Rishton Ke Paiband.....

by Preet.Dehlvi on August 22, 2012, 02:41:40 AM
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झूठे रिश्तों के पैबंद लगा
एक जामा सा ओढ़ लेते हैं लोग,
अपनी तकदीरों के अंजाम खुदाया
औरों के हाथ छोड़ देते हैं लोग,
आग खुद के अन्दर जगानी होगी,
लाना होगा खुद के हौसलों में जूनून,
वर्ना खुद साहिलों पर पहुँच,
तुम्हे तूफानों में मोड़ देते हैं लोग.
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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2012, 02:44:32 AM »
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Bahut Umda Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2012, 02:47:33 AM »
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Quote from: Preet.Dehlvi on August 22, 2012, 02:41:40 AM
झूठे रिश्तों के पैबंद लगा
एक जामा सा ओढ़ लेते हैं लोग,
अपनी तकदीरों के अंजाम खुदाया
औरों के हाथ छोड़ देते हैं लोग,
आग खुद के अन्दर जगानी होगी,
लाना होगा खुद के हौसलों में जूनून,
वर्ना खुद साहिलों पर पहुँच,
तुम्हे तूफानों में मोड़ देते हैं लोग.
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2012, 03:17:54 AM »
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bahut acha laga padkar .. wah wah  Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2012, 05:20:05 AM »
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wah bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 10:46:54 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob Sukhpreet ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2012, 01:31:27 AM »
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bahut bahut sunder
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2012, 02:19:22 AM »
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Thank you very much Mkv, MANOJ6568, Suman59, nandbahu, ~Hriday~ and sksaini4.
Thanks a lot for your encouraging words.
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