ratain

by chitralsony on February 06, 2009, 10:08:42 PM

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mairi tasweer ko tak kay jo ratain tum bitatay ho wo ratain kysi ratain hain/mairi hr yaad kysay neend may tumko hr pal baychian rakhti hain,wo sad10

ratain kysi ratain hain/wo mairi yaad kay ansoo jub takiyay bigotay hain,wo takiyay may chpha kr mun jo ankhain band kertay ho ,maira chehra hi nigahon may patay ho,wo ratain kysi ratain hain,


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Re: ratain

«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2009, 10:26:55 PM »

Chitra Ji, BOhat Achcha Likhte Hi Aap,.

Magar Yaar Ek Problem, Hai.,
Aap Ek Line Likhne Ke Baad Dusri Line Ke Liye,.'
Neeche Aa Jaao. Shayari Pardhne Me Aur Mazaa Aayeha,.

Just You Have To Press ENTER To Go Below,.
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Re: ratain

«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2009, 06:59:38 AM »

Gud one chitra . Keep writing.


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Re: ratain

«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2009, 08:04:45 AM »

Quote from: chitralsony on February 06, 2009, 10:08:42 PM

mairi tasweer ko tak kay jo ratain tum bitatay ho
Wo ratain kysi ratain hain/mairi hr yaad kysay neend may tumko
her pal baychian rakhti hain,wo
Ratain kysi ratain hain/wo mairi yaad kay ansoo jub takiyay bigotay hain,
Wo takiyay may chpha ker mun jo ankhain band kertay ho ,
maira chehra hi nigahon may patay ho,wo ratain kysi ratain hain,

Nice line Chitra..
Toda toda maine saja diya hai...