-----/// Raat bhar soyaa nahee /// ------ Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on July 25, 2012, 10:55:14 AM
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dekh meri laal aankhon ko poochha behna ne mere
kyun bhaai 'kya raat bhar ek pal tum soye nahee'
ab kaise bataataa use ki main kahaan khoya tha
jiski yaadon me kho ke main raat bhar soyaa nahee

dekha tha use bus stop pe office se aate samay
dekhta raha use is tarha ki bus pakad paayaa nahee
uske chale jaane par bhi main khoya tha usi me yun
ki ghar to wapas aagaya par usko bhool paayaa nahee

subah ka intezaar tha, fir shaam tak mujhe rukna tha
aayegi is shaam bhi maine khud ko samjhaayaa yahee
subah se lekar shaam tak ek pal chain paayaa nahi
jiska intezaar tha, us shaam wo aayaa nahee

raat ghar jaake mera mann bhi kuch lagaa nahee
uski yaadon me rahaa jisse main mil paayaa nahee
chalo aaj nahee to kal sahee, wo mil jaayegi wahee
na mili jo kal bhi wo to samjhun meri kismat me nahee....

*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2012, 11:17:01 AM »
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wah waah waah ati sunder
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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2012, 09:39:29 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 25, 2012, 10:55:14 AM
dekh meri laal aankhon ko poochha behna ne mere
kyun bhaai 'kya raat bhar ek pal tum soye nahee'
ab kaise bataataa use ki main kahaan khoya tha
jiski yaadon me kho ke main raat bhar soyaa nahee

dekha tha use bus stop pe office se aate samay
dekhta raha use is tarha ki bus pakad paayaa nahee
uske chale jaane par bhi main khoya tha usi me yun
ki ghar to wapas aagaya par usko bhool paayaa nahee

subah ka intezaar tha, fir shaam tak mujhe rukna tha
aayegi is shaam bhi maine khud ko samjhaayaa yahee
subah se lekar shaam tak ek pal chain paayaa nahi
jiska intezaar tha, us shaam wo aayaa nahee

raat ghar jaake mera mann bhi kuch lagaa nahee
uski yaadon me rahaa jisse main mil paayaa nahee
chalo aaj nahee to kal sahee, wo mil jaayegi wahee
na mili jo kal bhi wo to samjhun meri kismat me nahee....

*****HRIDAY*****

        kuch alfaaz aur soach mujhe bhi de do bhai hriday. aap itnii achchi nazam kaise itnii asaani se likh lete ho.!!!!

                simply wonderfulllllllllllllll
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2012, 11:27:59 PM »
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 Applause
 BEAUTIFUL !!
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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2012, 12:19:26 AM »
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bahut khub very very nice
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«Reply #5 on: July 26, 2012, 01:27:28 AM »
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kya baat hai hriday bhai....... dil ki baton ko shabdo ki zubani jo aap kehte hai uska sami koi nahi.....bahut chhoti si dincharya ko aapne shabdo ka itna bakhubi roop dia hai ki bas daad hi daad nikal rahe aapke liye ........ dhero daad kabool farmaye... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2012, 02:50:32 AM »
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Hriday jee
kabhi -2 late ho jaata hun..log mere tareef vaale shabda likh chuke hote hai..
ab mai kya likhun.
bas itna..ki
dil kee baat likh dee aapne. Applause :Clap:
par jiske liye nahi soya use pata chale jab na.
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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2012, 06:00:15 AM »
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बहुत खूब
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2012, 06:17:20 AM »
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Wah!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: July 28, 2012, 12:13:24 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 25, 2012, 10:55:14 AM
dekh meri laal aankhon ko poochha behna ne mere
kyun bhaai 'kya raat bhar ek pal tum soye nahee'
ab kaise bataataa use ki main kahaan khoya tha
jiski yaadon me kho ke main raat bhar soyaa nahee

dekha tha use bus stop pe office se aate samay
dekhta raha use is tarha ki bus pakad paayaa nahee
uske chale jaane par bhi main khoya tha usi me yun
ki ghar to wapas aagaya par usko bhool paayaa nahee

subah ka intezaar tha, fir shaam tak mujhe rukna tha
aayegi is shaam bhi maine khud ko samjhaayaa yahee
subah se lekar shaam tak ek pal chain paayaa nahi
jiska intezaar tha, us shaam wo aayaa nahee

raat ghar jaake mera mann bhi kuch lagaa nahee
uski yaadon me rahaa jisse main mil paayaa nahee
chalo aaj nahee to kal sahee, wo mil jaayegi wahee
na mili jo kal bhi wo to samjhun meri kismat me nahee....

*****HRIDAY*****

bahut khoob  Applause Applause aur ek prize aap k naam...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: July 28, 2012, 06:11:03 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Kapil Bhai.. Behad Umda Peshkash hai.. dil ko chhoo jaane wali.. Applause Applause Applause



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«Reply #11 on: August 02, 2012, 03:09:08 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on July 25, 2012, 11:17:01 AM
wah waah waah ati sunder
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«Reply #12 on: August 06, 2012, 12:34:29 PM »
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Kyun sharminda kar rahe hain.. aap khud kitna achcha likhte hain aur keh rahe hain mujhse ki main aapko soch dun.. Usual Smile.... itne khoobsurat comments ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaa K_A ji....!!!

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 25, 2012, 09:39:29 PM
       kuch alfaaz aur soach mujhe bhi de do bhai hriday. aap itnii achchi nazam kaise itnii asaani se likh lete ho.!!!!

                simply wonderfulllllllllllllll
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«Reply #13 on: August 06, 2012, 02:30:00 PM »
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subhan allah..
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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2012, 02:43:44 PM »
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Thanks a lot Hasan ji....!!!

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 25, 2012, 11:27:59 PM
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 BEAUTIFUL !!
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