Roo.h maiN utre ho tUm aazMaa ker dekhaa hai,....

by laaiba on October 29, 2013, 07:08:39 PM
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 aaRzoo main un ki khud ko miTaa ker dekhaa hai
jaa.N leiwaa rou.g  dil koh laGaa ker dekhaa hai

ik sehar saa hum pe youn chaa gayaa raftaa raftaa
chahaton kee aag mein dil jaLaa ker dekhaa hai

go zaraa see baa.t per rooth  bethe haiN leiikin,..
ham ne unkoh kab bhalaa yun maNaa ker dekhaa hai

bas aNaa kee aanch  mein jal rahe hain hum douno
pyar main yun faasLaa kia mitaa ker dekhaa hai,...

saath unkee yaa.d ne pal ko nahin choraa aye dil,.
be wajha jab ham ne unkoh  bhuLlaa ker dekhaa hai..

ab ye taaluq bhi kahan per khatam hou paayegaa,
roo.h  mein utre ho tum aazMaa ker dekhaa hai,..
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2013, 07:25:31 PM »
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Niceee..
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2013, 07:27:43 PM »
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Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!


WaaH waaH waaH jee waaH kia kahne behad khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai jee...
Bade hi khoob sher huye haiN puri kalaam ke...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2013, 07:29:47 PM »
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awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2013, 08:32:41 PM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on October 29, 2013, 07:25:31 PM
Niceee..
thanxx suman,.................
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2013, 08:33:17 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 29, 2013, 07:27:43 PM

Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!


WaaH waaH waaH jee waaH kia kahne behad khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai jee...
Bade hi khoob sher huye haiN puri kalaam ke...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

bohat shuqria aapkaa parwaaz jee,...............
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2013, 08:33:48 PM »
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Quote from: ambalika sharma on October 29, 2013, 07:29:47 PM
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
thnx ambu aapkaa Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2013, 08:56:00 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaah Laaiba ji.. kya kehne...bahut hi achchi ghazal se nawaaza hai aapne... sabhi ashaar khoob rahe... dil se hazaron daad qubool kare..khaas yeh ashaar behad pasand aaye..

bas aNaa kee aanch  mein jal rahe hain hum douno
pyar main yun faasLaa kia mitaa ker dekhaa hai,...

ab ye taaluq bhi kahan per khatam hou paayegaa,
roo.h  mein utre ho tum aazMaa ker dekhaa hai,..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2013, 09:09:52 PM »
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bahut khoob Laaiba ji
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2013, 09:12:42 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 29, 2013, 07:08:39 PM

 aaRzoo main un ki khud ko miTaa ker dekhaa hai
jaa.N leiwaa rou.g  dil koh laGaa ker dekhaa hai

ik sehar saa hum pe youn chaa gayaa raftaa raftaa
chahaton kee aag mein dil jaLaa ker dekhaa hai

go zaraa see baa.t per rooth  bethe haiN leiikin,..
ham ne unkoh kab bhalaa yun maNaa ker dekhaa hai

bas aNaa kee aanch  mein jal rahe hain hum douno
pyar main yun faasLaa kia mitaa ker dekhaa hai,...

saath unkee yaa.d ne pal ko nahin choraa aye dil,.
be wajha jab ham ne unkoh  bhuLlaa ker dekhaa hai..

ab ye taaluq bhi kahan per khatam hou paayegaa,
roo.h  mein utre ho tum aazMaa ker dekhaa hai,..


waaahh waahhh waahhhhh laibaa bahot khoob likhaa hai tumne.... kamaal ki ghazal hai yeh... likhti raho, khush raho

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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2013, 09:24:42 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2013, 09:32:42 PM »
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bahot khoooob, dheron daaad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2013, 09:39:12 PM »
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umdaaaa api ji
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«Reply #13 on: October 29, 2013, 10:04:30 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 29, 2013, 08:32:41 PM
thanxx suman,.................
U r most welcome jii... nd BTW; its Saman not Suman..
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«Reply #14 on: October 29, 2013, 10:59:23 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 29, 2013, 07:08:39 PM

 aaRzoo main un ki khud ko miTaa ker dekhaa hai
jaa.N leiwaa rou.g  dil koh laGaa ker dekhaa hai

ik sehar saa hum pe youn chaa gayaa raftaa raftaa
chahaton kee aag mein dil jaLaa ker dekhaa hai

go zaraa see baa.t per rooth  bethe haiN leiikin,..
ham ne unkoh kab bhalaa yun maNaa ker dekhaa hai

bas aNaa kee aanch  mein jal rahe hain hum douno
pyar main yun faasLaa kia mitaa ker dekhaa hai,...

saath unkee yaa.d ne pal ko nahin choraa aye dil,.
be wajha jab ham ne unkoh  bhuLlaa ker dekhaa hai..

ab ye taaluq bhi kahan per khatam hou paayegaa,
roo.h  mein utre ho tum aazMaa ker dekhaa hai,..


nice,ma'am
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