sabkuch paas lagta is jindagii mein!!!

by redwhitegang on June 11, 2006, 06:52:52 PM
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Gardish ke is duniya mein dost kaise kaise hain
Samne  kuch , piche kuch aur he kehte hain
Par milke tumse, mithas cha! gayii is jindagii mein
Mamuli din bhi lagne laga khas is jindagii mein
Aab to tera he sahara hain
Kuch bhi nahi,par sabkuch paas lagta is jindagii mein!!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2006, 07:23:04 AM »
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RWG bahut khoob... yeo hi likhtey rahow.... keep up the good work with wonderful smile


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Gardish ke is duniya mein dost kaise kaise hain
Samne  kuch , piche kuch aur he kehte hain
Par milke tumse, mithas cha! gayii is jindagii mein
Mamuli din bhi lagne laga khas is jindagii mein
Aab to tera he sahara hain
Kuch bhi nahi,par sabkuch paas lagta is jindagii mein!!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2006, 10:23:53 AM »
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RWG bahut khoob... yeo hi likhtey rahow.... keep up the good work with wonderful smile


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Gardish ke is duniya mein dost kaise kaise hain
Samne  kuch , piche kuch aur he kehte hain
Par milke tumse, mithas cha! gayii is jindagii mein
Mamuli din bhi lagne laga khas is jindagii mein
Aab to tera he sahara hain
Kuch bhi nahi,par sabkuch paas lagta is jindagii mein!!!


Baas aap jaise dosto ka saath rahe to kalam khud ba khud achcha he chalegi! Usual Smile
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Sonu
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2006, 05:31:01 AM »
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yeo hi likhtey rahow.. humara sath apkey sath hai hameysha per only with good and wonderful posts...

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Quote from: "Sonu"
RWG bahut khoob... yeo hi likhtey rahow.... keep up the good work with wonderful smile


Quote from: "redwhitegang"
Gardish ke is duniya mein dost kaise kaise hain
Samne  kuch , piche kuch aur he kehte hain
Par milke tumse, mithas cha! gayii is jindagii mein
Mamuli din bhi lagne laga khas is jindagii mein
Aab to tera he sahara hain
Kuch bhi nahi,par sabkuch paas lagta is jindagii mein!!!


Baas aap jaise dosto ka saath rahe to kalam khud ba khud achcha he chalegi! Usual Smile
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2006, 09:48:08 AM »
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yeo hi likhtey rahow.. humara sath apkey sath hai hameysha per only with good and wonderful posts...

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Quote from: "Sonu"
RWG bahut khoob... yeo hi likhtey rahow.... keep up the good work with wonderful smile


Quote from: "redwhitegang"
Gardish ke is duniya mein dost kaise kaise hain
Samne  kuch , piche kuch aur he kehte hain
Par milke tumse, mithas cha! gayii is jindagii mein
Mamuli din bhi lagne laga khas is jindagii mein
Aab to tera he sahara hain
Kuch bhi nahi,par sabkuch paas lagta is jindagii mein!!!


Baas aap jaise dosto ka saath rahe to kalam khud ba khud achcha he chalegi! Usual Smile

Hamne to saath manga tha har waqt ke liye
Jab achcha ho to tere saath jasn kare,aur
Bura waqt me cha ha tha tera kandha rone ke liye
Kaha kisike haat me hai achcha bura karna
Wo kismat ka hai baat,ham to sirf likhte hai tere liye
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ranjana
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2006, 10:20:46 AM »
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bahut khub Sonu jaan and RWG ji............. Usual Smile

har lafaj jab mera nazm mein dhala
ek hi shakas thaa woh jo mere samne raha
likhte rahe hum har sahbad bas  unke liye
mera har shabad  pyaar ke sapne bunta raha
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2006, 10:28:41 AM »
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bahut khub Sonu jaan and RWG ji............. Usual Smile

har lafaj jab mera nazm mein dhala
ek hi shakas thaa woh jo mere samne raha
likhte rahe hum har sahbad bas  unke liye
mera har shabad  pyaar ke sapne bunta raha

shukriya ranjana ji! Usual Smile

Aapki lafzo ka wazan jab parta hai mere likhyii ke nichche
Hamme milti hai takat jo hamme aur achchi likhayii ke wor kichche
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2006, 03:40:19 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Shahid bhai...Sonu and Ranju
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mrkotians
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2006, 04:38:25 PM »
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NICE ONE RWG...  AND TOO GOOD RANJANA...

Teri aankhon mein maine aaj
ek kashish dekhi hain,
Dil mein tere main,
beshumar mohabbat dekhi hain.
Chupao tum mujhse teri
dil ki kitni bhi baatein,
teri har khamoshi mein
maine sweekar dekhi hain.
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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2006, 08:27:20 AM »
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NICE ONE RWG...  AND TOO GOOD RANJANA...

Teri aankhon mein maine aaj
ek kashish dekhi hain,
Dil mein tere main,
beshumar mohabbat dekhi hain.
Chupao tum mujhse teri
dil ki kitni bhi baatein,
teri har khamoshi mein
maine sweekar dekhi hain.


bohot khub mrkotians ji! bohot din o ke baad aap ka koi rply mila! Usual Smile

hamari khamosi ko tumne izhar samajh liya
Kaise bataein tum ko is dil ki haalat
mohabbat mein kaise aapno ne daga diya
Kise samaje hum apana, sab dil tod jate hai,
Sajakar apani duniya, hamen akela chod jate hain
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abeera
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«Reply #10 on: June 14, 2006, 09:57:32 AM »
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very nice

tum ne chera hai to kuch aur bikhar jayegi
zindagi zulf to nahin jo sanwar jayegi
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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: June 14, 2006, 10:29:46 AM »
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yeh baate hain nazaro ki nazaro se ki jaaye
yeh raha hai mohbbat ki ruk-ruk ke chali jaaye

abhi toh khile hain mohbbat ke kuch hi phool yahan
kyu na aaj dil se kuch aur shararat  ki jaaye.........
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #12 on: June 14, 2006, 02:09:19 PM »
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yeh baate hain nazaro ki nazaro se ki jaaye
yeh raha hai mohbbat ki ruk-ruk ke chali jaaye

abhi toh khile hain mohbbat ke kuch hi phool yahan
kyu na aaj dil se kuch aur shararat  ki jaaye.........


Teri aankhon me aab sanam ham nahi jhakte
ek baar galti se jo dekha tha,
meri jindagi mein saylab aa gayii thii
Teri issii thairao ki baton se
Meri jindagi mein andherii sii cha! gayii thii
Tune shararat se hii jo dekha tha kisii aur ko
Main samajh baitha ,meri jaan ja! chukii !!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #13 on: June 14, 2006, 02:12:34 PM »
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Good Ones Ranjana, Abeera & RWG....
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #14 on: June 14, 2006, 02:15:09 PM »
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very nice

tum ne chera hai to kuch aur bikhar jayegi
zindagi zulf to nahin jo sanwar jayegi


bohot khub abeera ji!
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