Ruthi He Wo Ek Arse Se .....

by Matrix Guy on December 21, 2010, 01:24:43 PM
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Ruthi He Wo Ek Arse Se
Aaj Muoka He Muje Use Manane To Do

Le Agosh Me Gile Shikwe  Dur Kar Dunga Ek Pal Me
Aa Gaya Hu Unke Dar Par Unhe Bhi Kadam Badane To Do

Ye Hi To Rasme He Ishq Ki Gahraiyo Ki
Aaj Na Thamo Muje Ye Rasme Nibhane To Do

Kyu Karte Ho Meri Mout Ka Intjaar Ee Duniya Walo
In Sasoo  Ki Kadiyo Ko Ek Martba Tut Jane To Do

Aajmana He Muje Aaj  Apni Is Mohhabat Ko
Use Do Kadam Chalne Aur Dagmagane To Do

Anjaam – E – Kahani  To Hume Bhi Pata He Aur Unhe Bhi He
Jo Sunenge Dastan Meri Ishq Ki Unke Liye Ise Dilchasp Banane To Do………………………….


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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2010, 01:46:47 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhhh rajaji wahhhhhhh
kya mastam likha hai ji......
lijiye humne bhi jawab diya hai ab kahiye,,,,,,


Manane aaye hain wo aaj iss andaaz se mujhe
Unhe thode se nakhre aur mujhe dikhane to do

Ek pal me bhul jaungi main sare gile shikwe
Unhe  ek bar mujhe apne seene se  lagane to do

Chali jaungi unke angna main banke dulhan ek din
Unhe zara mahobbat me  kasme wade nibhane to do

Marne ki baat to roz hi karte hain wo  mujhe jalane
Aaj meri khatir kuch aur tadapkar unhe jee jane to do

Aazma rahe hain wo mujhe aaj deke mahobbat ka waasta
Aaj to mujhe bhi unki aazmaish pe khara utar jane to do

Mahobbat ki daastaan apni waise hi badi nirali hai
Logon ko issme namak mirch masala zara milane to do….!!!

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«Reply #2 on: December 21, 2010, 01:51:30 PM »
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wah anamika ji wah.....so fast and so sweet........

kya baat he apki kya kahne........behtreen ji behtreeen .hats off......
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«Reply #3 on: December 21, 2010, 01:56:41 PM »
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Ruhti He Wo Ek Arse Se
Aaj Muoka He Muje Use Manane To Do

Le Agosh Me Gile Shikwe  Dur Kar Dunga Ek Pal Me
Aa Gaya Hu Unke Dar Par Unhe Bhi Kadam Badane To Do

Ye Hi To Rasme He Ishq Ki Gahraiyo Ki
Aaj Na Thamo Muje Ye Rasme Nibhane To Do

Kyu Karte Ho Meri Mout Ka Intjaar Ee Duniya Walo
In Sasoo  Ki Kadiyo Ko Ek Martba Tut Jane To Do

Aajmana He Muje Aaj  Apni Is Mohhabat Ko
Use Do Kadam Chalne Aur Dagmagane To Do

Anjaam – E – Kahani  To Hume Bhi Pata He Aur Unhe Bhi He
Jo Sunenge Dastan Meri Ishq Ki Unke Liye Ise Dilchasp Banane To Do………………………….





Bahut bahut Khoob Yaar!!! bahut Acha Likha Hai.

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Aur bahutttttttttt Khoob Kasak....dil ki ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jawaab Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: December 21, 2010, 02:04:10 PM »
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ajmana hai mujhe aaj apni iss mohabbat ko
      usse do kadam chalne aur dagmagane to do..
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superb line Matrix ji..
lajawaab peskash.
apka yun lahrata hua likhne ka style bahut hi gazab ka hai Matrix ji.
bahut jhakashh really.
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jaa mane le usko jo hai arse se ruthi hui
   lele agosh me usse apni jo hai arse se kuch simti hui
kuch aisa asar chor de mohabbat ki
   apni uss dilruba par
chah kar bhi rok na paye wo khud ko aor
   sharmo haya chor toot kar bikhar jaye wo bhi teri aagosh me akar
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«Reply #5 on: December 21, 2010, 02:08:44 PM »
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thx khwaish ji for liking it.........thx a lot
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«Reply #6 on: December 21, 2010, 02:11:30 PM »
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KB ji.....sach kahu apne jo kaha na laharate huye likhne wali baat......aap is poetry ki theme me utar gaye....ye muje bht aacha laga....pahli baar kisi ne esa comment diya he.....bht khushi hui ki koi utra he potery ki real theme me........thx a lot....i will never forget ur this comment......thx dear
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«Reply #7 on: December 21, 2010, 02:17:45 PM »
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Matrix ji aapko mene jab bhi padha hai ek ajag sa sukoon mila hai..
ek azeeb sa masti hai aapke poetry me..
in ma point of view U R A Blaster of this type of poetry.
so hats off Matrix ji.
Bahut hi joshila love poetry hoti hai aapki.
dil khus ho jaata hai Yaar.
keep writing always
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«Reply #8 on: December 21, 2010, 02:26:21 PM »
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KB ji thx again for encouraging me .....thx a lot.....sach kahu to bas jo dil me wo likh deta hu.....yaha yoindia pe ese ese shayar aur shayara he ki apko kya kahu.....anamika ji, abhi, khwaish ji, rahim ji, abdbundeli ji, mamta ji, nikhar ki, dr. pandey ji, aur kis kis ka naam lu abhi yaad hi nahi aa rahe......ek se badkar ek.....u know inme 2 person sabse different he .....abhi and u kb ji...apki jo 2 liners hote he na wo bht hat ke hote he.....i think everyone is having their own uniq style......realy yaha jab bhi kisi ko read kiya bas padte hi gaya......me inke samne kuch bhi nahi.......but yet i m thankful ki apne mera likha pasand kiya....
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«Reply #9 on: December 21, 2010, 02:46:22 PM »
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hey bhagwaan Matrix ji...
Abhi ji ki to baat hi niraali hai bt Mera naam aapne liya ye to me soch b nai skta tha.
apka sukriya lekin Apne jo naam bataye wo sab to dhamaal hain.
chalo mera likha bhi padhte hai aap sb -- itna hi kaafi hai.
pr aap Jhakash ho yaar.
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«Reply #10 on: December 21, 2010, 04:27:35 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai matrix ji aur kasak ji behetareen jawab pesh kiya hai apne..
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«Reply #11 on: December 21, 2010, 04:39:10 PM »
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Lo hum bhi taariff kar dete hain aapke ess romantic maaffinaamaa kalaam ka.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Maaf kijiyega aapki 7th aur 8th line mujhe asangat lagi....ess ka yahaan hona theek nahi laga.....Pyaar pane aaye ho aur Maut ki baat....naa naa naa

Lagan ho sachchee tou anjaam achha he hota hai
Mann mai ho vishwaas tou man-meet jarur milta hai

Manaane ki ye ada aapki mujhe tou adhuri lagti hai
Dilchasp banane ko kahaani MG kuchh aur Likhna padega






Ruhti He Wo Ek Arse Se
Aaj Muoka He Muje Use Manane To Do

Le Agosh Me Gile Shikwe  Dur Kar Dunga Ek Pal Me
Aa Gaya Hu Unke Dar Par Unhe Bhi Kadam Badane To Do

Ye Hi To Rasme He Ishq Ki Gahraiyo Ki
Aaj Na Thamo Muje Ye Rasme Nibhane To Do

Kyu Karte Ho Meri Mout Ka Intjaar Ee Duniya Walo
In Sasoo  Ki Kadiyo Ko Ek Martba Tut Jane To Do

Aajmana He Muje Aaj  Apni Is Mohhabat Ko
Use Do Kadam Chalne Aur Dagmagane To Do

Anjaam – E – Kahani  To Hume Bhi Pata He Aur Unhe Bhi He
Jo Sunenge Dastan Meri Ishq Ki Unke Liye Ise Dilchasp Banane To Do………………………….








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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2010, 04:45:17 PM »
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Mast reply Kasak-di....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



wahhhhhhhhhh rajaji wahhhhhhh
kya mastam likha hai ji......
lijiye humne bhi jawab diya hai ab kahiye,,,,,,


Manane aaye hain wo aaj iss andaaz se mujhe
Unhe thode se nakhre aur mujhe dikhane to do

Ek pal me bhul jaungi main sare gile shikwe
Unhe  ek bar mujhe apne seene se  lagane to do

Chali jaungi unke angna main banke dulhan ek din
Unhe zara mahobbat me  kasme wade nibhane to do

Marne ki baat to roz hi karte hain wo  mujhe jalane
Aaj meri khatir kuch aur tadapkar unhe jee jane to do

Aazma rahe hain wo mujhe aaj deke mahobbat ka waasta
Aaj to mujhe bhi unki aazmaish pe khara utar jane to do

Mahobbat ki daastaan apni waise hi badi nirali hai
Logon ko issme namak mirch masala zara milane to do….!!!

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«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2010, 07:08:30 PM »
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"Azmana hai mujhe apni iss mohobat ko,
Unhe do kadam chalne aur dagmagane toh do.."

Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat likha hai Dost..!
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: December 21, 2010, 07:11:23 PM »
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Anamika di,

bahaut bahaut khubsoorat..
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