Rukhsaar...

by brokenbyluv on December 20, 2009, 06:25:41 PM
Pages: [1] 2 3 4 5
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 4006 times)
brokenbyluv
Guest
Reply with quote
Dil k rishto mein ek rishta merra bhi ban gya hai,
merre laakh bachane per bhi koi merri ruh meri utar sa gya hai,
merre RUKH SAARE usi ki taraf mud gye hai..
sanso mein koi bekhudi banke bikhar sa gya hai......

Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #1 on: December 20, 2009, 07:28:25 PM »
Reply with quote
nice lines BBL
Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2009, 07:34:07 PM »
Reply with quote
thnx pooja ji...
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2009, 11:57:36 PM »
Reply with quote
Wow bahut khoob mindblowing creation Geet ji icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause icon_scratch
Logged
cara
Guest
«Reply #4 on: December 21, 2009, 06:05:09 AM »
Reply with quote
KYA BAAT HAI  BOKENBYLUV JI....

JAB DIL MEIN PYAAR KI BHAHAR AAYE
TAB DIL KAHAN KHUD KO SAMBAL PAYE
LAKH MANA KARNE PAR BHI
YEH DIL KISI KA HOJAYE..
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #5 on: December 21, 2009, 06:31:05 AM »
Reply with quote
Very beautiful lines Cara ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
Logged
marhoom bahayaat
Guest
«Reply #6 on: December 21, 2009, 01:17:53 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause
Logged
Rajesh Harish
Guest
«Reply #7 on: December 22, 2009, 05:04:39 AM »
Reply with quote
Bahut Khoob Geet Ji
Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2009, 02:06:31 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya madhuji,marhoom ji,rajesh ji,n cara ji...

cara ji..

ye dil hai nadan ise smjhana mushkil hai,
wahin iska rasta hai jahan na koi manzl hai......
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2009, 07:18:10 AM »
Reply with quote
Nice One Geet JI
Logged
KOYAL46
Guest
«Reply #10 on: December 23, 2009, 11:27:40 AM »
Reply with quote
ATI sunder beautiful lines Geet-di... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Rishto ka kya, bante hain bigadte hain
Etna gehra naa banana koi rishta sakhi
Ki agar toote kabhi tou Dil bhee toote
Bade dard se bhare hote hain ayse rishte...


Dil k rishto mein ek rishta merra bhi ban gya hai,
merre laakh bachane per bhi koi merri ruh meri utar sa gya hai,
merre RUKH SAARE usi ki taraf mud gye hai..
sanso mein koi bekhudi banke bikhar sa gya hai......


Logged
deepika_divya
Guest
«Reply #11 on: December 23, 2009, 02:40:46 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahoot Khoob Geet , Cera and Koyal...Keep it up !

Sargoshi mea tere Khud ko sama lenge!
Tere kehne bhar se hi khud ko Mita denge !!
Eh jaan yuh na kiya kar julam ham par!!!
Teri Muskaam par puri Kaaynaat luta denge!!!!
Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #12 on: December 23, 2009, 04:47:03 PM »
Reply with quote
thnx alot rishi ji,koyal n sophiji bahut hi khoob likha hai aap dono ne....

Merre bus mein hota tou tujhe apna bana leti,
terra hath thaam terri duniya meheka deti,
roka hua hai kuch bandhano ne mujhe..
varna terri ankho ko yu na sazaa deti......
Logged
_Vicky_
Guest
«Reply #13 on: December 23, 2009, 04:58:26 PM »
Reply with quote
Wah Kya Baat hai Geet Ji.. Lajawab Likha Hai aapne.. Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause

Cara Ji, Sophi & Koyal Ji.. aapne Bhi Bahut Pyaara Likha hai Doston.. Applause


Zubaan Se Nahi To Aankhon Se Hi Bol Deta Hoon,
Teri Ek Jhukti Nigaah Pe Duniya Chod Deta Hoon...

Hote Hain Jab Bhi Sharam Se Laal Tere Rukhsaar,
Har Baat Dil Ki Dharkano Se Teri Jod Deta Hoon....!!!




**~** Mann **~**
Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #14 on: December 23, 2009, 05:01:57 PM »
Reply with quote
thnx mann ji bahut khood likha apne..

Kaash uske rukhsaaro ko chhu k uske ansu poch sakti,
uski bechain nighao ko raahat ka lamha de sakti,
merri ankhe bhi nam hai uski judai se..
kaash main usse apne tadpadte dil ki dastaan keh sakti......
Logged
Pages: [1] 2 3 4 5
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 14, 2024, 03:30:25 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.12 seconds with 23 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8508 Real Poets and poetry admirer