Reet ban jaaye..............Anaam

by ANAAM on July 23, 2010, 11:26:52 AM
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Tujh se milne kee koee reet ban jaaye
Kuchh tujh tak aane ki leek ban jaaye

Sur mile hamaara tou sangeet ban jaaye
Shabd aur bhav mile tou geet ban jaaye

Jab tu usse gun-gunaye tou preet ban jaaye
Kasamse wo hamaare pyaar ki jeet ban jaaye
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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2010, 11:26:53 AM »
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Tujh se milne kee koee reet ban jaaye
Kuchh tujh tak aane ki leek ban jaaye

Sur mile hamaara tou sangeet ban jaaye
Shabd aur bhav mile tou geet ban jaaye

Jab tu usse gun-gunaye tou preet ban jaaye
Kasamse wo hamaare pyaar ki jeet ban jaaye
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«Reply #2 on: July 23, 2010, 11:37:07 AM »
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waah kitna pyara likha hai ANAAM JI AAPNE....bhthi khubsurat
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2010, 12:19:10 PM »
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Bahot achhi kavita likhi hai Anaam ji. Bahot khoob. (duplicate posts are megred)
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«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2010, 05:08:48 PM »
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Aapko pasand aayee jahe naseeb.....
su kahu tamne ghano aanand thayo.......


waah kitna pyara likha hai ANAAM JI AAPNE....bhthi khubsurat

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«Reply #5 on: July 23, 2010, 05:13:19 PM »
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Riyazji aapka dhanaywaad pasand karne k liye........


Bahot achhi kavita likhi hai Anaam ji. Bahot khoob. (duplicate posts are megred)
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«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2010, 07:40:25 PM »
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Bahut khoob anaam ji...
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2010, 10:31:36 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Anaam ji,fantastic creation,excellent icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 24, 2010, 04:58:30 AM »
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Tujh se milne kee koee reet ban jaaye
Kuchh tujh tak aane ki leek ban jaaye

Sur mile hamaara tou sangeet ban jaaye
Shabd aur bhav mile tou geet ban jaaye

Jab tu usse gun-gunaye tou preet ban jaaye
Kasamse wo hamaare pyaar ki jeet ban jaaye
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«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2010, 07:07:05 AM »
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Tujh se milne kee koee reet ban jaaye
Kuchh tujh tak aane ki leek ban jaaye

Sur mile hamaara tou sangeet ban jaaye
Shabd aur bhav mile tou geet ban jaaye

Jab tu usse gun-gunaye tou preet ban jaaye
Kasamse wo hamaare pyaar ki jeet ban jaaye

Nice one........Anaam Ji...kya baat hai.....bahut umdaa rahe sabhi ashaar !
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«Reply #10 on: July 24, 2010, 10:43:07 AM »
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Shihab-bhai hosla-afzhaayi k liye aapka shukriya.....

Bahut Khub Anaam Saheb.


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

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«Reply #11 on: July 24, 2010, 05:44:25 PM »
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Dhanaywaad Brokenbylove-ji......aapkidaad bhi bahut khoob ........


Bahut khoob anaam ji...
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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2010, 06:44:49 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Anaam ji...!!!
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