Raz-e-Zindagi

by account on April 13, 2010, 12:38:45 PM

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Wo bekhabar es kadar so rahe hai
Ke unke entezar mei hum ro rahe hai
Wo mashgul hai apne khwabo mei es kadar yaaro
Ke hamare khwabo ko wo hamare aanshuo se dho rahe hai...


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riyaz106

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Re: Raz-e-Zindagi

«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2010, 05:19:06 PM »

Nice creation Hashmi ji. Bahut achha likha hai. Lekin ye har poem ka title RAZ-E-ZINDAGI kyon ?


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Re: Raz-e-Zindagi

«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2010, 04:25:46 AM »

Riyaz ji apne kaha ki hum har sher mei Raz-e-Zindagi ka tital kyun dete hai
kyunki har lafz mei zindagi ka raaz chhupa hota jo samajh gaya en lafzo ke jariye se wo samajh gaya warna ye lafz sirf uske liye lafz rah jate hai.
isliye hum raz-e-zindagi ka tital likhte hai...


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: Raz-e-Zindagi

«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2010, 10:32:45 AM »

nice hashmiji. icon_flower


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Raz-e-Zindagi

«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2010, 05:13:24 AM »

Quote from: account on April 13, 2010, 12:38:45 PM

Wo bekhabar is kadar so rahe hain
Ki unke intezaar mein hum ro rahe hain
Wo mashgul hai apne khwabon mein is kadar yaaron
Ki hamare khwabon ko wo hamare aanshuon se dho rahe hain..

Bahut khoob Hashmi Ji


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Re: Raz-e-Zindagi

«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2010, 08:23:23 AM »

Quote from: account on April 14, 2010, 04:25:46 AM

Hashim Ji ... agar aap Main subject likh kar aage Raaz-e-zindagi likhein to reader ko post differenciate karne me aasani hogi....

Jaise

Mohabbat (raaz-e-zindagi)
Tanhayi (raaz-e-zindagi)
Pyar ka lamha (raaz-e-zindagi)


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Re: Raz-e-Zindagi

«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2010, 08:30:47 AM »

Quote from: account on April 13, 2010, 12:38:45 PM

Wo bekhabar es kadar so rahe hai
Ke unke entezar mei hum ro rahe hai
Wo mashgul hai apne khwabo mei es kadar yaaro
Ke hamare khwabo ko wo hamare aanshuo se dho rahe hai...

Bohat achhi lines hai Hashim Ji ... keep it up ...

Hum un ke pyar me kho rahe hai
woh hai ke duur hum se ho rahe hai
Na jaane kyu hum par zulm kar ke
Dil me judayi k beej bo rahe hai