sabkuch paas lagta is jindagii mein!!!

by redwhitegang on June 11, 2006, 06:52:52 PM
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Sonu
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«Reply #15 on: June 16, 2006, 06:59:25 AM »
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RWG ji bahut khoob...

mat dosh do tum keesmat ko....
yea to sab tumpey nirbhar kerta hia...
mat lagow tum tohmat dunia key asulu per jub tum khud hi uney tod deytey hu...
logo ka dil dukha ker khud hi bhul jatey hu...

hum to dosto ka sath deytey hai
phir vo achey hu yea borey hu
bus unko samjha deytey ahi phir vo apney hu yea parayae hu...

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yeo hi likhtey rahow.. humara sath apkey sath hai hameysha per only with good and wonderful posts...

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RWG bahut khoob... yeo hi likhtey rahow.... keep up the good work with wonderful smile


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Gardish ke is duniya mein dost kaise kaise hain
Samne  kuch , piche kuch aur he kehte hain
Par milke tumse, mithas cha! gayii is jindagii mein
Mamuli din bhi lagne laga khas is jindagii mein
Aab to tera he sahara hain
Kuch bhi nahi,par sabkuch paas lagta is jindagii mein!!!


Baas aap jaise dosto ka saath rahe to kalam khud ba khud achcha he chalegi! Usual Smile

Hamne to saath manga tha har waqt ke liye
Jab achcha ho to tere saath jasn kare,aur
Bura waqt me cha ha tha tera kandha rone ke liye
Kaha kisike haat me hai achcha bura karna
Wo kismat ka hai baat,ham to sirf likhte hai tere liye
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Sonu
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«Reply #16 on: June 16, 2006, 07:03:14 AM »
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Ranju sis.. thanks.... bahut khoob sis...


bus ek teyra pyar ka sahara hi to hai ju humey jiney ka maqsad dey rha hai
bus teyri yahi adha to hai ju humey ghayal ker deyti hai
teyri ek surat humey bus apna bena leyti hai
teyri hansi janey keysa jado hum per ker deyti hai...


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bahut khub Sonu jaan and RWG ji............. Usual Smile

har lafaj jab mera nazm mein dhala
ek hi shakas thaa woh jo mere samne raha
likhte rahe hum har sahbad bas  unke liye
mera har shabad  pyaar ke sapne bunta raha
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Sonu
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«Reply #17 on: June 16, 2006, 07:04:52 AM »
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Ranju sis... RWG...Gaurav... Manju... sabhi logo ney bahuat acha likha hai... keep up the wonderful work guys.. with wonderful smile...
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ranjana
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«Reply #18 on: June 16, 2006, 09:29:03 AM »
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shukriya Sonu dear.........bahut khub ...

jab jab chandani muskarti hai
hame hansti hui teri hi murat nazar aati hai
jab bhi dhoya hai shab ne phoolo ke mooh ko
hamko lagata hai ki teri hansi un phoolo mein bikhar jaati hai
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Anushka
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«Reply #19 on: June 17, 2006, 08:08:30 AM »
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Bahut acha likha hai sabnay
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #20 on: June 17, 2006, 07:45:01 PM »
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Quote from: "Sonu"
RWG ji bahut khoob...

mat dosh do tum keesmat ko....
yea to sab tumpey nirbhar kerta hia...
mat lagow tum tohmat dunia key asulu per jub tum khud hi uney tod deytey hu...
logo ka dil dukha ker khud hi bhul jatey hu...

hum to dosto ka sath deytey hai
phir vo achey hu yea borey hu
bus unko samjha deytey ahi phir vo apney hu yea parayae hu...

Quote from: "redwhitegang"
Quote from: "Sonu"
yeo hi likhtey rahow.. humara sath apkey sath hai hameysha per only with good and wonderful posts...

Quote from: "redwhitegang"
Quote from: "Sonu"
RWG bahut khoob... yeo hi likhtey rahow.... keep up the good work with wonderful smile


Quote from: "redwhitegang"
Gardish ke is duniya mein dost kaise kaise hain
Samne  kuch , piche kuch aur he kehte hain
Par milke tumse, mithas cha! gayii is jindagii mein
Mamuli din bhi lagne laga khas is jindagii mein
Aab to tera he sahara hain
Kuch bhi nahi,par sabkuch paas lagta is jindagii mein!!!


Baas aap jaise dosto ka saath rahe to kalam khud ba khud achcha he chalegi! Usual Smile

Hamne to saath manga tha har waqt ke liye
Jab achcha ho to tere saath jasn kare,aur
Bura waqt me cha ha tha tera kandha rone ke liye
Kaha kisike haat me hai achcha bura karna
Wo kismat ka hai baat,ham to sirf likhte hai tere liye


Shukriya sonu ji!!!!!!!!!! :D bohot khub likha hein aap ne...

Jee lete hain Koi humein agar kahe bura.....
Dua dekar usse honton ko hum see lete hain....
Dard ho chahe kaisa,
Zehar yeh chupke se hum pee lete hain....
Rakhte hain bharosa Rab par....
Bas har haal mein muskurate hue hum jee lete hain..........
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Anushka
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«Reply #21 on: June 18, 2006, 01:15:15 AM »
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=D> Bahut khub jenab.... wah!
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #22 on: June 18, 2006, 04:28:45 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai RWG and Sonu
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #23 on: June 18, 2006, 09:45:51 AM »
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Thnx Anushka and Pankhuri ji!!!!!!!!!! :D
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Sonu
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«Reply #24 on: June 30, 2006, 05:25:59 AM »
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Ranju sis shukriya  :oops:
bahut khoob sis....

humne socha hum hi chahte hai aapko
magar aapko chahne walonka to kaffila nikla
dil ne chaha shikayat karu khuda se per wo
khuda bhi aapko chahne wala nikla.


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shukriya Sonu dear.........bahut khub ...

jab jab chandani muskarti hai
hame hansti hui teri hi murat nazar aati hai
jab bhi dhoya hai shab ne phoolo ke mooh ko
hamko lagata hai ki teri hansi un phoolo mein bikhar jaati hai
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Sonu
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«Reply #25 on: June 30, 2006, 05:32:42 AM »
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shukriaa RWG... bahut khoob...

   har geet ko main gaati nahi, har saaz ko gungunati nahi,
dar lagta hai tez hawaoN se, isliye main ghar ke bahar jaati nahi!!!


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Jee lete hain Koi humein agar kahe bura.....
Dua dekar usse honton ko hum see lete hain....
Dard ho chahe kaisa,
Zehar yeh chupke se hum pee lete hain....
Rakhte hain bharosa Rab par....
Bas har haal mein muskurate hue hum jee lete hain..........
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #26 on: June 30, 2006, 05:32:45 AM »
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good one Sonu
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Sonu
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«Reply #27 on: June 30, 2006, 05:33:49 AM »
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shukriya pankhuri sis  :oops:

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good one Sonu
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #28 on: September 14, 2009, 12:46:53 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob RWG ji,Ranjna ji,Sonu ji Abeera ji.very beautiful creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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