SABAR-O-TAAB KAHAN (Ghazal)....... "MohaN"

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SABAR-O-TAAB KAHAN

Ishq mein bechainee-e-dil ko sabar-o-taab kahan,
Aankh gar ashq bharee ho to phir khwaab kahan!

Dil kee betaabhi yeh bhi zaalim ek tamaashaa hai,
Bijlee kee karakk mein bhi itnaa izztraab kahan!

Nigahon kee sharam goyee gar koi pardaa nahin,
Nigah jo ek baar uthh jaaye to phir hijaab kahan!

Ishq mein ro ro kar jo aankhein surkh hotee hain,
Shraab pee aankh surkh hoon woh shraab kahan!

Ishq mein woh aatish hai jo aashiqon ko jalaa de,
Jahanam mein mujrim jalaa de aisey azaab kahan!

Unhkaa gol chehraa parhne ko kuchh kam nahin,
Aashiq ke parhney ko iss se behtar kitaab kahan!

Sahib ishq kaa ghar to aashiqon se hee abaad hai,
Unh se behtar milein khaanamaa khraab kahan!!

Surindar. N                             "MohaN"


goyee = unprincipaled; depraved; erring;

Khaanamaa khraab = desolate; ruined;

(I was inspired by the Mir Taqi Mir Sahib's Ghazal in writing this Ghazal.)
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2016, 07:59:15 PM »
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SABAR-O-TAAB KAHAN

Ishq mein bechainee-e-dil ko sabar-o-taab kahan,
Aankh gar ashq bharee ho to phir khwaab kahan!

Dil kee betaabhi yeh bhi zaalim ek tamaashaa hai,
Bijlee kee karakk mein bhi itnaa izztraab kahan!

Nigahon kee sharam goyee gar koi pardaa nahin,
Nigah jo ek baar uthh jaaye to phir hijaab kahan!

Ishq mein ro ro kar jo aankhein surkh hotee hain,
Shraab pee aankh surkh hoon woh shraab kahan!

Ishq mein woh aatish hai jo aashiqon ko jalaa de,
Jahanam mein mujrim jalaa de aisey azaab kahan!

Unhkaa gol chehraa parhne ko kuchh kam nahin,
Aashiq ke parhney ko iss se behtar kitaab kahan!

Sahib ishq kaa ghar to aashiqon se hee abaad hai,
Unh se behtar milein khaanamaa khraab kahan!!

Surindar. N                             "MohaN"

Khaanamaa khraab = desolate; ruined;

(I was inspired by the Mir Taqi Mir Sahib's Ghazal in writing this Ghazal.)

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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2016, 01:36:42 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2016, 01:08:19 PM »
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Mast hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
But i can't understand this line
Nigahon kee sharam goyee gar koi pardaa nahin,
Can u explain it.
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2016, 07:09:41 PM »
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Bahot khub surindarji...
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«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2016, 03:13:14 AM »
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Mast hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
But i can't understand this line
Nigahon kee sharam goyee gar koi pardaa nahin,
Can u explain it.
bahut shukria Mast Khalander Jee. Aapke swaal kaa jawaab yeh hai janaab, lafaz goyee ke meaning main ne ghazal ke aakhir mein daraj kar diye hain. line ke meaning yun hain ke main aankhon kee hayaa ko kahin behtar pardaa samajhtaa hoon. Agar koi hijaab yaa kisee aur pardey ke peechey se koi asoolan galat baat keh de to woh bhi koi pardaa nahin rehtaa hai.
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«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2016, 05:20:17 AM »
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SABAR-O-TAAB KAHAN

Ishq mein bechainee-e-dil ko sabar-o-taab kahan,
Aankh gar ashq bharee ho to phir khwaab kahan!

Dil kee betaabhi yeh bhi zaalim ek tamaashaa hai,
Bijlee kee karakk mein bhi itnaa izztraab kahan!

Nigahon kee sharam goyee gar koi pardaa nahin,
Nigah jo ek baar uthh jaaye to phir hijaab kahan!

Ishq mein ro ro kar jo aankhein surkh hotee hain,
Shraab pee aankh surkh hoon woh shraab kahan!

Ishq mein woh aatish hai jo aashiqon ko jalaa de,
Jahanam mein mujrim jalaa de aisey azaab kahan!

Unhkaa gol chehraa parhne ko kuchh kam nahin,
Aashiq ke parhney ko iss se behtar kitaab kahan!

Sahib ishq kaa ghar to aashiqon se hee abaad hai,
Unh se behtar milein khaanamaa khraab kahan!!

Surindar. N                             "MohaN"


goyee = unprincipaled; depraved; erring;

Khaanamaa khraab = desolate; ruined;

(I was inspired by the Mir Taqi Mir Sahib's Ghazal in writing this Ghazal.)



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«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2016, 09:48:13 AM »
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bahut shukria Mast Khalander Jee. Aapke swaal kaa jawaab yeh hai janaab, lafaz goyee ke meaning main ne ghazal ke aakhir mein daraj kar diye hain. line ke meaning yun hain ke main aankhon kee hayaa ko kahin behtar pardaa samajhtaa hoon. Agar koi hijaab yaa kisee aur pardey ke peechey se koi asoolan galat baat keh de to woh bhi koi pardaa nahin rehtaa hai.
 kermit kermit kermit kermit kermit kermit kermit kermit kermit kermit kermit

Sach (Agar koi hijaab yaa kisee aur pardey ke peechey se koi asoolan galat baat keh de to woh bhi koi pardaa nahin rehtaa hai.)
Asal parda to nazar ka hota hai
Aapki is khoobsurat sonch par 1 Rau pesh-e-qhidmat hai.
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Bahot khoooob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukria Rangila Jee.
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«Reply #10 on: January 08, 2016, 03:03:55 AM »
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Quote from: Shikha sanghvi on January 06, 2016, 07:09:41 PM
Bahot khub surindarji...
bahut shukria Shikha Jee.
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bahut shukria Adil Jee.
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«Reply #12 on: January 09, 2016, 09:38:53 AM »
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Sach (Agar koi hijaab yaa kisee aur pardey ke peechey se koi asoolan galat baat keh de to woh bhi koi pardaa nahin rehtaa hai.)
Asal parda to nazar ka hota hai
Aapki is khoobsurat sonch par 1 Rau pesh-e-qhidmat hai.
Khalander Sahib daad aur rau ke liye bahut shukria.
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bahut shukria Adil Sahib.
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