raato ki chubhan........

by purani_jeans_aur_guitar on March 23, 2008, 10:26:24 AM
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  raato ki chubhan dekho kya gul khila rahi hai
  do bichde hue dilo ko yaado se mila rahi hai

  hai ashk kai aankhon mai per sine mai sard chuan hai
  un lamho mai dhali yaado ki jo dil mai tilmila rahi hai

  jismo ke faaslo ko ruh ne diya hai peeche chodh
  ek jaan banakar do jism ashiqi khilkhila rahi hai


.......................@fahi@..........................
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2008, 11:46:43 AM »
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Raaton Ki Chuban Ko Seh Rahe Hain,.
Aapke Bin Dekho Kaise Reh Rahe Hain,.

Dard Chupaate Hum Bhi Apne "Azeem",.
Maloom Ho Meri Haalat Tumhe Isliye Keh Rahe Hain,. sad7

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Bohat ache likhe hai Azeem bro

Raaton ki chubhan se joh jal rahe hai
Ek dard bhari aag se guzar rahe hai
Aapke isqh mein yeh dil diwana hue hai
Kaise kahon ke tanha dil bechain hue hai
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Shukriya Didi,.
And Nice One,.
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bahut ache azeem bro and honey...
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Raaton Ki Chuban Jaari Hai,.
Sitam Gar Ye Raat Saari Hai,.

Kaise Neend Aaayegi "Azeem",.
Dil Mein Jab Beqaraari Hai,.

Tum To Cahin Se Sojaaoge "Jaanasheen",.
Hume To Ye Raat Jaagna Saari Hai,.

Tamannao Ka Katal Kiya Humne,.
Aur Phir Bhi Dekho Ye Baazi Humne Haari Hai,.

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bahut ache azeem bro and honey...
Shukriya Khawaish Ji,.
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«Reply #10 on: March 24, 2008, 10:20:32 AM »
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thanx roja & khwaise...........gud 1 azeem bhai & H R.

aankhon mai hasrate sou,man mai agan rehti hai
saanso mai bekarari ,tan mai chubhan rehti hai

hota hai dil udd jaaye.n banke hawa ka jhoka hum
ye duniya jab raato ko khud mai magan rehti hai

sama jaye tere khwabo mai phir leke dil hum apna
aur dikhlaye tujhe isme tu banke dhadkan rehti hai

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fahi dono he poems kamal@dhamal.wah wah likho hai apne... utna hi payara Lil bro apne jawab likha hai!! Too good!! kuch palo ko kaua haseen khwabo dikha diye!! Bahoot pasand aai apki yah kavitaye!!

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Aap Kuch Likh Kar Jaate To Seekhne Ka Maukha Milta,.
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Raat Ye Kyun Sitam Dhaati Hai,.
Tumhari Yaad Dekar Tanhaa Kar Jaati Hai,.

Ek Tum Ho Ke Aaane Ka Waada Karke Bhi Aate Nahi,.
Aur Ye Hai Ke Dil Dhalte Hi Chali Aaati Hai,.

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