-----/// Saazish ///------Hriday

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tumhaare  aate  hi jamke   baras  jaanaa, boondon  ki   saazish hai
tumhaari khushboo  mein   mehek  jaanaa,  phoolon  ki saazish hai

yun to nashaa  chadh  paayaa  nahi mujhpe kabhi sharaab kaa bhi
magar  tumhaare  aate  hi  behek  jaanaa,  zaroor  koi  saazish hai

maine kadmon ko ladkhadaane se kab se sambhaale rakhaa thaa
tumhaare  aate  hi   meraa   gir  jaanaa, in  kadmon  ki  saazish hai

baandhe  rakhaa  thaa  maine  apne  dil  ko  naa  udd  jaaye  kahin
dekh  tumhe  is   kaa   lut  jaanaa, haseen  aankhon  ki saazish hai

saazish   hai  ab  to   har   taraf, har  dishaa   mein, hawaaon   mein
mujhe apne sangh  udaa  ke  le jaanaa, in  hawaaon  ki saazish hai

jaantaa hoon main kasoor yeh meraa nahi hai tumpe mar mitnaa
meraa tumse mohabbat  ho  jaanaa, bataao naa kiski  saazish hai


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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2013, 11:06:12 PM »
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jazba e ishq mein doobe aashaar par daad Hriday ji
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 :clap:Bahut Khoob. Hriday ji Kavi na sahi, magar Shayar to zaroor hain.
Ghazal ki line 'Sazish hai ab to har taraf,...' bahut pasand aaye.
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa....!!!

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:clap:Bahut Khoob. Hriday ji Kavi na sahi, magar Shayar to zaroor hain.
Ghazal ki line 'Sazish hai ab to har taraf,...' bahut pasand aaye.
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maine kadmon ko ladkhadaane se kab se sambhaale rakhaa thaa
tumhaare  aate  hi   meraa   gir  jaanaa, in  kadmon  ki  saazish hai

baandhe  rakhaa  thaa  maine  apne  dil  ko  naa  udd  jaaye  kahin
dekh  tumhe  is   kaa   lut  jaanaa, haseen  aankhon  ki saazish hai

Achcha achcha likhkar hame padhne par majboor karna yeh aapki saazish hai hriday ji.. behad khoooooooooooob... achchi saazish hai.. dili mubarakbad qubool kariye...
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yun to nashaa  chadh  paayaa  nahi mujhpe kabhi sharaab kaa bhi
magar  tumhaare  aate  hi  behek  jaanaa,  zaroor  koi  saazish hai

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bahut bahut shukriyaa Aqsh ji....!!!

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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

maine kadmon ko ladkhadaane se kab se sambhaale rakhaa thaa
tumhaare  aate  hi   meraa   gir  jaanaa, in  kadmon  ki  saazish hai

baandhe  rakhaa  thaa  maine  apne  dil  ko  naa  udd  jaaye  kahin
dekh  tumhe  is   kaa   lut  jaanaa, haseen  aankhon  ki saazish hai

Achcha achcha likhkar hame padhne par majboor karna yeh aapki saazish hai hriday ji.. behad khoooooooooooob... achchi saazish hai.. dili mubarakbad qubool kariye...
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Sudhir ji....!!!

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yun to nashaa  chadh  paayaa  nahi mujhpe kabhi sharaab kaa bhi
magar  tumhaare  aate  hi  behek  jaanaa,  zaroor  koi  saazish hai

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nandbahu ji....!!!

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