Ruku ya chalu...

by brokenbyluv on January 31, 2010, 04:53:03 PM
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #15 on: February 01, 2010, 12:37:47 PM »
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Jaanti hu Geet-di problem aane k pehle solution dhundti ho tum..... Winking Winking Winking  Winking

Ishq abhi huaa nahi,kiske sapne sanjoti ho tum
Mushibat jo aayee nahi uska hal dhondti ho tum

Umra yahi hai sahi,soch samajhkar aage badho tum
Jach jaye koi tumhe tou Maa se izaazat le lo tum

Jag kya kehega kya nahi uski parwah naa karo tum
Apne apno se jaroor salaah kar lenaa Geet-di tum

Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 31, 2010, 08:01:21 PM
Main ek aesi uljhan mein hu merre dost,
jise jag zaahir karna asaan nhi,
aaj merri manzil merre saamne hai..
per merre paas use haasil karne wali udaan nhi......

Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 31, 2010, 04:53:03 PM


Jaanti hu merri shayari ka title merri alfazo se nhi milta per merre likhe alfazo se main soch rahi hu ki main aage badhu ya RUKU...

Dekhta hai jab koi itne aetbaar se,
kaise bachaye khud ko un ankho k vaar se,
kuch mehsus hota hai uske khumar se..
yu lagne laga hai ki mujhe bhi hone laga hai pyar uske pyar se......
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #16 on: February 01, 2010, 12:40:03 PM »
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thnx alot hashmi ji,riyaz ji,think ji n koyal...
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #17 on: February 01, 2010, 12:50:43 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 31, 2010, 08:23:05 PM
hmhm

Kaisi Bhi Ho Mushkil Ye Raah Dikha Deti Hai
   Achhey Se Achhey Ko Aasani Se Jhuka Deti Hai

        Na Kar Tu Yun Apna Dil Chhota Aey Mere Dost
            Muhabbat Bahut Kuch Insan Ko Sikha Deti Hai.!


Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 01, 2010, 12:37:47 PM
Jaanti hu Geet-di problem aane k pehle solution dhundti ho tum..... Winking Winking Winking  Winking

Ishq abhi huaa nahi,kiske sapne sanjoti ho tum
Mushibat jo aayee nahi uska hal dhondti ho tum

Umra yahi hai sahi,soch samajhkar aage badho tum
Jach jaye koi tumhe tou Maa se izaazat le lo tum

Jag kya kehega kya nahi uski parwah naa karo tum
Apne apno se jaroor salaah kar lenaa Geet-di tum



Aesi raah hai jiska koi thikana nhi,
merri trf se haan hai bus abhi use kuch batana nhi,
usi k hath mein hai apna milan hona bhi..
dua hai ki sab uske apne rahe koi usse begana nhi......
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cara
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«Reply #18 on: February 01, 2010, 12:53:52 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI....

RUK RUK KE KADAM BADA
EK KADAM USKA CHALE
EK KADAM TU BADA..
KAHIN JO USKA EK KADAM RUKE
TU BHI ROKLE APNA EK KADAM..
KUCH USKO SAMAY DE TUJHKO SAMAJHNE KI
KUCH TU USKO SAMAJHKAR AA..
TAL MEL JO BANJAAYE DONO MAIN
FIR KYA SOCHNEKA BADTE HI JAA..
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«Reply #19 on: February 01, 2010, 01:10:28 PM »
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Quote from: cara on February 01, 2010, 12:53:52 PM
KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI....

RUK RUK KE KADAM BADA
EK KADAM USKA CHALE
EK KADAM TU BADA..
KAHIN JO USKA EK KADAM RUKE
TU BHI ROKLE APNA EK KADAM..
KUCH USKO SAMAY DE TUJHKO SAMAJHNE KI
KUCH TU USKO SAMAJHKAR AA..
TAL MEL JO BANJAAYE DONO MAIN
FIR KYA SOCHNEKA BADTE HI JAA..

thnx cara ji n bahut hi pyara likha hai apne cara ji...iska reply jald hi dungi..
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«Reply #20 on: February 01, 2010, 01:19:42 PM »
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TUM USKE SAAMNE WO TUMHARE SAAMANE
1 KADAM TUM CHALO 1 KADAM WO CHALE
FIR 2 KADAM TUM CHALO FIR 2 KADAM WO CHALE
FIR 3 KADAM TUM CHALO FIR 3 KADAM WO CHALLE
DEKHO KITNI AASANI SE DONO KA ROAD CROSS HO GAYA



HAAHAHAHAHAHAHAH............SORRRY
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«Reply #21 on: February 01, 2010, 01:37:36 PM »
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Wah Kya baat hai Geet Ji... Behad Khubsooorat Alfaaz Likhe Hain aapne.. is Kavita Ka isse Accha Title Dooosra Koi Ho hi nahi sakta.. Bahut Khoooooooob Geet ji.. Applause Applause

Shihab Bhai, Koyal Ji, Cara & Amar ji.. Bahut Khooooob Likha Hai aapne.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #22 on: February 01, 2010, 02:05:16 PM »
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he he he he gud one...amar ji..n sorry ki koi baat nhi hai its gud... Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle

thnx alot mann ji...
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malli
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«Reply #23 on: February 01, 2010, 02:14:11 PM »
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Quote from: amarhellboy on February 01, 2010, 01:19:42 PM
TUM USKE SAAMNE WO TUMHARE SAAMANE
1 KADAM TUM CHALO 1 KADAM WO CHALE
FIR 2 KADAM TUM CHALO FIR 2 KADAM WO CHALE
FIR 3 KADAM TUM CHALO FIR 3 KADAM WO CHALLE
DEKHO KITNI AASANI SE DONO KA ROAD CROSS HO GAYA



HAAHAHAHAHAHAHAH............SORRRY

Very funny  tongue3
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«Reply #24 on: February 01, 2010, 02:50:27 PM »
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Waah Kya baat hai Geet... Bahoot Khoob!

Good work Shihab , Koyal, Cara ji.. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #25 on: February 01, 2010, 03:35:44 PM »
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Quote from: cara on February 01, 2010, 12:53:52 PM
KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI....

RUK RUK KE KADAM BADA
EK KADAM USKA CHALE
EK KADAM TU BADA..
KAHIN JO USKA EK KADAM RUKE
TU BHI ROKLE APNA EK KADAM..
KUCH USKO SAMAY DE TUJHKO SAMAJHNE KI
KUCH TU USKO SAMAJHKAR AA..
TAL MEL JO BANJAAYE DONO MAIN
FIR KYA SOCHNEKA BADTE HI JAA..
Thnx sophiji...

Lijiye caraji kuch likhne ki koshish karti hu..aaj kuch mood ban nhi raha likhne ka..

Ek kadam jo vo badha de..
tou tham lu main use..

ek shabd jo vo keh de..
tou maan lu main use..

ek khayal jo vo soch le..
tou naam du main use..

ek rishta jo vo jod de..
tou apni har shaam du main use......
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cara
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«Reply #26 on: February 01, 2010, 03:53:16 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 01, 2010, 03:35:44 PM
Thnx sophiji...

Lijiye caraji kuch likhne ki koshish karti hu..aaj kuch mood ban nhi raha likhne ka..

Ek kadam jo vo badha de..
tou tham lu main use..

ek shabd jo vo keh de..
tou maan lu main use..

ek khayal jo vo soch le..
tou naam du main use..

ek rishta jo vo jod de..
tou apni har shaam du main use......


KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI

USKE KADAM SE JO MERA KADAM MILE
SHURU HO PYAR KE SILSILE

USKI NIGAH SE JO MERI NIGAH MILE
ARMANO KE PHOOL KHILE

WOH BADAEY JO APNA HAATH
DE DIUN JEEVAN BAR KA SAATH....
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«Reply #27 on: February 01, 2010, 05:46:05 PM »
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gud lines cara ji but still it need sme changes...

Terri ankho k us aetbar ki kasam,
ye dil aaj maine tujhpe luta diya hai,
merre paas sirrf the merre alfaz bache..
aaj unhe bhi maine terre naam se saja diya hai......
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #28 on: February 01, 2010, 08:14:51 PM »
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thnx shihab ji..
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cara
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«Reply #29 on: February 02, 2010, 07:09:16 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 01, 2010, 05:46:05 PM
gud lines cara ji but still it need sme changes...

Terri ankho k us aetbar ki kasam,
ye dil aaj maine tujhpe luta diya hai,
merre paas sirrf the merre alfaz bache..
aaj unhe bhi maine terre naam se saja diya hai......

KYA BAAT HAI  BROKENBYLUV JI....

MERE AANKHO PE AETBAR KAR
JO TUMNE MUJHPAR APNA DIL LUTA DIYA
YAKIN KAR MUJHPAR
SAMJHO YE ZINDAGI TUJHPAR QURBAN KIYA...
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