rasta rok lun tera,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,sunil

by sunildehgawani on October 14, 2011, 07:59:02 AM
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yeh akhiri tamanna hai hai akhiri faisla mera
kar ke benaqab tujhe dekh lun rukhsar mai tera
tod doon zamane ki reeti rashmon ko ek din
tere ghar hi ke saamne rok lun rasta tera  
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mkv
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«Reply #1 on: October 14, 2011, 09:25:25 AM »
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Nahi hujoor
Ye to gustaakhi hai. hargij na kijiyega.

Hai ajab tarah ki vahshat tere deevane me
jee na aabaadi me lagta hai na veerane me
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«Reply #2 on: October 15, 2011, 05:39:16 AM »
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bahot ache janaab--
yeh akhiri tamanna hai hai akhiri faisla mera
kar ke benaqab tujhe dekh lun rukhsar mai tera
tod doon zamane ki reeti rashmon ko ek din
tere ghar hi ke saamne rok lun rasta tera 

magar ye khayal badal daalie--
ghar ke saamne rasta roka to fir pitai ho jayegi--
de dana dan-- tongue3

mera personal exp. hai ye
so be
careful
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sunildehgawani
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«Reply #3 on: October 15, 2011, 05:43:10 AM »
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 maan gaye sarfira ji ........yeh gustakhi hargiz nahi hogi ,,,,,lakin ...kya karen dil hai ki manta nahi
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«Reply #4 on: October 15, 2011, 05:47:25 AM »
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mkv sahab ,,,,ek apnapan dikhaya hai aapne aisa kahkar ,,,shukriyaaa ,,,,,,kabul kijiye ,,,,,,
Nahi hujoor
Ye to gustaakhi hai. hargij na kijiyega.

Hai ajab tarah ki vahshat tere deevane me
jee na aabaadi me lagta hai na veerane me
Nahi hujoor
Ye to gustaakhi hai. hargij na kijiyega.

Hai ajab tarah ki vahshat tere deevane me
jee na aabaadi me lagta hai na veerane me
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mkv
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«Reply #5 on: October 15, 2011, 05:50:58 AM »
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Thank u sunil
Vaise Sarfira ji ne jo kaha hai that is just probability..
even ur idea is not bad...but u sh'd've heart like MANJNU. tabhi shayad laila pighle.
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sarfira
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«Reply #6 on: October 15, 2011, 05:57:44 AM »
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maan gaye sarfira ji ........yeh gustakhi hargiz nahi hogi ,,,,,lakin ...kya karen dil hai ki manta nahi
dil hai ki manta nahi
aur iss dil ke karan esi halat ho jati hai--
ke koi hume pehchaanta nahi sad5
acha khaasa naam tha humara !raaz!
lekin !Sarfira! ke siwa koi hame janta nahi
tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: October 15, 2011, 10:28:55 AM »
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sarfira sahab ,,,aapne bhi khub kaha hai


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