Raat Hai Tanha Tanha - - - - - - -Ghazal

by riyaz106 on February 13, 2010, 09:15:56 AM
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«Reply #30 on: February 17, 2010, 02:08:59 PM »
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Behad mashkoor hun Waqif sahab apka ke aapne itni tawajjo se ye ghazal padhi aur pasand farmai.
Quote from: waquif ansari on February 17, 2010, 10:08:32 AM
Wah wah wah! Aik behtareeN, purluft, purmaghz aur murassa ghazal se nawaaza hai Riyaz Saheb aapne. Dua-go hooN k zore-qalam aur ziyaadah..... Aik aik sher mein jaadubayaani hai. Alfaaz ki tazyeenkaari dekhte hi banti hai. Khoob likha aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne. HazaaroN daad qubul farmaayeN. 
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«Reply #31 on: February 17, 2010, 02:27:03 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on February 13, 2010, 09:15:56 AM
Abr mein chaand nihaa.n raat hai tanha tanha    (Abr=cloud, Nihaa.n=hidden)
Aaj ho jaao ayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha              (Ayaa.n=appear)
Koi saaya nahi, dastak nahi, aahat bhi nahi
Dil nahi lagta yahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Faisla tumne mere baare mein jo kuchh bhi kiya
Aaj bas kar do bayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Haal kya hijr mein uska hua kisse poochein
Kya isi tarha wahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
"Ashna" ye to hai khush fahmi koi aayega
So gaya saara jahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha

Riyaz "Ashna"

 
bahut bahut khoob.....khush fehmi.....ye shabd kya khoob likha aapne..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #32 on: February 17, 2010, 02:31:38 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 13, 2010, 12:23:20 PM
Wah wah Riyaz-bhai bada khoobsurat kalaam hai aapka... Applause Applause Applause

Ye raat ki tanhaayi
Aur Ye lambi judaayi

Sab orr Sannata he sannata hai
Na koi aahat na koi aawaaj hai

Aankhon mai nihaa.n nindiya hai
Abr mai khila-khila sa Chand hai

Faasla kitna bhi kyu na ho darmya
Saath mangti hu chhod sharmo-haya

Ye raat ki tanhaayi
Aur Ye lambi judaayi



kya khoob likha hai koyal......tanhaayi aur judaayi......toooo
good dear  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #33 on: February 17, 2010, 02:39:12 PM »
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Nikhar ji aapka tahe-dil se shukriya, is ghazal ko padhne ke liye waqt nikaalne aur  pasand karne ke liye.
Quote from: Nikhaar on February 17, 2010, 02:27:03 PM
bahut bahut khoob.....khush fehmi.....ye shabd kya khoob likha aapne..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #34 on: February 21, 2010, 11:27:40 AM »
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good going.....keep it up.....
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«Reply #35 on: February 26, 2010, 01:30:46 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on February 13, 2010, 09:15:56 AM
Abr mein chaand nihaa.n raat hai tanha tanha    (Abr=cloud, Nihaa.n=hidden)
Aaj ho jaao ayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha              (Ayaa.n=appear)
Koi saaya nahi, dastak nahi, aahat bhi nahi
Dil nahi lagta yahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Faisla tumne mere baare mein jo kuchh bhi kiya
Aaj bas kar do bayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Haal kya hijr mein uska hua kisse poochein
Kya isi tarha wahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
"Ashna" ye to hai khush fahmi koi aayega
So gaya saara jahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha

Riyaz "Ashna"

 

Bohot Khoobsurat ghazal hai...Bohot Khoob Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #36 on: February 26, 2010, 01:38:54 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on February 13, 2010, 09:15:56 AM
Abr mein chaand nihaa.n raat hai tanha tanha    (Abr=cloud, Nihaa.n=hidden)
Aaj ho jaao ayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha              (Ayaa.n=appear)
Koi saaya nahi, dastak nahi, aahat bhi nahi
Dil nahi lagta yahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Faisla tumne mere baare mein jo kuchh bhi kiya
Aaj bas kar do bayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Haal kya hijr mein uska hua kisse poochein
Kya isi tarha wahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
"Ashna" ye to hai khush fahmi koi aayega
So gaya saara jahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha

Riyaz "Ashna"

 

Riyaz Bhai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #37 on: February 26, 2010, 06:09:45 PM »
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Talat ji aapka tahe-dil se behad shukriya ke aapko ye ghazal pasand aai. Mustaqbil mein bhi aapse hausla afazaai ki tawaqqa rahegi.
Quote from: Celmira on February 26, 2010, 01:30:46 PM
Bohot Khoobsurat ghazal hai...Bohot Khoob Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #38 on: February 26, 2010, 06:12:09 PM »
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Mann ji aapka dher saara dili shukriya. Zarranawai aapki ke is ghazal ko aapne pasand kiya.
Quote from: Mann on February 26, 2010, 01:38:54 PM
Riyaz Bhai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #39 on: March 03, 2010, 06:41:27 AM »
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Thanks Riyaz-bhai....aapki rachna padhte he turant likhne ka mann kiya aur likhdaala.....


Quote from: riyaz106 on February 14, 2010, 02:33:44 AM
Koyal-didi apko ye rachna achhi lagi apka shukria. Aap ki ye on the spot poetry bhi kamaal ki hai. Wah wah bahut achha likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #40 on: March 03, 2010, 06:47:01 AM »
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Thanks my dear Nikhaar-di....your appriciation encourages me very much.....


Quote from: Nikhaar on February 17, 2010, 02:31:38 PM
kya khoob likha hai koyal......tanhaayi aur judaayi......toooo
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«Reply #41 on: June 19, 2011, 06:39:44 PM »
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Riyaz bhai is gazal ki mai jitni bhi tarif karu utni kam hai bahut badiya likha hai aapne aur mujhe ek dam mere halat ki tarah laga mere zajbat likhe hai aapne bahut khub
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«Reply #42 on: June 25, 2011, 10:40:11 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on February 13, 2010, 09:15:56 AM
Abr mein chaand nihaa.n raat hai tanha tanha    (Abr=cloud, Nihaa.n=hidden)
Aaj ho jaao ayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha              (Ayaa.n=appear)
Koi saaya nahi, dastak nahi, aahat bhi nahi
Dil nahi lagta yahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Faisla tumne mere baare mein jo kuchh bhi kiya
Aaj bas kar do bayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Haal kya hijr mein uska hua kisse poochein
Kya isi tarha wahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
"Ashna" ye to hai khush fahmi koi aayega
So gaya saara jahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha

Riyaz "Ashna"

 



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«Reply #43 on: August 08, 2011, 07:40:38 PM »
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