-----/// Qatl kiya hai usne /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on May 10, 2012, 02:13:43 PM
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kaise bataayen ki kya zulm kiya hai usne,
nazar se apne hamaara qatl kiya hai usne,

dekha jab pehli nazar to dekhte rahe use,
jaaduu se husn ke deewaana kiya hai usne,

kaajal se kaali aankhon kaa jaaduu hi tha,
ki jaaduu se pyaar ke pagal kiya hai usne,

shabnami uske hothon ki kya taarif karun,
apne har andaaz se ghaayal kiya hai usne,

uske zulfon ke baadal se jab andhera huwa,
pyaar se apne uzaalaa tab kiya hai usi ne,

baahon ke ghere me aake mere seene se lagi,
mere dil ki dhadkano ko tez kiya hai usne,

kya karun, kya na karun, kuch hosh hi nahi,
nashe me apne ishq ke paagal kiya hai usne,

'jaan meri jaan' keh ke jaan le liya usne,
pyaar se apne hamaara qatl kiya hai usne...


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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2012, 03:20:57 PM »
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bahut khoob aur ek rau hazir hai
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2012, 03:28:04 PM »
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wah vry vry nicely written ...
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2012, 04:21:59 PM »
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beautiful hridayji...bahut sundar...

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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2012, 04:38:14 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2012, 06:04:02 PM »
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Hriday Jee Aadaab!

janab achche ahsaas O khayaal hai... par aap achcha rythm meiN
likhate likhate bhatask kyuN gaye... ?

Lagta hai sach meiN pagal kar diyaa aapko kisi ne tongue3

Likhate rahiye.. janab aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2012, 06:41:18 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 10, 2012, 02:13:43 PM
kaise bataayen ki kya zulm kiya hai usne,
nazar se apne hamaara qatl kiya hai usne,
aise ilzaam mujh pe lagte rahte hain. kya karoon main . sunglass pahan ke liklo.n gi. din mein bhi aur raat mein bhi. samjhe icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
dekha jab pehli nazar to dekhte rahe use,
jaaduu se husn ke deewaana kiya hai usne,
nayi baat karo. mere gali mein kai aise chakkar lagaate rahte hain. aur kite to shaayar bhi bann chuke  hain icon_flower icon_flower
kaajal se kaali aankhon kaa jaaduu hi tha,
ki jaaduu se pyaar ke pagal kiya hai usne,
kab tak nornal hone mein waqt lage ga tumhein icon_geek icon_geek
shabnami uske hothon ki kya taarif karun,
apne har andaaz se ghaayal kiya hai usne,
aisa mumkin hota to main apne dushmano.n ko kab ka khatm kar deti. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
uske zulfon ke baadal se jab andhera huwa,
pyaar se apne uzaalaa tab kiya hai usi ne,
acha main ujaala aur andhera dono kar sakti to electric department kab ka band ho jaataa.........! Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
baahon ke ghere me aake mere seene se lagi,
mere dil ki dhadkano ko tez kiya hai usne,
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kya karun, kya na karun, kuch hosh hi nahi,
nashe me apne ishq ke paagal kiya hai usne,
nashe mein madhosh hote hain ji paagal nahin. pahle ye tay karo tumhein hua kya hai drunken_smilie drunken_smilie
'jaan meri jaan' keh ke jaan le liya usne,
pyaar se apne hamaara qatl kiya hai usne...
jaan kaise ho. thik ho na ab.
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good.......!
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2012, 03:43:04 AM »
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kabhi Khumaar kabhi Dard aur kabhi bewafai--
aap to janaab har ehsaas ko badi khoobi se utaar lete hain kaagaz pe Usual Smile

iss khumaar me doobe alfaaz o ehsaas ke kya kehne--
ati sundar aur baht baht khoob Hriday sahab
daad daad daaad aur bahot saari daad

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
aate rahen
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2012, 07:31:52 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday jee
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2012, 02:17:09 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on May 10, 2012, 03:20:57 PM
bahut khoob aur ek rau hazir hai
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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2012, 05:39:04 PM »
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thank you sooooo much Laaiba ji....!!!

Quote from: laaiba on May 10, 2012, 03:28:04 PM
wah vry vry nicely written ...
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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2012, 02:34:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Dolly ji....!!!

Quote from: dolly on May 10, 2012, 04:21:59 PM
beautiful hridayji...bahut sundar...

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«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2012, 03:26:38 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2012, 06:31:24 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Soudagar ji....!!!

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Wah! Bohat hi badiya!!
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