Saaya

by Maira on December 11, 2007, 12:03:44 AM
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Tujhe Apna Saaya banakar chal bhi lun main,,,
Par darr kuch Yun lagta hai ki,,
Saaye bhi chodd jaatey hain Andheron main.....
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2007, 02:38:41 AM »
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hmm .. nice start but adhuri si lagi..
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2007, 10:50:13 AM »
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Nice....Keep it up !
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Shikha12
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2007, 09:20:50 AM »
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Good Work Maira.. Usual Smile
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diya_barsat
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«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2007, 09:30:34 AM »
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Nice one loved it
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Maira
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2007, 10:56:14 PM »
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Bohot shukriya sabhi ka.,,,ye adhuri hai aur shayaad mere liye rahegi hamesha kyunki ye khud meri sabse pehli shayari hai and jissey main hamesha yaad rakhungi
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2007, 11:09:13 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai.. aur jahan tak adhurepan ka sawal hai

Voh kahte hain ke hamari baat adhuri hain
  jan-e-man hamare lafzo ki lakeeren poori hain
tumne dekha hi nahi tabhi to ye doori hain
  ab kaise kahen bagair tumhare ye sanse bhi adhuri hain
 
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2007, 11:12:06 PM »
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Maira, Mask

Bahut khoob ! Nice going Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: December 14, 2007, 11:14:09 PM »
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thank you mitra Rajbir.
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Maira
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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2007, 11:19:56 PM »
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Thnx rajbir and very nice,,mask..bohot achha likha hai appne,,aur sahi maney main matlab samjhaya mere adhure se lafzon ka Usual Smile
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