rate ke mehel banaate rahe..

by pallavi on May 23, 2005, 03:22:24 PM
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roz ek nayi ummeed se ek kadam badhaate rahe,
zindgi rooth ti rahi, aur hum manaate rahe..

na socha tha ho jaayenge is kadar tanha,
har aahat pe tere aane ki aas lagaate rahe..

har ane wala pal hansi laaye lab pe tere,
khud ko teri khushiyon ka saamaan banaate rahe..

nazar na lag jaaye zamaane ki, yaado ko teri,
har mehfil me jhooti so muskaan hum sajaate rahe..

har pal jeene ki chah mein, rate ke mehal banaate rahe,
waqt ki lahre mitaati rahi, aur b- dastoor hum banaate rahe..[/b]
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2005, 03:26:10 PM »
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wah ... Pallavi ji ... bahoot khoob .. lekin yeh agar shayri-e-dard mein post karti to aur bhi acha hota ... Wel come Yoindia !!

intzaar mein bhi muhabbat ka hi nasha hai
jab tak wo na aaye, yeh nashaa banaaye rakhnaa

pairo tale viahwaas ki zamein bani rahegi
bas khwaabon ka sar pe asmaan uthaaye rakhnaa

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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2005, 03:32:52 PM »
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wah wah pallavi!! welcome to yoindia kuddiye!!! :D  wud like to c more of ur poems!

hum tum ji, tussi idhar bhi  :D well done ji!!

 :D
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2005, 03:34:26 PM »
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wah wah pallavi!! welcome to yoindia kuddiye!!! :D  wud like to c more of ur poems!

hum tum ji, tussi idhar bhi  :D well done ji!!

 :D


kya kre mohtrma jha achi shayri dekhtey hai chaley aatey hai :wink:
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2005, 04:24:09 PM »
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thanx hum tum ji & meena ji..
 for liking the poem & as well as for this warm welcome.... nice to c u ppl...
 c u soon
 take care Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2005, 05:38:17 PM »
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roz ek nayi ummeed se ek kadam badhaate rahe,
zindgi rooth ti rahi, aur hum manaate rahe..

na socha tha ho jaayenge is kadar tanha,
har aahat pe tere aane ki aas lagaate rahe..

har ane wala pal hansi laaye lab pe tere,
khud ko teri khushiyon ka saamaan banaate rahe..

nazar na lag jaaye zamaane ki, yaado ko teri,
har mehfil me jhooti so muskaan hum sajaate rahe..

har pal jeene ki chah mein, rate ke mehal banaate rahe,
waqt ki lahre mitaati rahi, aur b- dastoor hum banaate rahe..[/b]


wah pallavi ji,kya khoob entry maari hai Winking .bohat accha likha,welcome 2 yoindia. :D
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2005, 09:33:36 PM »
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Chaar pal ki thi mohobath us ki,
Jaisai mosam badla,
vaisea vo bhi badal gaya,
Peeki, Peeki lagthi hai yea zindagi
Jis pal ka inthazaar tha,
Vo bhi yuhi chal para..........
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«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2005, 07:14:02 AM »
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Kabhi khamosh baitho ge,
Kabhi kucch gungunaooge,
Main uatna yaad aaoonga,
mujhe jitna bhulaooge....
                                 TAUHID A. SIDDIQUI.
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«Reply #8 on: May 24, 2005, 07:24:47 AM »
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Kabhi khamosh baitho ge,
Kabhi kucch gungunaooge,
Main uatna yaad aaoonga,
mujhe jitna bhulaooge....
                                 TAUHID A. SIDDIQUI.
                                Mob. no: 09319054831.
Poora hi likh dete dear. Winking

"kabhi khamosh baithoge,kabhi kuch gungunaogi,
main utna yaad aunga,mujhe jitna bhulaogi,

kabhi khamosh baithoge,kabhi kuch gungunaoge,
main utna yaad aungi,mujhe jitna bhulaoge,

padhoge khat kabhi mere,kabhi tasveer dekhoge,
kabhi hathon me jo likhi hai,wo takdeer dekhoge,

likhogi kuch hatheli par,padhogi kuch kitabon me,
nazar aaunga main tumko,sawalon me jawabon me,

kabhi tum muskuraogi,kabhi ansoo bahaogi,
kisi se kuch chupaogi,kisi ko kuch bataogi,

kabhi khamosh baithoge,kabhi kuch gungunaoge,
main utna yaad aaungi,mujhe jitna bhulaoge-2,

kabhi khamosh baithogi kabhi kuch gungunaogi,
main itna yaad aunga mujhe jitna bhulaogi-2,

mere seene pe sir rakhkar guzari hain kai ratein,
bhula sakti ho tum kaise wo pal pal ki mulakatein,

nayi raton me tum aksar purane din talashoge,
koi chehra bhi mil jaye,mera chehra talashoge,

meri tasveer pekhoge,na mere khat jalaoge,
diya apne sarhane ka jalaoge,bujhaoge,

kabhi khamosh baithogi,kabhi kuch gungunaogi,
main utna yaad aunga,mujhe jitna bhulaogi-2,

kabhi khamosh baithoge,kabhi kuch gungunaoge,
main utna yaad aungi,mujhe jitna bhulaoge."
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«Reply #9 on: May 24, 2005, 11:06:44 AM »
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what a nice poem to get started in yoindia pallavi!!!
welcome.......keep on writing good ones!!!!!!
nice work everyone!!!
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«Reply #10 on: May 24, 2005, 11:19:41 AM »
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roz ek nayi ummeed se ek kadam badhaate rahe,
zindgi rooth ti rahi, aur hum manaate rahe..

na socha tha ho jaayenge is kadar tanha,
har aahat pe tere aane ki aas lagaate rahe..

har ane wala pal hansi laaye lab pe tere,
khud ko teri khushiyon ka saamaan banaate rahe..

nazar na lag jaaye zamaane ki, yaado ko teri,
har mehfil me jhooti so muskaan hum sajaate rahe..

har pal jeene ki chah mein, rate ke mehal banaate rahe,
waqt ki lahre mitaati rahi, aur b- dastoor hum banaate rahe..[/b]


bahut aacha bana hai magar rait ka mahal,..
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«Reply #11 on: May 24, 2005, 02:27:42 PM »
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lots of thanx to allll of u .. Usual Smile  i m glad to c such a warm welcome here./.. really ppl r so nice here.... & thanx for liking my poem frnds.. i wd try my best to give a gud collection..
  Usual Smile
 take care u alll...
 byee
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