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by thycreator on May 16, 2008, 10:32:00 PM
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Baat dil ki tum mujhse keh kyu nahi dete,
Ye haal-e-dil tum mujhse chupate kyu ho..

Gar pyar hai mujhse toh usse bayan bhi karo,
Har ek din naye bahane banate kyu ho..

Bada mashoor ho chala hai chalan bewafai ka,
Iss fehrist mein apna naam laate kyu ho..

Jo bat nigahen bayan karti hain har pal,
Usko kehne mein tum aise lajate kyu ho..

Tum keh ke toh dekho, sitare tod layenge,
ye khamoshi ki nayi rasm nibhate kyu ho..

Kahin hum mar hi na jayen iss intezar mein,
Mere dil ko tum aise aajmaate kyu ho..

Baat dil ki tum mujhse keh kyu nahi dete,
Ye haal-e-dil tum mujhse chupate kyu ho..
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2008, 10:42:34 PM »
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Beautiful, yet again Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2008, 10:45:16 PM »
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Thank you ji thank you........ye maine uske taraf se khud ke liye likh diya....tongue3
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2008, 01:18:15 PM »
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Acha likha hai thycreator ji..Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2008, 01:37:01 PM »
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Baat dil ki tum mujhse keh kyu nahi dete,
Ye haal-e-dil tum mujhse chupate kyu ho..

Gar pyar hai mujhse toh usse bayan bhi karo,
Har ek din naye bahane banate kyu ho..

Bada mashoor ho chala hai chalan bewafai ka,
Iss fehrist mein apna naam laate kyu ho..

Jo bat nigahen bayan karti hain har pal,
Usko kehne mein tum aise lajate kyu ho..

Tum keh ke toh dekho, sitare tod layenge,
ye khamoshi ki nayi rasm nibhate kyu ho..

Kahin hum mar hi na jayen iss intezar mein,
Mere dil ko tum aise aajmaate kyu ho..

Baat dil ki tum mujhse keh kyu nahi dete,
Ye haal-e-dil tum mujhse chupate kyu ho..


Its Absolutely Beautiful... Applause

Thank you ji thank you........ye maine uske taraf se khud ke liye likh diya....tongue3

DOH
lol... Good Job.. Sahi jaa rahe ho.. Giggle
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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2008, 10:29:41 PM »
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Acha likha hai thycreator ji..Usual Smile

Thanks a lot honeyrose ji.........Usual Smile

Kabhi haal-e-dil kabhi dard-e-jigar bayan karte hai,
Wo apni kaatil nigahon se kai kisse tamam karte hai,
Wo chup chup ke katal karte hain mera har ek pal..
Hum har ek maut ka apni, jalsa khuleaam karte hain....Winking
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2008, 10:32:43 PM »
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Its Absolutely Beautiful... Applause

DOH
lol... Good Job.. Sahi jaa rahe ho.. Giggle

Thanks a lot Mahiya ji......

Dunia hame deewana keh, hans deti hai humpar,
Koi iss muhabbat ke maare ka haal nahi puchta,
Hamari aah ban gayi hai meri badnaami ka sabab,
Mere uss kaatil se kabhi koi sawal nahi puchta...tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2008, 10:34:00 PM »
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Oye hoye !

Bade zindadil aashiq ho miyan Winking

Kya haal hai ji tongue3
(lo ji hum aap ka haal pooch lete hain)

Nice creation Amit bro ! Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2008, 10:49:42 PM »
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Thanks a lot bhai ji....main badhiyan hun....aap sunao!!

Uski tasveer nigahon mein liye, jee rahe hai hum,
Tanhayi ka kadwa ghoont bas ab pee rahe hai hum,
Mere iss dil ka masiha bhale na yaad kare humko,
Har pal uske khayalon mein hi rahe hai hum...Winking
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2008, 10:52:34 PM »
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Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Abhi takk tasveer aankhon mein he liye jee rahe ho tongue3
Corridor mein love letter thama do Winking

Ab toh kaafi arsa ho gaya...gaadi wahin ki wahin phassi hui hai Laughing hard
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thycreator
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«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2008, 11:01:39 PM »
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Meri naakam muhabbat pe muskura gaya koi,
Mere nasoor ko taazi hawa laga gaya koi,
Hum ijhaar na karen, wo iqraar na karen,
Iss haquiqat ko afsana bana gaya koi......sad5
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«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2008, 12:00:47 AM »
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Wah... Bohot umda.

"Kahen kese yahi mushkil idhar bhi he udhar bhi he"

Magar janab Bohot der honese pehle kehdena behtar he, ya phir aap YO ka ye page hi unhen dikha do, or jab YO ke ahbaab aap ke saath hen to nek kaam me der kesi.  Thumbs UP 
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«Reply #12 on: May 18, 2008, 04:19:29 AM »
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Baat dil ki tum mujhse keh kyu nahi dete,
Ye haal-e-dil tum mujhse chupate kyu ho..

Gar pyar hai mujhse toh usse bayan bhi karo,
Har ek din naye bahane banate kyu ho..

Bada mashoor ho chala hai chalan bewafai ka,
Iss fehrist mein apna naam laate kyu ho..

Jo bat nigahen bayan karti hain har pal,
Usko kehne mein tum aise lajate kyu ho..

Tum keh ke toh dekho, sitare tod layenge,
ye khamoshi ki nayi rasm nibhate kyu ho..

Kahin hum mar hi na jayen iss intezar mein,
Mere dil ko tum aise aajmaate kyu ho..

Baat dil ki tum mujhse keh kyu nahi dete,
Ye haal-e-dil tum mujhse chupate kyu ho..
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Amit ji bahut khoob  Applause bahut dino k baad aapko padne mila.

Sare raah kuch bhi kaha nahi
Kabhi uske ghar mein gaye bi nahi..!!

Mai janam janam se ussii ki hu
Usse aaj tak ye patha bi nahi..!!

Ye Khuda ki dhen ajeeb hai ki
issii ka naam naseeb hai.. !!

Jisse tu ne chaha wo mil gaya
Jisse maine chaha mila nahi..!!

(NM)
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«Reply #13 on: May 18, 2008, 05:47:58 AM »
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Wah... Bohot umda.

"Kahen kese yahi mushkil idhar bhi he udhar bhi he"

Magar janab Bohot der honese pehle kehdena behtar he, ya phir aap YO ka ye page hi unhen dikha do, or jab YO ke ahbaab aap ke saath hen to nek kaam me der kesi.  Thumbs UP 


ha ha ha.....yahi toh gum hai.....kaash usse hindi aati....sad5

Na wo hum-watan meri, na wo hum-jubaan hai,
Phir bhi wo jaalim mere iss dil ki jaan hai...Winking
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«Reply #14 on: May 18, 2008, 05:52:59 AM »
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Amit ji bahut khoob  Applause bahut dino k baad aapko padne mila.

Sare raah kuch bhi kaha nahi
Kabhi uske ghar mein gaye bi nahi..!!

Mai janam janam se ussii ki hu
Usse aaj tak ye patha bi nahi..!!

Ye Khuda ki dhen ajeeb hai ki
issii ka naam naseeb hai.. !!

Jisse tu ne chaha wo mil gaya
Jisse maine chaha mila nahi..!!

(NM)


Superb Roja.....ur at ur best as ever....

I am glad you liked my creation....Usual Smile

Kahan thi aarzoo humko ye jahan mile,
Bas itni justju ki humko apni jan mile,
Ussi pe marte hai hum jisko dekh kar jeete,
Wo mile toh parinde ko jaise aasmaan mile....tongue3
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