Ruku ya chalu...

by brokenbyluv on January 31, 2010, 04:53:03 PM
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Jaanti hu merri shayari ka title merri alfazo se nhi milta per merre likhe alfazo se main soch rahi hu ki main aage badhu ya RUKU...

Dekhta hai jab koi itne aetbaar se,
kaise bachaye khud ko un ankho k vaar se,
kuch mehsus hota hai uske khumar se..
yu lagne laga hai ki mujhe bhi hone laga hai pyar uske pyar se......
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2010, 04:58:02 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 31, 2010, 04:53:03 PM


Jaanti hu merri shayari ka title merri alfazo se nhi milta per merre likhe alfazo se main soch rahi hu ki main aage badhu ya RUKU...

Dekhta hai jab koi itne aetbaar se,
kaise bachaye khud ko un ankho k vaar se,
kuch mehsus hota hai uske khumar se..
yu lagne laga hai ki mujhe bhi hone laga hai pyar uske pyar se......


Geet.... heading diffrent tha but likha bahut acche se.. ruk jaa ruk jaa...... dear  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2010, 05:00:46 PM »
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thnx malli ji..apko sach mein lagta hai ki main abhi RUKU??
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2010, 05:03:20 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 31, 2010, 05:00:46 PM
thnx malli ji..apko sach mein lagta hai ki main abhi RUKU??

Haan tum abhi bi aur kabhi bi rukhna. Is mehfil mein khushi se ghoomte rehna  love4
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2010, 05:08:19 PM »
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Quote from: malli on January 31, 2010, 05:03:20 PM
Haan tum abhi bi aur kabhi bi rukhna. Is mehfil mein khushi se ghoomte rehna  love4
Maaf kijiyega main kuch smjhi nhi???
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2010, 05:13:23 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 31, 2010, 05:08:19 PM
Maaf kijiyega main kuch smjhi nhi???

uff.... God Bless You kaha.....
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2010, 05:16:53 PM »
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Quote from: malli on January 31, 2010, 05:13:23 PM
uff.... God Bless You kaha.....

ohh thnx ji n thnx alot for ur comments..
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2010, 06:54:18 PM »
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thnx shihab ji...
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2010, 07:19:12 PM »
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Too good Geet ji,mindblowing creation.beautiful lines by Shihab ji. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2010, 07:24:16 PM »
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thnx madhu ji n nice lines shihab ji...
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2010, 07:32:21 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 31, 2010, 07:10:50 PM
Behtar Hoga Agar Aap Thoda Usse Jaan Lo
      Is Waqt Ki Nazaakat Ko Gar Aap Pehchan Lo

         Yun Ajnabiyon Se Raay Lena Thik Nahi Hai
             Bas Jo Bhi Aapka Dil Kahe Usse Aap Maanlo.!

Dil tou janta hai ki vo merre khuabo ka lutera hai,
uske dil mein bhi sirrf merra hi basera hai,
kaise kahu use ki uski maujudgi se subeh..
aur uski geybat se zindgi mein sirrf andhera hai......
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2010, 08:01:21 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 31, 2010, 07:47:54 PM
Bahut Khoob Geet Ji


Yun Khamoshiyon Ke Naa Khud Ko Jaam Do
Thodasa Aap Samajhdaari Se Bhi Kaam Lo

Gar Sach Men Karte Hai Unse Sacha Pyaar
To Phir Be-Takalluf Unka Haath Thaam Lo.!

Main ek aesi uljhan mein hu merre dost,
jise jag zaahir karna asaan nhi,
aaj merri manzil merre saamne hai..
per merre paas use haasil karne wali udaan nhi......
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2010, 04:45:01 AM »
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Bahot khoob
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2010, 05:27:51 AM »
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Good one BBL ji. Chalne ka naam hi zindagi hai.
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2010, 02:37:18 PM »
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to good geet di n shahib ji... icon_thumleft

 Clapping Smiley  Applause    Applause
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