Saare Khwaab Rezaa Ho Gaye..!!...Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on May 14, 2013, 04:20:43 PM
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Saare Khwaab Rezaa Ho Gaye,
Kyu Hum Tum Judaa Ho Gaye..!!

Bichad Kar Aap Se Lage Jaise,
Khud Se Bhi Tanhaa Ho Gaye..!!

Ruth Gayi Taqdeer Bhi Jab Se,
Aap Mujh Se Khafaa Ho Gaye..!!

YeH Kaisi Judaai Hai Sanam,
Hum Kyaa Se Kyaa Ho Gaye..!!

Meri Mohabbat Meri Ibadat Hai,
Aap Hi Mere Khudaa Ho Gaye..!!

Bin Aap Kuch Nahi YeH Zindagi,
Ishq MeiN Hum Fanaa Ho Gaye..!!

Shireen Hakani
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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2013, 04:44:30 PM »
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Saare Khwaab Rezaa Ho Gaye,
Kyu Hum Tum Judaa Ho Gaye..!!

Bichad Kar Aap Se Lage Jaise,
Khud Se Bhi Tanhaa Ho Gaye..!!

Ruth Gayi Taqdeer Bhi Jab Se,
Aap Mujh Se Khafaa Ho Gaye..!!

YeH Kaisi Judaai Hai Sanam,
Hum Kyaa Se Kyaa Ho Gaye..!!

Pyaar Hi Meri Ibaadat Aur Aap,
Mohabbat Ke Khudaa Ho Gaye..!!

Bin Aap Kuch Nahi YeH Zindagi,
Ishq MeiN Hum Fanaa Ho Gaye..!!

Shireen Hakani


Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob Shireen jee..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan..

Har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab

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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2013, 04:48:41 PM »
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Astaghfirullah...
Yakin Nahi Hota Ye Ek Muslim Ne Likha Hai.
Shireen Ji Khuda Ke Liye Shirq Se Bachiye.
Ek Naapak Qatre Se Paida Hua Insan Us Pak
Khuda Ke Baraabar Kabhi Nahi Ho Sakta.

Yeh Jo Sihrq-o-Bid'at Tum Ay Yaar Kar Rahe Ho
Mat Bhulo Ki Apni Hi Jaan Pe War Kar Rahe Ho.

Jaane Kyon Naapak Qatre Se Paida Hue Insan Ko
Us Paak Khuda Ke Saath Shumaar  Kar Rahe Ho.



Ho Sakta Hai Mere Samjhane Ka Tarika Ghalat Ho
Par Baat Ghalat Nahi Hai Ji...Meri Baat Buri Lagi Ho
To Maafi Chahta hoon


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #3 on: May 14, 2013, 05:08:52 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: May 14, 2013, 05:49:08 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 14, 2013, 05:56:26 PM »
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Shireen Sahibaa Aadaab....!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob, badi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne.... Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN Shihab sahaab ki baat par us sher ko badal dijiye... BaNdoN ko khudaa nahi banate .... Usual Smile


Likhati rahiye... Aati rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2013, 06:19:08 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2013, 06:30:50 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Shireenji,
very nice,Very emotional ghazal.Mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2013, 06:35:24 PM »
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Saare Khwaab Rezaa Ho Gaye,
Kyu Hum Tum Judaa Ho Gaye..!!

Bichad Kar Aap Se Lage Jaise,
Khud Se Bhi Tanhaa Ho Gaye..!!

Ruth Gayi Taqdeer Bhi Jab Se,
Aap Mujh Se Khafaa Ho Gaye..!!

YeH Kaisi Judaai Hai Sanam,
Hum Kyaa Se Kyaa Ho Gaye..!!

WAAH WAAH BOHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI SHIREEN JI
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2013, 07:48:17 PM »
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Hume yeh Bahut Pasand aayi, Nice Write up Shireen ji  happy3
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«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2013, 09:08:10 PM »
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Pyaar Hi Meri Ibaadat Aur Aap,
Mohabbat Ke Khudaa Ho Gaye..!!

In do lines ko skip kardein to .aapki gazal bahot acchi hai..
Deen k nazariye se ye 2 lines theek nahi hain..

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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2013, 09:26:29 PM »
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Saare Khwaab Rezaa Ho Gaye,
Kyu Hum Tum Judaa Ho Gaye..!!

Bichad Kar Aap Se Lage Jaise,
Khud Se Bhi Tanhaa Ho Gaye..!!

Ruth Gayi Taqdeer Bhi Jab Se,
Aap Mujh Se Khafaa Ho Gaye..!!

YeH Kaisi Judaai Hai Sanam,
Hum Kyaa Se Kyaa Ho Gaye..!!

Pyaar Hi Meri Ibaadat Aur Aap,
Mohabbat Ke Khudaa Ho Gaye..!!

Bin Aap Kuch Nahi YeH Zindagi,
Ishq MeiN Hum Fanaa Ho Gaye..!!

Shireen Hakani

dil ke jazbat ache hain shirin ji ,.......daad,........
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«Reply #12 on: May 15, 2013, 01:19:46 AM »
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Saare Khwaab Rezaa Ho Gaye,
Kyu Hum Tum Judaa Ho Gaye..!!

Bichad Kar Aap Se Lage Jaise,
Khud Se Bhi Tanhaa Ho Gaye..!!

Ruth Gayi Taqdeer Bhi Jab Se,
Aap Mujh Se Khafaa Ho Gaye..!!

YeH Kaisi Judaai Hai Sanam,
Hum Kyaa Se Kyaa Ho Gaye..!!

Meri Mohabbat Meri Ibadat Hai,
Aap Hi Mere Khudaa Ho Gaye..!!

Bin Aap Kuch Nahi YeH Zindagi,
Ishq MeiN Hum Fanaa Ho Gaye..!!

Shireen Hakani


Waah! aapke jazbe,paqeeza soch aur poetry ko is level tak samajhne aur use is sufiyaana andaaz me likhne ke liye meri taraf se dili daad qubool karen.
awesome poetry,har sher aala hai!

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kuch arz karunga!


unki sada jo dil ne sahar ko suni
aakhon me khwaab taaza ho gaye


labon pe jo tarannum sa usne rakha
pyaase dariya bhi maikada ho gaye


gham ki baat mujhe yaad aati nahi
taraane jo dhadkan ka sahara ho gaye

bhool karna dunia ki fitrat hai
is kadar muaaf kia saadaa ho gaye
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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2013, 09:35:43 AM »
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Bhut khub ji
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«Reply #14 on: May 16, 2013, 04:22:32 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob Shireen jee..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan..

Har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab

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Thanq So Much Khwahish Jee!
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