaisi
Phuloon ko hamne to bikharte dekha

Bahut Chubta huuya Sh'er likha hai .. waah waah !!

Khushk padun ke saai main bhi
Kuch dair musafir ko taher te dekha

Gustakhi Muaa'f ... yha dusri line mein gar "Kuch dair musafir ko teher te dekha" ki ba'jaye "dair ta'lak musafir ko teher te dekha" ho jaye to sh'er mein aur vajaN aa jayega

kis kis ko libade pahnain
har shaqhs ko yahan simat te dekha

Iss tarah ke zazbaat ko bahut se shairo.n ne mukhtalif andaaz main kaha hai lekin aapne jo isse sehazta di hai wo iss ki khoobsurti badhati hai.. waah !!

Aakhir javed khahan tak rooke
Har har qadam ko bahekte dekha

Javed jee ...... agar dusri line ko kucch yun kha jaye "Har ik qadam ko behekte dekha" to sh'er aur jiada achcha lagega

dil ko chuu lene wali Ghazal likhi hai ... daad qa'buul kijiye !!

HumTum


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Roja

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Qatil ya munsif

«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2006, 01:09:11 AM »

Javed ji.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne. daad hazir hai


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javedarshad

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Qatil ya munsif

«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2006, 01:22:47 AM »

Ham tum sahab aur Roja ji
Is zarra nawazish ka shukria

Hum tum sahab
islah ka intahi mashkoor hun
magar khusk paid ke neeche koi bhi kuch pal hi taher sakta hai
Maine har aik hi likha tha magar luqnat aa rahi hai isliye badalna pada

aap ki muhabbat ka behad mamnoon aur mashkoor hun


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Talat

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Qatil ya munsif

«Reply #4 on: December 24, 2006, 09:12:21 PM »

Bohot khoob !!


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paani

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Qatil ya munsif

«Reply #5 on: December 25, 2006, 05:29:38 AM »

wallaha javed bhai....


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javedarshad

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Qatil ya munsif

«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2006, 02:27:35 PM »

shukria talat aur paani sb

Paani sb
kia aap ke hayan koi bulbula nahin phut ta ya sirf
gahri khamooshi hi hai


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madhuwesh

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Re: Qatil ya munsif

«Reply #7 on: September 16, 2009, 01:00:40 PM »

Wah wah Javed ji n Hum Tum ji bahut khoob,very beautiful creation.excellent


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javedarshad

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Re: Qatil ya munsif

«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2009, 03:38:47 PM »

Shukria

Madhu ji

javed


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mkv

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Re: Qatil ya munsif

«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2012, 04:53:50 PM »

Bahut khoob Applause


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