Ruku ya chalu...

by brokenbyluv on January 31, 2010, 04:53:03 PM
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #30 on: February 02, 2010, 10:30:14 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai Geet-di... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Gaddi taiyaar hai bus aankhon se signal girne ki dair hai....

Tere hushn k jadoo mai buut sa  bangaya hai wo
Naa kadam badhta hai naa kuchh b bol paata wo

Khayaalo mai khoya hai, rishta dil say hai jode wo
Tujh par se nazar hatt-ti nahi kaise aage badhe wo

Na kewal shaam, Kar de ab har lamha tu uske naam
Kahe " KOYAL" Yahi hoga uska sab se bada eenaam


Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 01, 2010, 03:35:44 PM
Thnx sophiji...

Lijiye caraji kuch likhne ki koshish karti hu..aaj kuch mood ban nhi raha likhne ka..

Ek kadam jo vo badha de..
tou tham lu main use..

ek shabd jo vo keh de..
tou maan lu main use..

ek khayal jo vo soch le..
tou naam du main use..

ek rishta jo vo jod de..
tou apni har shaam du main use......
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«Reply #31 on: February 02, 2010, 06:39:19 PM »
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thnx alot cara ji n koyal...

Zindgi ko uspe qurbaan main shauk se kar du,
vo jane bhi na aur main uski jholi khushiyo se bhar du,
ek baar merre khuda tu koi ishara kar de..
phir main use apni dhdkno k sath apni sanso mein b bhar lu......
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #32 on: February 03, 2010, 12:38:43 AM »
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Thanks Geet-di......meri lines aapko pasand aayee....

Khuda k ishaare ko kaise pehchaan paogi
Khud chalogi tab he tou manzil tum paogi




Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 02, 2010, 06:39:19 PM
thnx alot cara ji n koyal...

Zindgi ko uspe qurbaan main shauk se kar du,
vo jane bhi na aur main uski jholi khushiyo se bhar du,
ek baar merre khuda tu koi ishara kar de..
phir main use apni dhdkno k sath apni sanso mein b bhar lu......
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cara
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«Reply #33 on: February 03, 2010, 06:33:43 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 02, 2010, 06:39:19 PM
thnx alot cara ji n koyal...

Zindgi ko uspe qurbaan main shauk se kar du,
vo jane bhi na aur main uski jholi khushiyo se bhar du,
ek baar merre khuda tu koi ishara kar de..
phir main use apni dhdkno k sath apni sanso mein b bhar lu......
KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI.....

KHUDA KE ISHAARE SE HI TOH,TU MIL PAAYI HAI MUJHSE
WARNA IK AJNABI KAISE MILTE DOOSRE AJNABI SE..
RUK KYUN GAYI HAI BADA DE PYAAR MEIN APNE KADAM
KHUDA NE MANJOORI DI HAI,PYAAR MEIN APNE HAI DAM..
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #34 on: February 03, 2010, 10:53:04 AM »
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बहुत ही सुन्दर रचना लिखी हैं आपने गीत जी  Applause Applause Applause
अपनी मोहब्बत को बहुत ही सुंदर लफ्जो में पिरोया हैं पढ़कर बहुत अच्छा लगा
गीत जी हम आपके लिए दुआ करेंगे की आपको आपका प्यार मिल जाये
और सभी ने भी बहुत अच्छा साथ दिया है ApplauseApplauseApplause

दो लाइनें हम भी लिख रहे शायद आपको पसंद आ जाये ----

हर किसी की दुवा में एक असर हो जाये
जिससे आप चाहते हो वो आपका हो जाये
ये मत सोचो की वो आपसे प्यार नहीं करता
क्या पता इसी सोच विचार में वो किसी ओर का न हो जाये
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #35 on: February 03, 2010, 11:13:22 AM »
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Thank you aakaashji....

Quote from: @kaash on February 03, 2010, 10:49:54 AM
acha likha hai Geet ji Applause Applause Applause
aur Shihab ji,Koyal ji,Cara ji aapne bhi khoob likha hai Applause  Applause
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«Reply #36 on: February 03, 2010, 11:18:23 AM »
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Good lines Rishi-ji.....colourful lipi mai...

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 03, 2010, 10:53:04 AM
बहुत ही सुन्दर रचना लिखी हैं आपने गीत जी  Applause Applause Applause
अपनी मोहब्बत को बहुत ही सुंदर लफ्जो में पिरोया हैं पढ़कर बहुत अच्छा लगा
गीत जी हम आपके लिए दुआ करेंगे की आपको आपका प्यार मिल जाये
और सभी ने भी बहुत अच्छा साथ दिया है ApplauseApplauseApplause

दो लाइनें हम भी लिख रहे शायद आपको पसंद आ जाये ----

हर किसी की दुवा में एक असर हो जाये
जिससे आप चाहते हो वो आपका हो जाये
ये मत सोचो की वो आपसे प्यार नहीं करता
क्या पता इसी सोच विचार में वो किसी ओर का न हो जाये
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«Reply #37 on: February 04, 2010, 05:51:44 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya koyal,kaash ji,rishi ji,cara ji...aap sab ka sath aur pyar dekhkar mujhe bahut acha laga..aap hamesha yu hi sath dete rahiye aur yu hi merri hausla hafzayi karte rahiye..sach mein apke sath se likhne ka hausal aur bhi badhta hai...tahe dil se shukriya dosto..aur aap sab ne bahut hi acha likha hai..Applause Applause

Khuda k ishare ki pehchaan alag hoti hai,
uske liye mhbt seep nhi usme rakha anmol moti hai,
jise pane ki chah har kisi k dil mein hai..
per uski arzu kayi masumo ko duboti hai......
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«Reply #38 on: February 22, 2010, 06:34:18 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 04, 2010, 05:51:44 PM
bahut bahut shukriya koyal,kaash ji,rishi ji,cara ji...aap sab ka sath aur pyar dekhkar mujhe bahut acha laga..aap hamesha yu hi sath dete rahiye aur yu hi merri hausla hafzayi karte rahiye..sach mein apke sath se likhne ka hausal aur bhi badhta hai...tahe dil se shukriya dosto..aur aap sab ne bahut hi acha likha hai..Applause Applause

Khuda k ishare ki pehchaan alag hoti hai,
uske liye mhbt seep nhi usme rakha anmol moti hai,
jise pane ki chah har kisi k dil mein hai..
per uski arzu kayi masumo ko duboti hai......
WAH KYA BAAT HAI.....BROKENBYLUV JI......


HAM BHI MOHABBAT KO SEEP ME RAKHA HUA ANMOL MOTI SAMAJHTE HAI
JISKO HAASIL KARNE KI CHAHA MEIN DOOBNE SE NAHIN DARTE HAI
MOHABBAT KO HAASIL KIYE BINA APNE  KABHI RUKTE NAHIN HAI KADAM
JO BHI ANJAAM HO MOHABBAT KA KABHI PARWA KARTE NAHIN HAI HUM..
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Fakhar e Naveed
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«Reply #39 on: February 22, 2010, 06:42:37 AM »
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Nice brokenbyluv ji
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #40 on: February 23, 2010, 07:42:13 PM »
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thnx fakhar ji,..
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #41 on: February 23, 2010, 07:51:59 PM »
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Quote from: cara on February 22, 2010, 06:34:18 AM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI.....BROKENBYLUV JI......


HAM BHI MOHABBAT KO SEEP ME RAKHA HUA ANMOL MOTI SAMAJHTE HAI
JISKO HAASIL KARNE KI CHAHA MEIN DOOBNE SE NAHIN DARTE HAI
MOHABBAT KO HAASIL KIYE BINA APNE  KABHI RUKTE NAHIN HAI KADAM
JO BHI ANJAAM HO MOHABBAT KA KABHI PARWA KARTE NAHIN HAI HUM..

waah bahut hi zindadili ka ehsas hai mhbt ka cara ji..


Aghaz hu main uski mhbt ka,
main hi uska anjam bhi hu,
vo kisi aur ka nhi ho payega kabhi..
main hi uska ehtemam bhi hu......

Ehtemam-effort,koshish...
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #42 on: February 24, 2010, 02:15:31 PM »
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Uskee koshish-e-ehtemam kaamyaab ho jaaye
Wo sapno mai nahi hakikat mai tera ho jaaye

Duaa hamaari bhee sakhee kabool ho jaaye
Hum ko"Sali" keh k pukaarne wala mil jaaye


Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 04, 2010, 05:51:44 PM
bahut bahut shukriya koyal,kaash ji,rishi ji,cara ji...aap sab ka sath aur pyar dekhkar mujhe bahut acha laga..aap hamesha yu hi sath dete rahiye aur yu hi merri hausla hafzayi karte rahiye..sach mein apke sath se likhne ka hausal aur bhi badhta hai...tahe dil se shukriya dosto..aur aap sab ne bahut hi acha likha hai..Applause Applause

Khuda k ishare ki pehchaan alag hoti hai,
uske liye mhbt seep nhi usme rakha anmol moti hai,
jise pane ki chah har kisi k dil mein hai..
per uski arzu kayi masumo ko duboti hai......
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«Reply #43 on: February 24, 2010, 07:19:07 PM »
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Giggle


Dua hai merri ki terri dua kabul ho,
kyunki terri dua mein merri bhi dua hai,
khuda kare mhbto k silsile ko phir se shuru..
taaki main keh saku tujhse mujhe pyar hua hai......
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #44 on: February 25, 2010, 01:09:14 PM »
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Ab na ruko 'o'sakhee,kardo mohbbat k silsile shuru
Rab ki razaa hai,maan lo aur ishq ki rah par chalo
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