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<>*Sab kuch bhul gai hun*<> [/color] Subah ki pehli kiran k sath
Kholkar nind se bhaari palkein
Ek nazar tere chehre ko nihaara maine
Kitne maasum lag rahe the tum
Khhwaabon me khoye hue
Jaise koi nasamjh bachcha
Pariyon k sapno me khoya ho
Wahi maasum si adhkhili muskaan
Tumhare hothon pe saji hai
Meri saree ka pallu ab bhi
Waise hi daba hai
Tumhare badan k neeche
Aaj bhi usi tarah tumne
Mujhe baahon me liya hai
Aaj fir tumko dekhkar
Main mugdh ho gai hun
Tumhare is pyar par
Aaj fir main tumme khokar
Sab kuch bhul gai hun……..!!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 20, 2010, 02:40:51 AM » |
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji... !!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 20, 2010, 04:23:35 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2010, 05:56:01 AM » |
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<>*Sab kuch bhul gai hun*<> [/color] Subah ki pehli kiran k sath
Kholkar nind se bhaari palkein
Ek nazar tere chehre ko nihaara maine
Kitne maasum lag rahe the tum
Khhwaabon me khoye hue
Jaise koi nasamjh bachcha
Pariyon k sapno me khoya ho
Wahi maasum si adhkhili muskaan
Tumhare hothon pe saji hai
Meri saree ka pallu ab bhi
Waise hi daba hai
Tumhare badan k neeche
Aaj bhi usi tarah tumne
Mujhe baahon me liya hai
Aaj fir tumko dekhkar
Main mugdh ho gai hun
Tumhare is pyar par
Aaj fir main tumme khokar
Sab kuch bhul gai hun……..!!!
[/color] KasaK Ji.....aapki tehreer ke ehsaas bahut umdaa lage mujhe...dil se daad ! |
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«Reply #6 on: July 20, 2010, 03:26:18 PM » |
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Kasak-di aapki har rachna ek se badhkar ek hai....  Kisi mai itna kho kar jeene ka ehsaas koi tum se seekhe
Tumhaari baavnaaon kay saath udna koi mujh se seekhe
<>*Sab kuch bhul gai hun*<> [/color] Subah ki pehli kiran k sath
Kholkar nind se bhaari palkein
Ek nazar tere chehre ko nihaara maine
Kitne maasum lag rahe the tum
Khhwaabon me khoye hue
Jaise koi nasamjh bachcha
Pariyon k sapno me khoya ho
Wahi maasum si adhkhili muskaan
Tumhare hothon pe saji hai
Meri saree ka pallu ab bhi
Waise hi daba hai
Tumhare badan k neeche
Aaj bhi usi tarah tumne
Mujhe baahon me liya hai
Aaj fir tumko dekhkar
Main mugdh ho gai hun
Tumhare is pyar par
Aaj fir main tumme khokar
Sab kuch bhul gai hun……..!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 21, 2010, 09:58:49 AM » |
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BAHUT KHOOBSURAT PESHKASH HAI AAP KI ANAMIKA JI
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«Reply #8 on: September 09, 2010, 04:18:37 AM » |
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji... !!!
thnx kapil for clapping ..par adhuri lag rahi hai ye taliyan... |
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«Reply #9 on: September 09, 2010, 04:22:39 AM » |
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«Reply #10 on: September 09, 2010, 04:24:05 AM » |
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tere in lafzon se mili hai mujhe nayee taazgi
kaash teri tarah tareef karna har koi sikhe...
thnku gudiya rani...
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2010, 04:49:48 AM » |
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tere naam ki kasak teri shayari mein,
teri shayari ki kasak mere dil me
mere dil ki kasak meri sansoon me
aur meri sansein rab ke hathoon mein.
Kya Khoob likha hai kasak ji
Raahgir
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«Reply #12 on: September 09, 2010, 05:11:04 AM » |
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tere naam ki kasak teri shayari mein,
teri shayari ki kasak mere dil me
mere dil ki kasak meri sansoon me
aur meri sansein rab ke hathoon mein.
Kya Khoob likha hai kasak ji
Raahgir
bht pyare lines likhen hain aapne raahgir ji...thnx for compliment..... |
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«Reply #13 on: September 09, 2010, 09:46:42 AM » |
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Bhool gayee sabakuchh, yaad naheen ab kuchh
Yek yahee baat naa bhoolee, koyal, koyal lawhaj yoo
itanaa bhee door mat jaao ke paas aanaa mushkil ho
itanaa bhee paas mat aaao ke door jaanaa mushkil hotere in lafzon se mili hai mujhe nayee taazgi
kaash teri tarah tareef karna har koi sikhe...
thnku gudiya rani...
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«Reply #14 on: September 13, 2010, 05:42:20 PM » |
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haan bilkul sahi kahaa aapne Kasak ji... sachme adhuri hi thi... pata nahi maine kab ispe comment kiya... aaj padha to laga ki ise main pehli baar padh raha hoon.. pata nahi kaise ye poem mujhse chhut gaya... ab agar bina padhe neend me comment karung to adhuri hi hogi na .. aaj padha to laga ki kuch alag hi baat hai isme.. aapne likha itne pyaar se tha uspe mera itna rukha sukha compliment kahaan achcha lagega aap ko... main sach keh raha hoon aaj maine jab ise padha to laga ki pehle bar padha... bahut pyaari kavita hai... bahut meethi meethi si....!!!
tumhaare is pyaar ko dekh
mujhe bhi pyaar aa raha hai aaj
tumhe baahon me bhar ke apne
fir gum ho jaane ka mann hai aaj,
tumhaari aankhon ki chamak bata rahi hai
ki kitna pyaar karti ho tum mujhse
lagta nahi ki ye pyaar puraana hai apna
lag raha hai meri dulhan ban ke aayi ho aaj,
ye khila rang tumaahare aankhon ka
gulaab ki pankhudiyon se tumhaare honth hai aaj
maang ki sindoor kuch kuch bikhri hui si
aur tumhaari khuli julfon me kuch jaadu hai aaj,
baithe rahon yunhi mere kareeb tum
tum yahin khoye rahon mere khayaalon me aaj
khoke mujhme bhool jaao saari duniya ko
paas mere baith ke yunhi muskura lo aaj... thnx kapil for clapping ..par adhuri lag rahi hai ye taliyan...
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