Rukhsaar...

by brokenbyluv on December 20, 2009, 06:25:41 PM
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pankshivam
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«Reply #45 on: January 18, 2010, 07:04:25 PM »
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Lijiye koshish kar raha hun galtiyon pe maf kijiyega

Nazaron se nazare milti hain...
Unke rukhsar pe aakar thehar jati hai...

Unhe dekhkar bhul jate khud ko ham to...
Unhe pakar gam jane kidhar jate hain...
~pank~
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«Reply #46 on: January 18, 2010, 07:12:47 PM »
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bahut hi khoob pank ji...

Ek lamha chahiye jisme tujhe nihaar saku,
ek pal chahiye jisme apni mhbt tujhpe vaar saku,
chhu kar terre rukhsaro ko main..
apni chaht terre hotho pe utaar saku......
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pankshivam
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«Reply #47 on: January 18, 2010, 07:22:50 PM »
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Thanks Sihab Bhai
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pankshivam
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«Reply #48 on: January 18, 2010, 07:24:29 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 18, 2010, 07:12:47 PM
bahut hi khoob pank ji...

Ek lamha chahiye jisme tujhe nihaar saku,
ek pal chahiye jisme apni mhbt tujhpe vaar saku,
chhu kar terre rukhsaro ko main..
apni chaht terre hotho pe utaar saku......
Thanks Geetji
Bahoot Khoob Likha Aapne
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #49 on: January 18, 2010, 07:39:01 PM »
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thnx alot pank ji..
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pankshivam
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«Reply #50 on: January 18, 2010, 08:05:39 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 18, 2010, 07:39:01 PM
thnx alot pank ji..
Always Welcome Geetji
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«Reply #51 on: January 18, 2010, 08:07:10 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 18, 2010, 07:56:35 PM
Aapki Mehfil Mein Chalo Hum Bhi Kuch Sikhte Chale
Gustakhi Maaf Ho Ji...!

Ho Chand Pe Jaise Chhayi Kaali Ghata
  Aise Gere Hain Zulfein Unke Rukhsaron Ko

         Haay Dekhkar Bhala Kaise Koi Na Mar Mite
               Shihab, Aakhir Aise Haseen Nazaaro Ko..!

                             (Shihab)

Bahoot Khoob Sihab Bhai Applause Applause Applause
Likhte Rahiye  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #52 on: January 18, 2010, 08:17:06 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 18, 2010, 07:56:35 PM
Aapki Mehfil Mein Chalo Hum Bhi Kuch Sikhte Chale
Gustakhi Maaf Ho Ji...!

Ho Chand Pe Jaise Chhayi Kaali Ghata
  Aise Gere Hain Zulfein Unke Rukhsaron Ko

         Haay Dekhkar Bhala Kaise Koi Na Mar Mite
               Shihab, Aakhir Aise Haseen Nazaaro Ko..!

                             (Shihab)


bahut khoob shihab ji iska jawab phir laut kar dungi...abhi neend ka takaza hai...bye take cre...
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«Reply #53 on: January 18, 2010, 08:21:41 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 18, 2010, 08:17:53 PM
Navazish ,Bahut Bahut Shukariya Pank Bhai
Ji Insha ALLAH Jarur Koshish Karte Rahenge
Gar Zindagi Ne Saath Diya To...
Good Keep Writing
Aur Zindagi Bhi Sath Degi, Don't Worry Bro Usual Smile
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«Reply #54 on: January 29, 2010, 03:53:52 PM »
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Bahut khooooooooooob Likha Hai Geet Ji, Pank Bhai & Shihab Bhai aap sab ne.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #55 on: January 29, 2010, 04:15:15 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 17, 2010, 05:33:55 PM
bahut khoob...Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tum jate hue ek lafz bhi na keh k gye,
vo tou merra nasib tha jo maine jate dekha tumhe,
warna jalti har roz tumhare didar ko main,
aur chah k bhi kuch na keh pati tumhe......


Wah Geet Ji.. Bahut Hi Khoob Likha hai.. Ek Kahaani sa Laga Sab Padh Kar.. Nice One.. Applause Applause
Par Rukhsar Me Itna Dard Bhara Kyun Madam..? Kuch Romentic Ho Jaye..  icon_thumleft


Kuch Der To Palat Kar, Dekha Bhi Tha Humne,
Khayalon Me Phir Haath Mera Thaama Tha Tumne...

Aankhen Chalak Rahi Thi, Lab The Khamosh,
Bheegi Palkon Se Haal-e-Dil Kaha Diya Tha Tumne...

Rukhsaar Se Riste Ashq Rasta Rok Rahe The Mera,
Laut Aane Ko Is Qadar, Majboor Kar Diya Tha Tumne.....!!!



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #56 on: February 12, 2010, 05:26:13 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya mann ji..apne merri alfazo ki gehrai ko smjha uske liye bhi shukriya...



Tum laut aaye merri zindgi mein,
sang tumhare aagyi merri khushiyo ki qaynat hai,
tumhare didar ko tarasi thi itne din main..
ab kahungi tumse dil mein chhupi jo har baat hai......
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«Reply #57 on: February 12, 2010, 05:37:00 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Geet Ji.. Bahut Pyaara Likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause



Khuda Kare Phir Se Koi Aisa Bahaana Nikal Aaye,
Main Aawaz Doon Tujhe, Tu Baahon Me Chali Aaye....

Bahut Tarsa Hoon Door Raha Ke Mohabbat Ke Liye,
Kaash Aaj Mohabbat Ki, Shaam Hi Na Hone Paaye....!!

Aankhon Ke Samandar Me, Dubo Ke Saare Gam Apne,
Kar Itni Mohabbat Ki Yeh Aashiq Ab Laut Hi Na Paaye.....



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #58 on: February 12, 2010, 08:01:28 PM »
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arree waah ji..kya baat hai mann ji bahut hi khubsurat alfaz likhe hai..


Terre har ashq ko basake apni ankho mein,
tujhe muskurane ka ek bahana de du,
loota kar tujhpe apni mhbt ka jahan..
tujhe chahto ka ek anmol khazana de du......
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«Reply #59 on: February 12, 2010, 09:55:39 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Geet ji,Sophi ji,Koyal ji,Mann ji,Pank ji,Shihab ji,Cara ji.lovely lines by all.heart touching creation.keep going.
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