Ruthi He Wo Ek Arse Se .....

by Matrix Guy on December 21, 2010, 01:24:43 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 21, 2010, 07:14:05 PM »
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Matrix Guy,
apne mera naam shamil kiya ache shayaron main..
bahaut abhari hoon main..
Bas seekh raha hoon ap jaise shayaron se..
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #16 on: December 22, 2010, 05:11:15 AM »
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thx koyal ji for this encouragment ji...........apka reply bht bht sweet he ji........aur jo apki shikayat he 7-8 line wali wo bhi sahi he but iske piche kuch reason he ......kabhi bataunga apko.....onmce again thx for supporting me.....
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«Reply #17 on: December 22, 2010, 05:13:38 AM »
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rahim ji and brknlv ji.............

thx ki apko ye pasand aya but ye kya baat hui apne koi reply diya hi nahi.........kuch fursat nikal liya karo hamari housla afjai ke liye bhi .........aap loga ka likha 1 - 2 line bhi reply me mil jaye to post ko ijaat mil jati he ji....again thx a lot to both of u ........
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«Reply #18 on: December 22, 2010, 10:12:49 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on December 21, 2010, 01:24:43 PM
Ruthi He Wo Ek Arse Se
Aaj Muoka He Muje Use Manane To Do

Le Agosh Me Gile Shikwe  Dur Kar Dunga Ek Pal Me
Aa Gaya Hu Unke Dar Par Unhe Bhi Kadam Badane To Do

Ye Hi To Rasme He Ishq Ki Gahraiyo Ki
Aaj Na Thamo Muje Ye Rasme Nibhane To Do

Kyu Karte Ho Meri Mout Ka Intjaar Ee Duniya Walo
In Sasoo  Ki Kadiyo Ko Ek Martba Tut Jane To Do

Aajmana He Muje Aaj  Apni Is Mohhabat Ko
Use Do Kadam Chalne Aur Dagmagane To Do

Anjaam – E – Kahani  To Hume Bhi Pata He Aur Unhe Bhi He
Jo Sunenge Dastan Meri Ishq Ki Unke Liye Ise Dilchasp Banane To Do………………………….


Good One MG Ji
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«Reply #19 on: December 22, 2010, 10:14:24 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 21, 2010, 01:46:47 PM
wahhhhhhhhhh rajaji wahhhhhhh
kya mastam likha hai ji......
lijiye humne bhi jawab diya hai ab kahiye,,,,,,

Manane aaye hain wo aaj iss andaaz se mujhe
Unhe thode se nakhre aur mujhe dikhane to do

Ek pal me bhul jaungi main sare gile shikwe
Unhe  ek bar mujhe apne seene se  lagane to do

Chali jaungi unke angna main banke dulhan ek din
Unhe zara mahobbat me  kasme wade nibhane to do

Marne ki baat to roz hi karte hain wo  mujhe jalane
Aaj meri khatir kuch aur tadapkar unhe jee jane to do

Aazma rahe hain wo mujhe aaj deke mahobbat ka waasta
Aaj to mujhe bhi unki aazmaish pe khara utar jane to do

Mahobbat ki daastaan apni waise hi badi nirali hai
Logon ko issme namak mirch masala zara milane to do….!!!


Very good response ANU
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«Reply #20 on: December 22, 2010, 10:30:05 AM »
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kya khoob likha hai bhaii..
padhkar thoda gudgudi type ki feel huyi..
kuchh antre bade achhe the ...seedhe dil par chot lagane wale..
dher saari daad~

kuchh adni si koshish mene bhi ki~


mere sanam ki chiththi aayi hai keh rahe the kuchh yar mere
unhe kya khabar ishq ki ek manjil hi "Abhi" aayi hai or aane to do~
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«Reply #21 on: December 22, 2010, 10:34:07 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 21, 2010, 01:46:47 PM
wahhhhhhhhhh rajaji wahhhhhhh
kya mastam likha hai ji......
lijiye humne bhi jawab diya hai ab kahiye,,,,,,

Manane aaye hain wo aaj iss andaaz se mujhe
Unhe thode se nakhre aur mujhe dikhane to do

Ek pal me bhul jaungi main sare gile shikwe
Unhe  ek bar mujhe apne seene se  lagane to do

Chali jaungi unke angna main banke dulhan ek din
Unhe zara mahobbat me  kasme wade nibhane to do

Marne ki baat to roz hi karte hain wo  mujhe jalane
Aaj meri khatir kuch aur tadapkar unhe jee jane to do

Aazma rahe hain wo mujhe aaj deke mahobbat ka waasta
Aaj to mujhe bhi unki aazmaish pe khara utar jane to do

Mahobbat ki daastaan apni waise hi badi nirali hai
Logon ko issme namak mirch masala zara milane to do….!!!


bahut bahut badhya reply hai apka anu ji..
dher saari daad~


Quote from: Matrix Guy on December 21, 2010, 02:26:21 PM
KB ji thx again for encouraging me .....thx a lot.....sach kahu to bas jo dil me wo likh deta hu.....yaha yoindia pe ese ese shayar aur shayara he ki apko kya kahu.....anamika ji, abhi, khwaish ji, rahim ji, abdbundeli ji, mamta ji, nikhar ki, dr. pandey ji, aur kis kis ka naam lu abhi yaad hi nahi aa rahe......ek se badkar ek.....u know inme 2 person sabse different he .....abhi and u kb ji...apki jo 2 liners hote he na wo bht hat ke hote he.....i think everyone is having their own uniq style......realy yaha jab bhi kisi ko read kiya bas padte hi gaya......me inke samne kuch bhi nahi.......but yet i m thankful ki apne mera likha pasand kiya....

shukriya bhai~ ab ye bata bhai mere mene aisa kya kiya ha jo tu mujhe badnaam kar raha hai~
me to zameen ka tinka nhai hu ...or tum asmaan se mila rahe ho~
giruga to bahut dard hoga ree~
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«Reply #22 on: December 22, 2010, 10:55:03 AM »
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" behtareen nagma Matrix ji"
""uske deedaar ko tarasta hoon
          manaunga kaise
chehre me hi kho jaunga zulfo ko
           sahlaunga kaise
lafz saath nhi dete band juba se usko
           manaunga kaise
zara uski nigahon ka nasha ab utarne to do
          toofan e dil ke lahron ko zara thamne to do
ruthe yaar ko zara sa aur tadapne to do
           armaan e dil uska ke manaunga mai
uske armaano ko zara sa aur machalne to do""
*thanx*
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«Reply #23 on: December 22, 2010, 11:03:12 AM »
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bht mast likha hai nirala ji aapne..too gud ji
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«Reply #24 on: December 22, 2010, 11:14:45 AM »
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aisa nhi ho sakta K mam--
mai achha likhna janta nhi aor na hi chahta hu
lekin jahan bhi mast sa nagma padhta hu..
"mhara jiya machal sa jawat hai
hosh hawas sab kho jawat hai
       haatho me kaise bataye kalam kahan se awat hai
       bas fir kya bematlab 'nirala' utpatang likh jawat hai""
thanx K mam
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«Reply #25 on: December 22, 2010, 11:19:26 AM »
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hahhahahahhahah.......to bas aisa hi utt pataan likhte raha kijiye..achcha lagta hai
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«Reply #26 on: December 22, 2010, 11:25:28 AM »
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hmmm Jab bhi maine kuch achha likha wo kisi ko samjh nai aya..
dusron ki kya kahen wo to mujhe b samjh nai aya..sad5
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kabra ke musafir firte hain raahon me
             anjaam ka khauff nhi ab ""
aap iska mtlb samjha do hame ----mai aisa hi likhta hu azeeb sa isliye log hame 'nirala' kahte hain--hahahaha
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«Reply #27 on: December 22, 2010, 12:06:02 PM »
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Maut se  gehra rishta jod liya hai tumne
Kabra ke musafir ban ghumte ho raahon me

Kya samajhna hai aur kyu tumko aakhri waqt
Bas likhte raho jab anjaam ka nahi khauff

Quote from: nirala on December 22, 2010, 11:25:28 AM
hmmm Jab bhi maine kuch achha likha wo kisi ko samjh nai aya..
dusron ki kya kahen wo to mujhe b samjh nai aya..sad5
""
kabra ke musafir firte hain raahon me
             anjaam ka khauff nhi ab ""
aap iska mtlb samjha do hame ----mai aisa hi likhta hu azeeb sa isliye log hame 'nirala' kahte hain--hahahaha
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«Reply #28 on: December 23, 2010, 10:28:06 AM »
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Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Aapne Matrix Ji Padhkar Dil Mein Ek Sakun Sa Mila Humein Applause Applause

Bahut Hi Pyara Aur Sunder Jawab Diya Hai Aapne Kasak Ji Accha Lga Hume Padhkar Applause Applause

Bahut Khub Nirala JI Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: December 24, 2010, 12:55:07 PM »
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thx nirala ji, abhi and rishi ji
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