raat bhar barish hotee rahi..... soudagar

by soudagar on July 31, 2012, 05:01:08 PM
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wo bankar chahat ka farishtaa mere dil  par yun chhaa gaya
uski chahat ke izhar ka tarika mere dil ko bhaa gaya

sadiyon se chahat ki pyas thi mujhko, do ghunt mein bujh gai
apni aakhon se mere sanam ne yeh kaisa jaam peela diya

raat barish mein bheega badan dekh uska, jazbaat behkane lage
aasmaan mein bijli ke chamkate hee, usne mujhe gale laga liya

baichain dil tha mera kab se , usko bahon mein bharne ke vaste
gale lagakar usne mere dil ko do jahan ka sukun dilaa diyaa

uski zulfein kabhi chehre par aati,uski aakhien sharm se jhuk jati
uske labon par padi panee ki bundon ne mere soye armano ko jaga dia

raat bhar barish hoti rahee, do dilon ko pyar mein bhigoti rahee
dil bahut khush thaa aaj mousam ne do dilon ka mel karwa diyaa


itna hi likha tha dosto ki ek nalayak dost ne ye h likha diya sath mein

raat bhar barish mein jalte rahe  do dil chahat ki aag mein
subah hote hi laat mar kar bhai ne raat ke khawab se jaga dia
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2012, 12:38:14 AM »
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Wah saudagar ji, kya bat hai, aakiri do panktiyan to kabiletarif hain
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«Reply #2 on: August 01, 2012, 01:16:59 AM »
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bahut khoob Saudagar ji badhaai ho
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«Reply #3 on: August 01, 2012, 02:09:25 AM »
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Very good , bohut umda dheeron daad qubool kareN
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«Reply #4 on: August 01, 2012, 02:15:41 AM »
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bahut khub  bahut hi romantic kalaam last sher ne to dil lut liya
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«Reply #5 on: August 01, 2012, 04:03:40 AM »
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Wow , jyaada joor se to nahee padee laat.
Just kidding, do't mind plz.
Bahoot achchee kalaam hai.
Aeysee hee kalaam peysh kartey rahey.
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«Reply #6 on: August 01, 2012, 06:37:34 AM »
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Good one!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: August 01, 2012, 06:51:40 AM »
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wah saudagar ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 01, 2012, 07:45:05 AM »
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Bahut khoob Saudagar jee

kya baat hai

bahut badhiya
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«Reply #9 on: August 02, 2012, 02:57:39 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya nandbahu ji
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«Reply #10 on: August 02, 2012, 03:21:53 AM »
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BAhut Khub Soudagar Ji Baddai Ho
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«Reply #11 on: August 03, 2012, 01:14:59 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya sk saini sir.
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«Reply #12 on: August 03, 2012, 04:54:13 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Soudagar ji....!!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 06, 2012, 05:25:00 PM »
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bahut b ahut shukriya aarish bhai
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shukriya rd ji
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