Raat Hai Tanha Tanha - - - - - - -Ghazal

by riyaz106 on February 13, 2010, 09:15:56 AM
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arac
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«Reply #15 on: February 15, 2010, 06:38:51 AM »
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WAH   RIYAZ106 JI...

CHANDNI RAAT HAI  JAGMAGATE SITARE HAI YAHAN WAHAN
KAASH APNE SAATH KOI HOTA APNI "RAAT HAI TANHA TANHA"...
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #16 on: February 15, 2010, 06:47:53 AM »
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Bahut khoob Cara ji,beautiful lines.
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #17 on: February 15, 2010, 08:26:34 AM »
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shukriya Madhu-di......dil se

Wah wah Riyaz ji and Koyal ji,very touching and lovely gazal.bahut khoob likha aap dono ne.
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riyaz106
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«Reply #18 on: February 15, 2010, 09:27:43 AM »
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Thanks Rishi Ji.
Nice Riyaz JI
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #19 on: February 15, 2010, 09:51:30 AM »
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Bahut khoob Riyaz Ji
N Nice response Koyal Ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #20 on: February 15, 2010, 10:02:50 AM »
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Shihab Bahi aapka bahoot bahoot shukriya ke aapko meri ye creation pasand aai. Sabhi ke topics par aapka hausla afzai ka andaaz bada achha lagata hai.
Quote from: Shihab link=topic=54191.msg1010855#msg1010855
date=1266175843
Bahut Khub Riyaz Bhai..
Matla Aur Makta Mujhey Bahut Pasand Aaya
Dil Ko Chhu Gaya..Bahut Khub... Applause

Khush Rahiye


~Shihab~

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KOYAL46
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«Reply #21 on: February 15, 2010, 10:14:22 AM »
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Thanks Rajesh-bhai...

Bahut khoob Riyaz Ji
N Nice response Koyal Ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #22 on: February 15, 2010, 10:31:38 AM »
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Rajesh ji aapko meri ye ghazal pasand aai mujhe bahut khushi hui. Is haqeer si ghazal ko aapne kisi qabil samjha, meri khushnasibi hai. Aaj kal aap kam nazar aate hain, bahut busy hai kya ?
Bahut khoob Riyaz Ji
N Nice response Koyal Ji
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«Reply #23 on: February 15, 2010, 12:46:09 PM »
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Abr mein chaand nihaa.n raat hai tanha tanha    (Abr=cloud, Nihaa.n=hidden)
Aaj ho jaao ayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha              (Ayaa.n=appear)
Koi saaya nahi, dastak nahi, aahat bhi nahi
Dil nahi lagta yahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Faisla tumne mere baare mein jo kuchh bhi kiya
Aaj bas kar do bayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Haal kya hijr mein uska hua kisse poochein
Kya isi tarha wahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
"Ashna" ye to hai khush fahmi koi aayega
So gaya saara jahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha

Riyaz "Ashna"


Waah Riyaz Sahab kya khubshurti se tanhi ko mahfil mein bikhera hai...
Abtak dil-e-khushfahmi ko hain tujhse ummiden,
Ye aakhiri shamma bhi bujhane ke liye aa..NM..
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riyaz106
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«Reply #24 on: February 15, 2010, 01:03:36 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Doctor sahab ghazal ko pasand farmaane ke liye. Aap bhi koi ghazal post karein, intezaar hai. Fraz sahab ka bada umdah sher aapne share kiya hai. Thanks.
Waah Riyaz Sahab kya khubshurti se tanhi ko mahfil mein bikhera hai...
Abtak dil-e-khushfahmi ko hain tujhse ummiden,
Ye aakhiri shamma bhi bujhane ke liye aa..NM..

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Sahri
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«Reply #25 on: February 16, 2010, 12:30:32 AM »
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Nice
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riyaz106
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«Reply #26 on: February 16, 2010, 06:20:33 AM »
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Wah wah arac ji bahut achha likha aapne. Shukriya bahut bahut meri ghazal pasand aai aapko.
WAH   RIYAZ106 JI...

CHANDNI RAAT HAI  JAGMAGATE SITARE HAI YAHAN WAHAN
KAASH APNE SAATH KOI HOTA APNI "RAAT HAI TANHA TANHA"...
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #27 on: February 16, 2010, 06:38:49 AM »
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Rajesh ji aapko meri ye ghazal pasand aai mujhe bahut khushi hui. Is haqeer si ghazal ko aapne kisi qabil samjha, meri khushnasibi hai. Aaj kal aap kam nazar aate hain, bahut busy hai kya ?

Jo cheez achchha hota hai use achchha hi kaha jata hai
Aap to kamaal ka likhte hain Riyaz Ji
Haan ab pathsaala khul gayee hai
Aur abhi thoda jyada busy hoon
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riyaz106
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«Reply #28 on: February 16, 2010, 06:52:51 AM »
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Well Rajesh ji, duty is first. Bachhon ko padhaane aur achha nagrik banaane ka kaam bahut uuncha kaam hai. Jab bhi waqt mile aa jaaya kijiye Yo par.
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«Reply #29 on: February 17, 2010, 10:08:32 AM »
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Abr mein chaand nihaa.n raat hai tanha tanha    (Abr=cloud, Nihaa.n=hidden)
Aaj ho jaao ayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha              (Ayaa.n=appear)
Koi saaya nahi, dastak nahi, aahat bhi nahi
Dil nahi lagta yahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Faisla tumne mere baare mein jo kuchh bhi kiya
Aaj bas kar do bayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Haal kya hijr mein uska hua kisse poochein
Kya isi tarha wahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
"Ashna" ye to hai khush fahmi koi aayega
So gaya saara jahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha

Riyaz "Ashna"


 
Wah wah wah! Aik behtareeN, purluft, purmaghz aur murassa ghazal se nawaaza hai Riyaz Saheb aapne. Dua-go hooN k zore-qalam aur ziyaadah..... Aik aik sher mein jaadubayaani hai. Alfaaz ki tazyeenkaari dekhte hi banti hai. Khoob likha aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne. HazaaroN daad qubul farmaayeN. 
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