RANGON KI BARISH

by tabassum shakeel on January 13, 2007, 09:22:38 AM
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RANGON KI BARISH


tera wajood hai ya rangon ki baarish hai
main to isame bheeg chuki tu janta hai
jis din pahli baar mili thi main tujhse
tune kuchh aise dekha tha tab mujhko
rang uda tha chehare ka aur pheeka pada
jaldi jaldi mujhko vahaan se aana pada

phir ik shaam ki baat hai tujhko yaad hai kya
tune aaker mujhko aisa daraaya tha
rang pada tha peela mere chehare ka
aankhon me aansu bhi aaker tham se gaye

teri aankho me us pal ik pachhtava tha
tune kaha mera to ye maqsad na tha
maine to bas ek mazaaq tha tujhse kiya
main gumsum si aai kuchh bhi kah na saki

phir ik din main maa ke saath kichen me thi
tu ekdam se aaya aur mujhko dekha
mere bikhare balon par munh bichkayaa
phir dheere se kaha chaand par badal hai
chehra mera laal hua munh pher liya
tune sabse baaten ki aur chala gaya

shaam dhale me chhat par apne aai thi
chaand idd ka dekhna tha usdin sabko
chaand dekhkar jaise hi main palati thi
tu peechhe hi khada mujhe tha dekh raha
bola saath me chaand aaj hamne dekha
tumne upar par maine neeche dekha

main kuchh bhi kahti par usase pahle
do bahen thin jinme main bas chhup si gai
main kuchh bhi na kah paai tu bola tha
saare rangon me ranga tumko maine
aaj to dekho chehra hua gulabi hai
peshaani par mere dahka angara
neeche se kisi ne naam pukara tha
haath chhuda ke tujhse neeche aai thi

usdin se bas tera rang hi hai mujh per
rahun kahin par tera naam hi hai lab par
tu jo aae aankh meri jhuk jaati hai
tu jo jaae peeth teri ko dekha karun
mudke dekhe to main bas phir khil jaaun
sou rangon ke phool se khilen chehare par
saare jaaker tere qadmo me girte
yahi bas jagah ab un phoolon ki hai
tera wajood hai ya rangon ki barish hai
main to isame bheeg chuki tu janata hai.............
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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2007, 10:28:14 AM »
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bahut khoob hamesha ki treh pelay se bhi ccha kehne ki
rawait aap nubha rahi hein  kiya bat hey bahut koob jiiiiiiii
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2007, 12:23:05 PM »
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Bohat Khoob tabassum ji
Daad Haazir Hain Kabul Farmaaye
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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2007, 02:08:10 PM »
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thanx jimmi aap khud bhi bahut achcha likhte hain ...
.thanx humdum  aapne padha aur pasand bhi kiya .......
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«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2007, 09:46:57 PM »
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Very Nice Tabassum
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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2007, 09:00:00 PM »
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Bahut pyaara likha hai di..
padh ke bahut khushi hui..

aur ye lines to bas poocho mat..

sou rangon ke phool se khilen chehare par
saare jaaker tere qadmo me girte
yahi bas jagah ab un phoolon ki hai


bahut pyaari hain...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2007, 08:24:01 AM »
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mere rang hai  ya tere pyaar ka asar hai
aey jaaneman aap hi kehde ye deewna to is duniya se bekhabar hai
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2007, 10:42:11 AM »
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this is the first time i had readed ur creation .............................and really i enjoyed it a lot......................

berang thi jindagi hamaari tere bin................
tum aaye to duniyaan main naye rang aaye..........
ab sochta hoon qaid kar loon tujhe aankon main....
jo dekhe hai khwaab woh sach ho jaaye
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2007, 03:37:28 PM »
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thanx a lot talat .....pinku ye poem likh ke main bhut khush ho gai thi  .......
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2007, 03:39:04 PM »
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Quote from: "HUM_DUM"
mere rang hai  ya tere pyaar ka asar hai
aey jaaneman aap hi kehde ye deewna to is duniya se bekhabar hai

hum dum aap hamesha achcha likhte hain padha hai aapko........

rang kisi ka jabse dil pe yun chhaya
laakh hai chaha phir kuchh nazar nahi aaya
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2007, 03:43:28 PM »
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this is the first time i had readed ur creation .............................and really i enjoyed it a lot......................

berang thi jindagi hamaari tere bin................
tum aaye to duniyaan main naye rang aaye..........
ab sochta hoon qaid kar loon tujhe aankon main....
jo dekhe hai khwaab woh sach ho jaaye


very nice reply  salil.......
thanx salil  for reading this ye poem mujhe bhi pasand hai likhke bahut khush hui thi .......

ye aapke bahut achche se reply ka ek  reply

khwaab rakhen hain jabse aakhon me tere
kahte hain sab aankh gulabi  lagati hai
chhup kar rah tu yun kyun jhanka karta hai
khwaab mera hai sab na bas tujhko dekhen
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2007, 07:45:57 PM »
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Waah ji waah..
Bahut Rangon ki Baarish ho rahi hai yahan to..
Mazaa aa gaya..
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Bahut khoob HumDum ji and Salil ji..!!
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2007, 07:51:35 PM »
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Main bhi likhungi..!!!!
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Khwab tha tera ya Mohabbat ki barsaat thi..
Kal raat ka har lamha bheega bheega sa tha..
Subah uthkar dekha jo maine aaina..
Mere chehre par noor hayaa ka tha..
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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2007, 08:29:30 AM »
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shukriya tabassum ji
aur pinky ji
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