Sabhi rishte saath hai phir bhi********SH

by S.hashmi on February 01, 2010, 08:08:18 AM
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        Sabhi rishte saath hai phir bhi chalna to akele parrata hai
       Hijr to meri chahat na thi phir bhi dard to sehna parrata hai

         Door talak bahot door talak ..ek shor sa barpa rehta hai
     phir bhi mere andar tak bahot andar tak .. tanhai ka alam rehta hai

             Main to gum hi ho jaaun itan gehra andhera hai
           ek teri yaad ka diya hai jo har pal jalta rehta hai

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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2010, 05:08:17 PM »
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Excellent,marvelous and nice poem Hashmi ji. Tareef ke liye lafz nahi mil rahe. Keep it up.
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2010, 01:02:21 PM »
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Quote from: S.hashmi on February 01, 2010, 08:08:18 AM

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        Sabhi rishte saath hai phir bhi chalna to akele parrata hai
       Hijr to meri chahat na thi phir bhi dard to sehna parrata hai

         Door talak bahot door talak ..ek shor sa barpa rehta hai
     phir bhi mere andar tak bahot andar tak .. tanhai ka alam rehta hai

             Main to gum hi ho jaaun itan gehra andhera hai
           ek teri yaad ka diya hai jo har pal jalta rehta hai

              *******************************************

Waah Hashmi Ji bahut khoob kaha...isi per pesh-e-khidmat aik sher..

Hijr ne dayar-e-dil me andhera kar diya,
Faquat bas yaad ne teri Sabera kar diya.  
 
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2010, 04:58:06 AM »
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******* shukriya ***********

Riyaz ji, Shihab ji aur Panday ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2010, 09:36:32 AM »
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to good hashmi ji..
kee it up. icon_thumleft

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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2010, 08:21:43 AM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on February 02, 2010, 09:36:32 AM
to good hashmi ji..
kee it up. icon_thumleft

 Clapping Smiley   Applause  



*********Shukriya********
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«Reply #6 on: February 03, 2010, 08:23:15 AM »
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Nice Lines Hashmi JI Keep Posting  Applause Applause Applause
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2010, 12:13:08 PM »
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Nice Creation Hashmi JI
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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2010, 07:15:09 PM »
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 Nice Hashmi JI Kush Kahne Ke Liye Shabd Nahi ......
        tearyeyed mai ansu gae
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«Reply #9 on: February 03, 2010, 07:25:52 PM »
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Wah bhayi wah..

Janaab Hashmi,apne toh bohot khoosurti se  bayan kiya hai.
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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2010, 07:28:25 PM »
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Koyi khata nahi, koi wajah nahi
Fir bhi kaantoN se zakhm humne paaye Hain !!
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2010, 07:35:58 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hashmi ji ,Pandey ji,Gumshuda ji,very touching n lovely creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2010, 10:58:11 PM »
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Quote from: S.hashmi on February 01, 2010, 08:08:18 AM
              ********************************************
        Sabhi rishte saath hai phir bhi chalna to akele parrata hai
       Hijr to meri chahat na thi phir bhi dard to sehna parrata hai

         Door talak bahot door talak ..ek shor sa barpa rehta hai
     phir bhi mere andar tak bahot andar tak .. tanhai ka alam rehta hai

             Main to gum hi ho jaaun itan gehra andhera hai
           ek teri yaad ka diya hai jo har pal jalta rehta hai

              *******************************************

Awsome very touchy.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2010, 08:02:30 AM »
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************** Aap Sabhi ka bahot shukriya ***************
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«Reply #14 on: February 04, 2010, 08:33:29 AM »
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 Applause Applause :clap:wah shabab kya likhto ho . aisa he likha karo. Aur bahi ausha lakhena ka liya bhagwaan aap ki madat kara . Applause Applause Applause GOD BLESS YOU
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